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Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Home
the fluff was totally believable, and not a bit overdone, as it suits the time and the characters: i especially liked edward's explanation about "being treated as less than human being for so long", and the need to become man again-it's very realistic.
well, i don't really know: i suppose it would be interesting to see your take on edwards family-maybe them wanting him to come home:i'm pretty certain it wouldn't ever be all black-white, and that they wouldn't be overbearing-bella-haters or overbearingly sweet, perfect people. ;)
edward and bella reentering the society? the clash of the cultures as they have theiir first child?how they kept the house-did edward start working again-and if so, what bella said considering it includes a lot of traveling?
you know, just the normal things that happen when an ex-convict and stubborn, beautiful, smart woman finally start to build their life together in almost austenian manner. ;)
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Home
Love it as always and love the fluff I hope Bellas and Edward have more happy times they have been through so much already,
regards Emma
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Home
Fabulous, as usual!
This was a terrific chapter, and I really loved it!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Home
Out of control fluff? *lol* Never! I revel in it. It makes me all soft and gooey inside, and trust me, these two had this coming for them for a long time. I'm just so happy they're finally together - I was so sure the angst in the previous chapter would extend for months because Bella didn't stop Edward and he would've actually left. As for Part II, hmm.... I'm more than happy to let you have the free reins, but there's just one thing I'd always wanted to see - and that is their future, of course. Maybe Edward's job, their kids... maybe something unexpected would be great. Bella did have some financial trouble, maybe that can be solved too? At this point, Edward's past/family is still unclear, I just thought of that. Hmm... these are all purely suggestions, of course. In the end, just write as you see fit. I will love it regardless of how it turned out (except for angst/breaking up or something, haha)
Wonderful, amazing chapter... I love it so much!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Home
Great chapter. Love the fluff. I'm glad Bella went after Edward. The impromptu wedding was very sweet. They're both so happy! Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Escape (v)
Edward left?! And Bella let him?! Oh no.
Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Home
Yea! (clapping hands) You didn't let him leave! Loved the fluff!
Reviewer: library mom (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Home
I really love this story!!!! I would love so much to be able to read two important events in the future of this story.
1. Edward's reunion with his family and their meeting Bella, her feelings upon having a family once again. I think it could be so touching and life changing for her, and I think it would thrill Edward to be able to provide that/fill that void in her life for her.
2. Edward being able to financially get back on his feet again, an explanation of his return to his successful buisness or at least success in some business.
One other thought of something that would be neat to read is how Bella helps him heal from his emotional scars left by his stay in prison. her acceptance of his physical scars has to have an impact on Edward, to know that she loves him even if he has scars both physical and emotional.
Keep writing it's fabulous!!! I especially love the unique plot and story line. You are amazing!!! I loved every chapter so far!
Reviewer: little_white_lie (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Home
I adore your story!
Reviewer: little_white_lie (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Home
I adore your story!
Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Home
I notice your not calling it a short story anymore. Yay! I wasn't ready for it to be over either. I can see Edward, Bella, Jasper and Alice all going back to England.
Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Home
I would like to see Edwards parents, who are they? where do they live? will Bella meet them? You totally made it up to me since the last chapter, leving things like that was horrible!
Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:48 PM · On: First Night (V)
I am amazed at the Courage and audacity Bella shows here.
This is often my motto, live life to the fullest, life is either a daring adventure or nothing, follow your heart uncomprimisingly. Still though, this goes beyond bungee jumping or pursuing art. This is really remarkable, and I am not sure if I would go for it in real life. All the same, great story. VERY COMPELLING.
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Home
Wonderful. And hey, I love fluff! ;)
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Home
Oh I'm so glad your not going to end the story at this chapter but will be continuing on. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Home
That was lovely! I was afraid he'd actually get away! I think it would be nice if we got to see some of Alice & Jasper courting and maybe some real girl talk between Alice & Bella. Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Home
I love it! Their declarations are wonderful. Their first night together is so sweet. I'm looking forward to more!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Home
I LOVED IT!! YAY FOR FLUFF!!! LOL
And I'm SO glad to hear this isn't ending here. Shoot, they haven't even consumated their marriage yet!
There is much more that can happen -- & what about his family/parents? The newlyweds could go visit them or visa versa
These 2 lovebirds have a ways to go, now that they have expressed their feelings for one another
Yay for more chapters!
Reviewer: Roselover2 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Home
WOW so WOW
I forgive Val now I never held anything against you Delta dear I know it all Val she is EVILE!!
this was some sweet fluff so what will the conflict be OH do we get to see some honeymooning the next chapter?
what about the assholes from the town are they gonna cause trouble
OH so many many Questions running through my little brain....
Reviewer: Kittyinaz (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Escape (v)
arghh just tell me that u are posting the next chapter soon
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Home
I'm so glad she didn't let him walk away from her like that! They are adorable together and it is so nice to see them falling in love & willing to wait to do more than cuddle. Love is wonderful & they deserve every second of it.
Although you say this was where you originally planned on ending, i for one am glad that you will be continuing with more. I'd love to see what happens with Jasper and Alice & I'd also love to see if anything more happens with his family.
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Home
i loved the fluff and definitely hope to see more of edward and bella. so far it's been brilliant.
Reviewer: rosita (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Home
Iwould like Bella an Edward going to england, and kids of course...
Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Home
I love it. It all happened so fast but I love it. I'm looking forward to love and romance now that they are together for real. Bring on the romance!
Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Home
Would it be too much to ask for a lemon? lols I love fluff! I love it soo much. Maybe even as much as angst. Huh, two polar opposites, I know... but... eh. Yay! Edward came back!! And Bella limped! I foresaw that! Okay, no I didn't... but let me say I did. lol
Beautiful update! =) Thanks for posting!!
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