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Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 07:12 PM · On: Epilogue: Isabella

I did see this coming...just not in this exact way. But when you focused on her longing and loneliness...I knew this story wasn't about Bella's vengeance anymore. It's about Emily's.

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 07:06 PM · On: Epilogue : Edward Cullen

My money is on Maria. That sneaky wench! :)

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 07:01 PM · On: Catharsis

I had completely forgotten about her promise to Maria! Getting excited now!

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 06:47 PM · On: Suffocation

This chapter gave me my first "hope" for Edward in this whole story....and then it was gone. :(

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 06:40 PM · On: Trying

Still so confused. I'm so happy that Rose and Emmett are okay...but where's my Alice? :(

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 06:32 PM · On: Decisions

Ahhhhhh. Your notes say one thing but it seems like the story is saying another... We shall see. Excellent, as always.

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 06:24 PM · On: Demolition

Unexpected! Want to keep reading...can't leave long review! Love it! Great job!

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 06:15 PM · On: Catalysis

This makes everything so much worse... Are Alice and Jasper ever coming back? Are Emmett and Rose okay? Who all is dead? SO many questions...that only the "next" button can answer.

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2012 06:00 PM · On: Lambs Become Lions

This is awful.... The story is amazing, enthralling, and well-written. It's the situation that is breaking my heart. I would be doing everything Bella is doing...but I have one key piece of information that she is lacking. So sad...but I must go on.

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 08:20 PM · On: My Vendetta - Esme's POV

*SPOILER ALERT*

Edward and Bella is hard to deal with...and it hasn't even happened yet. But I'm seriously tearing up at the idea of Esme dying...after killing Carlisle. It just...isn't right. This has been one of the hardest stories to read...even though I know it's not real.

Take that as a compliment; you've completely fascinated me.

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 08:08 PM · On: Taking La Push

*SPOILER ALERT TO ANYONE READING REVIEWS BEFORE THE STORY*

I knew it...I knew she wasn't dead... This whole time...I knew. UGH nooooo. Oh this is not what I expected....and yet I knew this. sjfhfdskjgd.fkjnvkjsed

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 07:56 PM · On: The Plunge

I am sofa king excited for the next chapter. Something big is going to happen here...besides the fight. Ah! So excited...and anxious...and nervous. I feel everything Bella feels, and I almost don't want to press the "next" button...but I'm going to...

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 07:37 PM · On: The Plan

I have a feeling I know what Bella's "little plan" is. And it's going to be amazing...

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 07:32 PM · On: Breaking the Rules

I love the last paragraph. It's more of what I always wanted Bella to be.

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 07:24 PM · On: Offensive Tactics

SOoOoOoO much anticipation. I cannot wait for the battle...

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 07:16 PM · On: Intervention

Pretty color. :)

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 07:13 PM · On: Defensive Maneuvers

I don't know how I feel about you involving Maria...like what is Jazz thinking? But, it's definitely entertaining. And the training was awesome. I like that they taught her more actual fighting skills here than in the book, where they just focused on her shield. Speaking of...

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 07:01 PM · On: Gifts From Alice

Yay! Zafrina is my favorite! So happy you introduced her, I don't even mind being wrong. :)

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 06:58 PM · On: Win The Crowd

This chapter was amazing. I knew something beautiful would blossom between Irina and Bella...and now I just can't wait to see how, when, and how far it plays out.

I don't know who is at the door...but I do not think it's Carlisle or Edward. Perhaps is Alice? I hope so...

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 05:00 PM · On: Reborn

I like how this was similar and yet so different from how her change played out in BD. I expected and am also pleased that Rose was the one the change Bella, and am looking forward to seeing what sort of relationship forms between Irina and Bella.

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 04:54 PM · On: Hellfire

Since Kate said her sister is not "two-dimensional"...I'm excited to see how you paint your Tanya.

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 04:44 PM · On: Mercutio

I love the integration of Romeo and Juliet. I especially love it because you're casting a light on what it really was. A twisted a** love story, full of death, betrayal, and miscommunication. I can only imagine what our Mercutio will come up with.

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 04:38 PM · On: Deterioration

I was so hoping that someone would turn Bella, now I'm just really anxious to see who it ends up being...

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 04:00 PM · On: The Awakening

This chapter feels a teeny-tiny bit rushed...but I'm sure Bella feels the same way. And, I know we're going to be getting to the very dark part of this story, so I don't mind being in a hurry to get there. :)

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 03:48 PM · On: The Operation

*SPOILER ALERT FOR ANYONE READING REVIEWS BEFORE THE STORY*

Okay so this review is for the last chapter, and this chapter.

I braced myself for the Jasper and Bella conversation, but what's funny is that, even as sad as it was, I have pictured just such a conversation in my head, and I didn't cry. However...when we got to Embry dying...I lost it.

I knew Esme would feel awful, and I just didn't understand how everything was going so wrong. But then I realized that your story is so realistic (as realistic as a FanFic can be) and so sometimes things do go wrong...

This chapter, was...I don't even have words. Edward watching...through Carlisle's eyes? And the sound, that was the baby crying wasn't it? Ah, so much torment. For the characters and for me! Alas, I shall keep reading. Excellent as always.

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