What? What? That's not supposed to happen! Love it though.

I've loved every single chapter of this fic.  You've done an admirable job with it.  As for what I'd like to see, hmm....Edward's definition of what being the man Bella needs is....maybe a visit with the rest of the family....perhaps at Alice and Jasper's wedding?  Definitely want to see what those scars on Edward's back are like and we should probably find out what became of everyone else, Bella's attacker, the girl Bella rescued, Aro's acceptance of their relationship at last, etc

Yikes. That's a cliffie if I've ever read one!

Oh, I'm so glad they finally admitted their feelings for each other. No apologies for fluff. If I didn't want some fluff, I wouldn't read fan fiction.

So part two... I feel like there is some unfinished business with Aro, Demetri, and the ownership of Bella's home. And until he hangs in the gallows, Felix is still around. Did he know that the person he was attacking was Bella, the woman who saved his former business partner? Somehow I have hard time believing that was all a coincidence. And of course, I want more B&E fluff with plot of course.

Fluff-why do you think I read this stuff?  I need the fluff.  Sometimes, I really NEED the fluff!  Well, I'm glad that Bella got to that carriage before he took off onto a ship and months would have gone by without knowing!  As for new plot twist?  Hmmm, maybe a long lost heir to the Swan estate?  Some evil 3rd cousin twice removed who wants Bella or she is out on her ear and Edward will be floating in the river!!  (twist mustache here)  LOL, if I were any good at this sort of thing I would try to write even a short one shot.  Alas, you are the master of the pen!

loved the declaration!  

 

I would love to see the courtship of jasper and alice

The romance and eventual consummation of edward and bella

 

I'd like to see more of Edward's family - meeting bella.

Oh Delta there are no words! This was beyond beautiful! Thanks for short-lived heartbreak! MWAH!!

I wouldn't mind seeing how things go with bella's house...she us pretty close to having to sell it right? And maybe meeting the family?

Wow. It was sexy and sweet all wrapped into one.

So secretive. Hmm it's good though.

Favorite part: the ring exchange! And, he came back! Goober for some sappiness. <3

Good. He's warming up to her.

So we know this was during a time where sex was not considered until after marriage but I can't help but wonder if this Edward is as innocent as Bella or not. I know that he lead a fast paced life. So his Bella the first woman he'll have been with? His virtue is one of my most favored things about Edward in stories. I like moral Edward. He puts me to shame.

Wonderful!  I love kick butt Alice!