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Reviewer: Emsy (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2012 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 21

I don't read many Vamp fics but this has been on my fav's for a while, so I thought i'd give this a go, it is really good I hope you will complete this story. I would love to see how it ends :)

Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 21

GREAT chapter!!!  LOVE the story!!!  Update again soon please!!!  

Reviewer: JasonGee (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 11

Baking powder? WTF does that mean?!?!?!

Also: more drunk Bella, please! I've never laughed so hard in my life. I need a treeeeeeeeee.........

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2011 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 21

Damn. I love this.

Reviewer: Entsu (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 21

I love your delightfully refreshing Bella! It must be the first time in a fic I have read that Bella has kept up her human diet after meeting the Cullens as a vampire (with the added bonus of not being an angsty bitch, no less! ;D), and I'm endlessly thankful for it! Your Bella is not "evil" (how I hate that word), but behaves as she sees is natural for a vampire. In a way it just makes her love story with Edward even more strong, real and tragic. It's great seeing Edward start to love the vampire Bella just as much as the human one, without expecting her to change! I hope you won't change Bella either in the later chapters. :) That said, update soon! ;D

Reviewer: scienceisart (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 21

Found this story on monday and started reading it before going to bed ... terrible idea since i got hooked and ended up reading until 2:30am! Not so smart when you have to get up at 5:30am ... that was a long day. Took advantage of the fact that I am snowed in today to read the rest. Have to say, I love ths story and really hope that you will find the inspiration to continue. Good luck!

Reviewer: Robin Poittier (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 21

please write another chapter....



Author's Response:

I know, right?! I'm such a loser. This semester is kicking my butt, but the next chap is coming along.

Reviewer: locksofglory (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 21

so glad to have caught up on this great story again, please continue!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I am still plugging away at it, don't worry!

Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 21

Uh Oh Alice better watch it cause she is going to have her ass kicked!

I certainly hope Bella thinks more about changing her diets cause she is being pretty selfish not even trying the veggie lifestyle.  It was too cute though how she worked everything out.  Oh and Edward letting his animal out was friggin HOT. :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Bella will put more thought into changing her diet, but I'm not sure if I am going to have her be vegetarian or not. And yes, Alice is in trouble and Edward is hoooooot. Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 21

ewwwww she drank bleach? ewwwwww maybe i missed it but did she even brush her teeth after she threw it up?



Author's Response:

haha...yes she drank bleach, and no she did not brush her teeth after throwing up. no one else picked up on that. haha. Thanks for the rating and review!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 21

This was a great chapter.  Bella is learning a lot about herself.  I love that she felt the need to comfort Edward. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Bella is finally turning around about things.

Reviewer: charriieex (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 21

MOREE!!



Author's Response: haha...patience...thanks for the review!

Reviewer: drednomad (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

damn, i love this story. i had to force myself to stop looking for updates b/c i was becoming obessed...i was rewarded by being able to read two new chapters in a row today when finally allowed myself to check again. ahhh, it was so good. blood and lust...can't wait until bella gets to see edward hunt, maybe it'll be hot enough to change her perspective on animal blood. thanks for the awesome story, can't wait to see what you have in store next.

Author's Response:

Yeah, sorry my updates are taking so long. I'm writing my thesis for my master's and, sadly, that must take priority over this. haha. Glad you are enjoying the story so much, though! And Bella will get to see Edward hutn in due time (and it will be lemony!) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 21

i loved this chapter and i totally know how bella felt!!just when she was about to tell edward she loved him ALICE(>:(.) had to interrupt that!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review! Yeah, Alice is just about on everyone's shit list after this chapter. Next one will be fluffier, though!

Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 21

Hmmm. For once Alice interrupted a moment she wanted to have happen! I really do like this Bella a lot though. I'm glad Edward didn't fall of the wagon.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you are enjoying this Bella, and the story (despite Alice's interruptions).

Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 21

I'm glad she accepted that she loves him (reluctantly).  Yeah alice was instead of a cockblocker.. was a ..  what term cud come up for what she did?...  uuuuuhhh...  maybe.... lovetellerblocker?..  lame....  oh well..   it'll be great when she professes  her love can't wait to see his reaction.



Author's Response:

haha...a lovetellerblocker. that's a new one. it is lame, though, that Alice totally destroyed the moment. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 21

Oh no! This was just one (minor) disaster after another! Ahhh! Jeez, and she was doing what Alice had wanted her to do in the first place! Maybe Bella needs to let down a shield or two from now on. Then Alice could see her, and maybe Jasper could feel her. And FINALLY she's going to start remembering things again! That should be the new family activity, helping Bella find her memories. Great job, please update again soon!

~Jazz~



Author's Response:

Haha...life is a series of disasters. Poor Alice just ruined everything. haha. next chapter will be pretty fluffy, though (and possibly lemony) so it'll give you something to look forward to. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: charriieex (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 6

omg when i read the bit about her slamming into the wall, well lets just say i havnt laughed this much for ages.

xx great story so far xx



Author's Response:

haha...glad you enjoyed the wall slam! thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cathrine1604 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 21

Love this story! Hope to get some EPOV after Bella has told him she loves him. That would be amazing! :)

Please update soon. Can't wait!



Author's Response:

EPOV will return at some point. I'm not sure when, though. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 21

So I wrote an amazing review and then timed out on the site and lost it-  Bummer.

Love the chapter and can't wait for the I love you.



Author's Response:

aww, that sucks. Glad you enjoyed the chapter, though, and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 21

Fantastic! Hilarious about Alice at the end there. LOL!

Cant't wait for more (=



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 21

Oh I want to kill Alice right now but then I would feel guilty and it would just be a huge mess!  I really was hoping for a lemon this chapter because Edward and Bella really just need to have it!

Good chapter, I wish Bella would stop being so damn stubborn and go vegi with her diet.  How are they ever going to be together if she doesn't?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review! Sorry for the lack of lemons, but they will be plentiful in due time. As far as Bella's diet goes, I'm honestly not sure if she will ever go vegetarian. But even if she does, things will work out so they are together. :)

Reviewer: HyphenAnn (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 21

I love Alice!!!!!........
............
.....BUT RIGHT NOW I WANNA SHOOT HER!!!!! lol loving the story thanks!

Author's Response:

Haha...everyone is so pissed at Alice right now. poor girl. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mapoftheproblematique (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 21

Bella needs to give Alice a beating. And Rose, too... I can't believe she didn't react when Rose hit her!



Author's Response:

Alice is gonna have to watch her back for awhile. haha. Rose may need to, as well, once Bella gets over her guilt about the whole thing. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: miki_hearts_edward_cullen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 21

CUT UP ALICE'S CREDIT CARD!



Author's Response:

Oh, Lord, she would have a stroke. Thanks for the review!

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