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Reviewer: Mae (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 03:17 PM · On: First Night (V)

wonder how he got in jail....
can't wait for you to update.
hope it's soon!



Author's Response:

You'll just have to wait and see ;)

I'll do my best to update soon, but some fun stuff is happening... so we'll see! I'd love to hear from you on the thread, so stop by sometime!

Reviewer: Ceceilia (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:44 PM · On: First Night (V)

I was so excited to see this story updated; I am quite taken with it.  I can't wait to see where you take it.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Hollyhysteria (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:08 PM · On: First Night (V)

Love this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Tell your friends! lol ;)

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:36 PM · On: First Night (V)

I love this story --- and its just started...I really am hoping to see updates soon :)



Author's Response:

Yes, we have only just begun! I will say that the updates may be slower at first... my beta is super busy and well... something is a cookin' in Delta Land... I'll talk about it more on the thread tomorrow, I'd love to hear from you over there!

Reviewer: NyteRock (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:27 PM · On: First Night (V)

I like this a lot so far.  Update soon =]



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll do my best!

Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 12:06 PM · On: First Night (V)

I quite enjoy this.  Keep writing please.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: donnah77 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 11:02 AM · On: First Night (V)

Another good chapter!  I like Angryward, especially the future potential of him loosening up and getting to know her better.  Curious to learn his story!



Author's Response:

yesss, we shall see about Eddie. He's kind of lost right now, in a bit of a daze if you will. His story will be told, in due time of course!

Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:50 AM · On: First Night (V)

please continue with this, i'd very much like to see where it goes. i don't have any questions - but i like this story a great deal so far =)



Author's Response:

I have every intention of continuing! Even if my updates are slower, I hope you'll stick with me! I'd love to hear from you again, and should you have any questions, the thread is just a few clicks away! =D

Reviewer: amandasaurus (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:47 AM · On: First Night (V)

Love it, update soon?



Author's Response:

I'll do my best! ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:46 AM · On: First Night (V)

Wow, this is interesting, I can't wait to read more! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: donnah77 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Alone (V)

Hey Delta!  I'm so glad I stumbled on this today!  I had you on author alert over at FF knowing you had something new brewing, but didn't check here.

Anywho - great start here!  I was pleasantly surprised by who the narrator was, and  I liked the little cliffy too.  Especially since the next chapter is already available LOL



Author's Response:

Donnah! Good to hear from you again! I'm glad the narrator was a surprise. I attempted to write it that way, so I'm happy it worked ;) I'd love to hear what you thought about chapter two! There is a thread on the forums, come hang out with us!

Reviewer: Pandoras5thBox (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:28 AM · On: First Night (V)

Interesting idea. Can't wait to see how this all plays out!

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Alone (V)

yes!  very intrigued!  looking forwad to where you lead...



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll be glad to lead as long as you'll follow!

Reviewer: deeks (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Alone (V)

i liked the chapter. really excited to see what happens and where you take this.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: footroza (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Alone (V)

I like this...I am looking forward to keeping my eye out on this one..  Quite a Cliffy you left us...

 

Nice start to your story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I look forward to hearing from you again! Don't worry about the cliffy... heehee

 

Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Alone (V)

Enjoyed it.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks! The chapter is coming soon!

Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Alone (V)

Well, I'm interested! :)



Author's Response:

Good! I'm glad! New chapter coming soon!

Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Alone (V)

Love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Alone (V)

I like this story - can't wait to see what's next!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I can't wait for you to read what's next. ;)

Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Alone (V)

I love this!  A mature, creative story.  Well done.  I hope you continue to post!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I certainly will continue! expect an update this week!

Reviewer: ady (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Alone (V)

You're french is perfect Delta, don't worry :D

I saw a banner for this story on the forums, didn't know about it, but so glad I found it. I had loved "just like the movies", loved your writing style, so I was super excited to read more from you :)

And then, I come here, and read the summary, and find myself super excited about that, and, cherry on the cake, it's happening in France :D

I'm really curious about reading more, I'm looking forward to it :)

Do not hesitate if you need help with the French.

Keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing this story :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I'm guessing you are from France then, lol. My beta took five years of french during school, so she's the one who really helped me. I know a few phrases, but not much.

I'm glad you enoyed JltM as well. That was so much fun for me to write, being my first fic and all. And now this one is turning into something amazing... I hope to update sometimes this week depending on how busy my beta is.

Come find me on the forums! I'm usually in the Trust in Advertising, The Dominate, and One Day Out West forums. I hope to have a thread for this story soon. so im sure you can fidn me there too =D

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Alone (V)

It has my interest!  I was excited to see a new story from you since I really enjoyed your last one.  Looking forward to more!

Kathy M.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying this one. and I'm glad you enjoyed Just like the movies as well! I hope to update sometime this week so I'll look forward to hearing from you again!

Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Alone (V)

Wow, I love this!  It's so different, and I definitely enjoy period pieces.  I like that while you made Esme and Carlisle Bella's parents, you had Charlie there somewhere, looking after her.  I'm excited to read the rest!  xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes, I needed Bella to be an orphan, but I still wanted someone there to watch out for her. Charlie fit the bill!

Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Alone (V)

Very intriguing start.  I will look forward to future chapters.  By the way, is the "law" mentioned in the summaru historically real or a plot device?



Author's Response:

It is very real. I read it in one of those "silly old law books" And this idea just jumped into my head. I did some checking and I believe it to be legit. As far as time frame and what no I cant be sure... since all the french documents are well... in french =D

Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Alone (V)

I was so excited when I saw your name on this story!! You are evil for the cliffie!!

so far im loving it, im curious to see why edward was so content... had he just given up on the fact that he was about to die?

i'll be looking forward to your next update! :D



Author's Response:

=D sorry about the cliffie! There really is no big secret to Edward being content. He  is a man and he was going to take his punishment like one... besides there is nothing he can do about it. So why make a fool out of himself?

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