i like mean bella..haha

*HUFFS IN A POUT AND STOMPS PETULANTLY!..why is Bella forgiving him??!..i like badass Bella!..:O..POUT POUT POUT!

Author's Response:

Fear not, she's still bad ass. Thanks for the rate and review!

haha..i love that Bella isn't forgiving him..:D...and i even like Rosalie..haha

"Bella popped Edward's cherry!" I can see Emmet prancing around-in the sun, no less- singing that at the top of his lungs. Poor Edward may never hear the end of it.

Author's Response:

haha, not officially yet, though. Thanks for the rate and review!

I loved this chapter!!! Plz update again soon, we'll b waitin :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks! Next chapter won't be up for another week, though. I'm going on holiday.

Okay, so I like your story. I wouldn't be reading it otherwise. I am not too fond of the current Bella but if I leave that at the door it works. I know people love to review with how good a story is, and this is a good one. But I would like to think that this site is here to help us grow as writers too. There are several miss used words here. Whenever you mean yards it says years. Instead of their it says there and to instead of too. Just a little heads up about that. I have a constant battle over to use a comma or not to. LOL I am in recovery for that ;) Thanks for writing, I know the sacrifice it takes to get it out.

This was an awesome chapter. Between the Germany comment and the dance dance revolution I couldn't stop laughing. I love how she finds Alice to be annoying it's great, not to mention, like always, Emmett rocks.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter so much!

Oh my, that was excellent. Bella's inner ramblings are too funny. I almost lost my coffee on the last part, Emmett clapping, Jesus that was golden! Great job!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Please don't burn yourself with coffee, though. haha.

I just love how Emmett Is just Emmett
:D looking forward to Edwards pov. Yaii!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I love Emmett, too.

Brilliant chapter, I laughed hysterically through most of it, especially when Bella said   “Please tell me I heard you wrong and you just said you were a German.”. I laughed so hard then I nearly fell out of my chair.

Author's Response:

Haha, glad you enjoyed the chapter, but please don't hurt yourself by falling anywhere. Haha. Thanks for the rating and review!

yea! I'm proud of the little prude! hehe

Author's Response:

haha, you aren't the only one. Thanks for the review!

I love the last line....classic.  And I'm happy that you're keeping true to Bella's character and  not making her all of a sudden wanting a forever committment.  That's not who she is at this point.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Some people are upset the Bella isn't nicer, so I am glad you like that she is staying more constant and not changing right away. (She will eventually, though).

HAHAHA!

loved that last sentence the most! and that bit about the orgasm's power to kill someone! ROFL. seriously. I was reading this, and had a bunch of people around me at the time, and they all looked at me real weird cause I was LOLing so much!

 

Loved it!!!! I'd love to get more of the family's (aka rest of the Cullens') POV in the next chapter...rather than Edward's...ok so I lied....I want more of both their POVs...totally want to be in Emmet/Jasper/CARLISLE/ESME(OMG)/Alice/Rose's heads toooooo though...that would make an insanely LOLly chapter!

 

hope to read more real soon! get to work carlybabes!

Author's Response:

Haha, glad you enjoyed the chapter. Unfortunately, I'm not going to do anyone else's POV besides Bella and Edwards. I would end up getting confused and writing from the wrong person's aspect at random points. Glad you enjoyed the chapter, thanks for the review!