Reviewer: She Who Must Be Obeyed (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
So that means B/C right? Right? And please no actual sex with Edward. Get close if you must but no full on sex please. In fact you don't even have to get close, I wouldn't mind. Please don't be too evil to my Carlisle. He doesn't deserve it and it would just be plain mean! Other than that probably fruitless begging, I am still loving this story and can't wait for the next installment.
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I'm glad that Bella didn't cave and Edward didn't take advantage. I think more Bella and Carlisle sexing is fantastic!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Such a great chapter - fantastic sexin with B/C and exposition with B/E. So glad you wrote!! Love the story!!! :)
Reviewer: ginabina (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Hmmm, not sure what I would like to see happen. I am surprised that the B&C relationship has got so deep, especially with the long distance thing. If she ends up with E & it doesn't end up as a E&B story, then I hope she doesn't end up with either of them. Good story though & I have enjoyed it so far. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
iam a e/b devoted fan but this has been a really good story i like the drama between e/c and i hope at some point he makes contact with his real ass hole of a mom he will only learn to appreciate what he had all the more and realize how lucky he was to have essme and what his dad did have to sacrafice e/b sex as long as its really hot i learn to deal
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I prefer a carlisle/bella HEA with this story, but I can't wait to see the trouble edward causes along the way
really good chapter
Reviewer: Hev (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Awe please have Carlise and Bella stay together.... this is the first non E/B story I have wanted to Bella to be with another person.
Reviewer: whimsicalmusing (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Can I just say I love this story? I'm rooting for Bella and Carlisle. I adore the passion and reluctant connection they share. Edward and Bella are fun and snarky but I feel Edward needs to grow up before he starts to deserve her. He's puppy chow and Carlisle is big dog. :D PLEASE don't make us wait long for an update! Wonderful chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I hate it when you tell me that there are only a couple chapters left. It's so good, i don't want it to end! Great chapter! Loved the banter with Alice, Bella and Edward, and Jasper asking about the other doctors was priceless. Great job!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
Fantastic again!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 5: Busted
Ah! Gotta hurry to the next chapter!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bliss
Whoa. Amazing chapter!
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Screw Edward I love the sexy Doc & Bella!!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Fantastic!
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Im so tossed up in this fic ...part of me Loves C&B but i feel this need to be E&B. My heart goes out to both man.. I love this fic ♥
Reviewer: Teena (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I love ,love, love this story!!!!!! MMMMMMM sexy Dr.mmmmmmmm
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Well I NEVER EVER EVER thought I woud say this, but in this story, I DON'T want Bella and Edward to have sex or be together and I DO want her and Carlise to be together!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is it!!!!!!!! Crazy idea right?!?! LOL!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I'm pretty upset about the non Edward/Bella thing, but I'll survive it.
Will you consider writing an alternate ending that ends Edward/Bella? I would totally love that, if you'd consider it, after this story is done :]
Keep up the awesome work!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 2: Oh, Dr. Cullen!
That was great! You've got an overuse of commas going on but it's easy to overlook when the story is so fantastic!
Reviewer: Mkystich (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Now I need a cigarette
Reviewer: songster51 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 8: Anticipation
Things are gonna get mighty interesting now. Loved the Charlie hunting comment. The gun scene in Twilight was my favorite scene.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Coming Home
A fantastic start! I'm off to the next chapter!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I'm actually glad that it won't be an E/B HEA. And I hardly ever say that, only once b-4.
That was hot! Great chapter.
Reviewer: michangelina (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
loved it.. so hott..
Reviewer: orcagirl09 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
So great! Please update soon.
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