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Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:16 PM · On: England
love it!!! can't wait to see how edward's mother reacts......hmmmm.....does she approve of bella?!
Reviewer: nslachey (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:44 PM · On: England
Nice Edward, real nice. I would want him to warm my bed as well. I love how he stood up to his mother.
I hope their stay goes well. I guess we will see in do time.
Love the update.
Reviewer: Tabby (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:30 PM · On: England
Pretty necklace, I want one just like it *pouts*
Thanks for the update :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:08 PM · On: England
Woohoo! Don't let ANYONE tell Edward that he can't have sweet lovin' whenever he wants it-especially Mother! Edward was especially sweet and very in control this chapter-I liked it!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 08:47 PM · On: England
That was lovely. Rather naughty of Edward to defy his mum that way, but whoever would refuse Edward? :-) Looking forward to whatever happens next!
Reviewer: lasrnr (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 08:23 PM · On: England
So, sometimes I get caught up with school so much that I forget what day it is... however, I never, ever forget that it is Wednesday! You know how you get those stories that you are just drawn to and cant help but place yourself in the place of Bella? This story is it for me. I think it is one of the most well done and awesome stories on here and I love, love, love reading it!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Triumph (v)
*smile, swoon, cry, smile again* Four reactions for this chapter. The beginning was sweet as pie, the next segment was also sweet, but steamy as well ;), finding out more about Edward's time in prison was excruciatingly sad, but definitely necessary for understanding him, and the last part was really, really sweet once again.
Okay, things I liked:
* consummating the marriage-cause I'm just a perv like that, lol.
* that you used Forks zipcode for Edward's prison number
* that Alice and Jasper are getting married
and most of all
* that Edward and Bella are going to go to England! Yay! Even if they don't stay, I'll be okay with that. I'm just really excited for Bella to get to meet Edward's family!
And things that I didn't like:
* Mmmm, nope, I got nothing. :)
Awesome as always! Looking forward to our trip to England! ;)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Triumph (v)
Another great chapter. So much happened in this one. I love that he wanted to get a job to provide for her. I love how supportive Bella always is with Edward and his decisions.
And they finally gave into each other and their love. All I can say about their first moment together is that it was lovely. (great job)
I am glad that they are going to England. I can't wait for the moment when Bella meets the parents!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Triumph (v)
This was a lovely chapter. I'm so glad to see that they have finally come full circle and Edward feels secure enough to make love to his wife. From what I took from this chapter, he needed to know that he could provide for her, and had to feel like he was doing something productive before he could take that final step.
I'm even more glad to see that she talked him into going to see his family. It will be good for both of them, even if they do end up going back to France.
Reviewer: WinniePony (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Triumph (v)
Yay, they're legal. Very tactful. And I'm so glad Jasper and Alice are engaged. :o) Excited for London, that'll be cool... =D
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Triumph (v)
Oh, this made me so happy!!!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Triumph (v)
Wow, this is just so sweet. I really cant wait for an update. =]
GO LONDON!
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Triumph (v)
Excellent chapter, wonderfully written! So sweet and tender..
I'm glad that Edward has finally told Bella about his time in prison..poor Edward..and I'm so happy for Alice and Jasper!!
It's a good thing if they manage to go to England together, it's a big change but as Bella said they can come back any time if they don't like it!
I can't wait to red what will happen next, update soon please!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Triumph (v)
Great chapter. I really liked how much E/B's relationship changed in this chapter. I'm glad Bella and Edward took that finally step at last and Edward told Bella about his time in prison. I'm glad Bella also convinced Edward to go back to England. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: EllaB (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Triumph (v)
I just found this story and couldn't stop until I had read all 15 chapters. It is GORGEOUS! I love how vivid the image of them is in my head. I feel like I've stepped into a mix between Les Mis and Disney's "Beauty and the Beast."
This is wonderful...I can't wait for you to update!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Triumph (v)
Great chapter. I really liked how much E/B's relationship changed in this chapter. I'm glad Bella and Edward took that finally step at last and Edward told Bella about his time in prison. I'm glad Bella also convinced Edward to go back to England. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Triumph (v)
I loved it! So romantic, so sweet...plus Ed was finally able to open up about some of his time in Prison *shudder*
And Yes! They Legal now ^___^ oohhh will she end up preggers sometime coming up????
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Triumph (v)
very sweet, and sensual.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Triumph (v)
Great job! It was perfect for their first time.
Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Triumph (v)
Aww, they're finally a married couple through and through! =) huge gigantic sigh. Alice and Jasper are engaged =) More sighs. I can't wait to see Edward bring Bella home =) more yay's and more sighs. lol sorry, it's been a long day. Great post!! Love seeing updates!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Triumph (v)
I'm learning French from this story! (now i can tell everyone that you CAN learn from fanfics!)
Excellent chapter as usual! Can't wait for their trip to London, assuming it will happen!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Triumph (v)
loved this chapter too!
So.. it is the 19th Century... when is Bella going to get pregnant? There were no pills no condoms and the social rules and mind setting were different Of course Bella is very different from her time but I don't see her being opposed of having a little Edward... ?
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Triumph (v)
It was great yet horrifying to hear of his time in prison.
Reviewer: brain candy (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Triumph (v)
Cute chapter!
Reviewer: laylak (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Triumph (v)
You really have somthing special here with this story. It has become one of my favorties. It truly is beatuiful I hope its not ending soon.
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