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Reviewer: jkinx7 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 19

HAHAHA!

loved that last sentence the most! and that bit about the orgasm's power to kill someone! ROFL. seriously. I was reading this, and had a bunch of people around me at the time, and they all looked at me real weird cause I was LOLing so much!

 

Loved it!!!! I'd love to get more of the family's (aka rest of the Cullens') POV in the next chapter...rather than Edward's...ok so I lied....I want more of both their POVs...totally want to be in Emmet/Jasper/CARLISLE/ESME(OMG)/Alice/Rose's heads toooooo though...that would make an insanely LOLly chapter!

 

hope to read more real soon! get to work carlybabes!



Author's Response:

Haha, glad you enjoyed the chapter. Unfortunately, I'm not going to do anyone else's POV besides Bella and Edwards. I would end up getting confused and writing from the wrong person's aspect at random points. Glad you enjoyed the chapter, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 19

horse shit with burnt hair, lol, so funny but Emmett thinking Bella called him impotent, well what can I say?  He's a beefcake.  We love Em for his beautiful bod not his brains.  :)



Author's Response:

haha, I love Emmett. Stephanie's version of him reminded me of one of my friends, so I am expanding on that here. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lisalou (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 19

Wow! That was awesome. Give us Edward's POV



Author's Response:

Thanks! We'll see if it gets enough reviews for EPOV. Hopefully the bribe will work. haha

Reviewer: right2write (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 8

Whaaaaaaaaaaaat? Uhm....Huh...

Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 19

Beautiful beautiful lemon!  What's next for the Cullen family and Bella I wonder...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review. I'm honestly not sure what is next, but a battle isn't too far away. ;)

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 19

Holy hell- that was awesome! I love your Bella



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 19

Wonderful chapter!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 19

I think good old Jasper needs to have a talking to with Edward about "human traditions" vs. the of vampire mating.  They only mate once, so what's the point of getting married, right?  Jazz could help Bella out with that one! ;-) 

(Ok, I'm kinda just kidding, because I am totally for the pro-marriage message in the saga... but honestly, it seems sort of moot point due to the fact that our little vamps are instinctually monogamous once they meet their mate. I guess Bella just needs to figure out that Edward IS her mate, huh?)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. You are right on both counts: Edward needs to realize the whole marriage thing is a moot point with them and Bella needs to realize the Edward is her mate. Eventually, both will, but I'm not telling how long till that happens. ;)

Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 19

bahhaha oh emmett. :P

reat chapter and the lemon zest was pretty hot. nicely done. great chapter update again soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sexymink (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 19

Yah, more lemons!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 19

“Please tell me I heard you wrong and you just said you were a German.”   

I know they are in danger andf could be killed but I just couldn't stop laughing at Bella.   She is so experienced and lethal yet has a childish way about her that cracks me up.  

“Emmett’s clapping.”     Well, they are making progress. 

 



Author's Response:

haha, glad you enjoyed the chapter, and the inappropriate humor i threw into it. They are making progress, slowly but surely. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 19

yes if I smoked I'd need a cig



Author's Response:

haha, nice. You are by far the best reviewer ever. ;)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 19

Poor Edward.  Does he feel like he's betraying "his" Bella?  t has to be so hard for him because he loves her no matter what.  I hope she agrees to marry him.  It is inevitable.  She can't stay away.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I don't think he feels he is betraying her. In my version, at least, he realizes she is the same person even though she has a different personality. We'll see about that marriage thing, though. haha.

Reviewer: right2write (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 5

oh he was so there, funny

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 19

i love emmet!!! i applaud edward too!!! clap clap clap!! this story is great, it makes me laugh and love the characters more and more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! It makes me laugh to write it, so it looks like we are all having a good time. haha.

Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 19

Oh, I just have to hear Edward's POV for this chapter!!!  I'm glad Edward got his "release"!  A naked wet Edward....sigh....a dream come true!! I'm so glad Bella is back and is slowly realizing this family is where she belongs.  I hope she has to chose between a warm animal and cold human blood and realizes animal blood ain't so bad! :)

Thanks for this chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! We'll see if my bribe of EPOV worked and people review their little hearts out.

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 19

Love the story and excellent chapter. Bella is so quirky and Edward so straight laced. Funny how one naked Bella in a shower and he throws out all this beliefs! Love the story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review. His values were based on women in clothing, not naked in the shower. haha.

Reviewer: if only (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: eoh21 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 19

Sweet baby Jesus this is the funniest fucking chapter yet!  I have already read it twice and am still chuckling about it.  The clapping - I do believe that might be my favorite ending to a chapter yet.  And her committment fears, just hilarious.  Can't wait for more chapters.

Do you think you'll ever get around to a one shot of the Bambi fuckery?  That was my other favorite chapter.  I just love this Bella, she is one funny beotch :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed it. I tried to make it a little humerous. I wrote the Bambi one-shot, and it got denied. I'm not sure why, but I am going to repost it when this story is done.

Reviewer: right2write (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

okay it sucks that she killed Edwards descendant:( But so far I am loving the story.

Reviewer: C9E (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 19

Excellent! I like your idea to use a canon Edward but an original Bella. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Bella will get a little closer to canon as the story wears on.

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 19

lmfao emmett of course he would do that
loved it just wish bella would drink animal blood like try mountain lion instead of a deer
loved the smutt made me a little horny ur good at it that for sure
pls write faster and who cares about values edward get on with it god lol
well until next time

Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review! Give Bella time. She'll stop eating people eventually. haha. Edward's values won't last long, either. ;)

Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 18

Oh yay!  you are over 760 so we get more pantless fun!!!!!!!!!!  hehe  Okay so I am finally caught up and really loving the story.  It's such a good mix of angst, action, and hotness with lemony zests and goodness along the way.  Can't wait for the next update! :)



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks for all the reviews! You rock. Glad you found the story and enjoyed it so much! Next chapter was just submitted, and will hopefully be up soon. Thanks again!!!!

Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 17

Yikes well we don't want the Cullens to die but I am a little late to the party here.  Wow just one more chapter to go and I am all caught up.  Kinda bummed but at the sametime I should be in bed I have an early flight in the morning!  yikes!  I am really enjoying both Bella's and Edward's reactions to everything. :)

Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 16

Well staying up wayyyyy too late reading but it is so worth it!  Man I can't believe Alice barged in on them!  And I love how Bella is keeping count.  Wouldn't we all want to get Edward Naked :)

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