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Reviewer: Emilise284 (Signed)
December 24, 2009 11:39 AM · On:
I like this story. It outlines what would happen if Edward was human. It shows how perfect he was, as if we didn't realize it before. This story shows all the good points of being human, as well as all the bad ones.
Reviewer: kscocoa (Signed)
September 27, 2009 02:22 PM · On:
This is really good. I hope you continue on with it. A different side than I had ever thought about. Thanks
Reviewer: leiram (Signed)
May 30, 2009 11:31 PM · On:
I love the story Pleas write more!!!!!!
Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed)
March 28, 2009 06:23 PM · On:
this is so cute! i like that someone out there is writing about an imperfect Edward.... gives the rest of the guys out there a fighting chance! lol
cant wait for more!! <3
November 26, 2008 07:21 PM · On:
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August 30, 2008 10:31 PM · On:
This is a really interesting story. i like how you are developing the normal human Edward. Bella seems a little different to me. I'm not really sure why. I think that your Bella is more confident than how I perceive Bella at this point in SM's story. I look forward to the next chapter.
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