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Reviewer: Laine Quinn (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Wow good for Edward!  Completely unexpected, until we find out that he knows about Bella and Carlisle.

Reviewer: OCDE (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

OHMIGOD. i secretly knew he knew that she was doing his father but i didnt expect it to come out like that. i mean come on, we all know that edward isnt stupid, but there was that one story when he was pretty slow, bu anywho. that last line was perfect. i hope you have the next chapter ready soon. i really want edward to know the truth about his mom and not hate his dad but i also want edward and bella together. its nice seeing her with a different cullen sometimes but its always good to go back to bella and edward, just saying. and it raised alot of tention between the family. but bella seems like she cant get over carlisle. great chapter. until next time.

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

omg! i cant wait for the next chapter! edward finally knows!! update soon!!

Reviewer: amra (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Great chapter!  I am a 100% Team Edward fan; however, I am loving your Bella and Carlisle and feel that your Edward is beginning to redeem himself in this chapter.

I am anxiously awaiting the next installment!

Reviewer: twilightchick11 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

OHMYGOODNESS! Wow. Didn't see that one coming. :O Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: michelly (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

OOOOHhhh love drama... hurry and update... great chapter

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Absolutely amazing!! How did Edward know!!!??? I can't wait till the next chapter.

This was epically long - I'm amazed and beyond thrilled. Thank you thank you for the juicy update.

Reviewer: tigger4 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

wow wow im speechless...... that was AWESOME chapter i simply love this story LOVE IT PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon great job!!!!!!!

Reviewer: aswinfor (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  That's all I can really say.  That and I wish you'd update quicker, but I know if you did, it probably wouldn't be written as well.  This story is my guilty pleasure and I look forward to it constantly.  I've actually even re-read it a couple times.  I cannot even imagine where it will go from here, but I look forward to it.  I love Edward, Bella, and Carlisle in this one and feel for them all.



Author's Response:

It's awesome when someone reads the fic once, but to re-read it is amazing! Thank you! I really do feel awful for making it a 4 week wait most of the time. I do try and get them out faster, but writer's block is a bitch and well, my kids insist on having attention. What's with that? LOL I will do my best to get chapter 15 out faster.

Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

WOW what a chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: She Who Must Be Obeyed (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Most of the way through this chapter I was smiling to myself and thinking (possibly out loud and with accompanying squees) 'I love Carlisle'. Towards the end of the chapter though?! I still love him (obviously, who wouldn't?) but I have to admit to being a little upset with him right now (unless of course he has decided to leave Bella and marry me; unlikely I admit). I can't wait for the next chapter so that I can find out what your cunning plan is re this plot line. 



Author's Response:

I am upset with him too. Really, I don't think he explained his reasons properly. The age excuse? Yes, it is a factor, but they've talked about it a lot. But it will make sense next chapter. Hopefully....

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle

Firstly, you deserve to get that 1000 reviews. If I could, I'd review over and over again until you did. Because this was... a-freaking-MAZING.

Pfft, Edward/Bella? No. I WANT BELLA/SEXY BEAST. There are enough Edward/Bella stories out there as it is. But I'd love to see what you do to make Edward cause some trouble.

Sexy beast is hot XD Bella is a lucky lucky LUCKY girl. *dreamy eyes about sexy beast*

I'm glad Edward/Bella had that talk.. it'll help her understand both sides better now. Although Edward doesn't let up on the cheeky facade, does he?

Amazing chapter! I can't believe I haven't read it before today!

Oh and btw, sexy beast is what me and my fic friend call Carlisle. Although I'm sure you worked that out!

“There’s burgers if you’re hungry, Bella,” Jasper told her.

“Thanks, but I’m good.”

“She has a different kind of meat in mind,” Alice laughed.

Hahahah. Alice sounds a bit like me with that comment XD



Author's Response:

LOL love the sexy beast nickname! Edward's cheekiness will forever be a part of him, but honestly, that's my favorite part.

Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

For what it's worth I 'm sticiking to your story regardless and hll yeah to a man humming uncle Kracker!



Author's Response:

To me, that song totally describes how Carlisle would feel about Bella. It's fun and flirty, but there really is a message there!

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Brilliant chapter!  I'm a little disappointed Edward stopped them.  But it's probably for the best.

Thanks for updating!

Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Ah Dang! Great chapter, cant wait for the next one :)

Reviewer: finallycaved (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Okay, I don't usually review the fics I read because I don't feel like I ever have anything to say, but I saw that you're almost to 1000 reviews and you have OVER 1000 readers.  That's horrible!  I thought everyone should at the very least review once on one chapter!  Then I realized that I haven't even reviewed once... So I'm really really sorry I haven't reviewed in the past.  

I love this fic, surprisingly.  I never thought I'd like bella and carlisle together but hey, I guess I do!  This chapter was definitely my favorite so far.  It was sooo long, thank you for that!  I'm also really happy Edward stopped her at the end... thank goodness!  She was getting far more than she bargained for and thank god it finally hit him!  Alcohol + breakup = bad decisions... always.

 

I can't wait for more!  And I promise I'll start reviewing regularly now :)



Author's Response:

First, thank you for taking the time to write your first review! I was one of those people who wouldn't review either the fics I read, but you don't realize until you start writing just how much those words of encouragement really mean! But I know that reviewing isn't for everyone and as long as your enjoying the fic I can forgive ya ;)

I like to make the chapters longer since I take so long to update, just to make the wait worth while. I'm glad the longer chapters are welcomed and not just seen as a bore! And I agree, that when it comes to Edward she really has gotten more than what she bargained for. Especially with the chapters to come.

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

I'm still sniffling from the C/B break up.  Ouch.  I liked how she knew it was coming - isn't that the truth?  Whenever my mom calls and has bad news, I can feel it coming after the first word pops out of her mouth.  I liked that Edward had the restraint in that situation.  I think that says a lot about his character that Bella will appreciate down the road, when her head is clearer.  Can't wait to hear how Edward found out!  Update soon, please!



Author's Response:

It's that woman's intuition! I really do hope that after all this, Bella can see the good in Edward. He is an ass, but I believe he has a reason for acting like he does most of the time.

Reviewer: Hannah Volturi (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA
This chapter was CRAAAZY.
But good.
But pretty heavy!

Reviewer: sochain is solas (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

wow. intense chapter. i am sooooo glad e didn't turn out to be quite as big a tool as he seemed he would have been. he did the right thing by stopping. not to mention how supportive he was throughout the chapter. i think there really is a good guy under all his bravado.

i'm bleedin brokenhearted over carlisle's phone call though. poor bella. possibly even poor carlisle too. i am reserving judgement on that whole situation until next chapter (for which i am holding my breath- btw!) to better explore the why's of his 180. oh, and i'm dying to find out how exactly e really found out about carlisle & bella.

please update soon! i dying here! :o)



Author's Response:

One of the reasons this chapter too so long to write is because of the breakup. Everytime I sat down to write it I seriously felt sick, which is why it didn't go into a lot of detail. The reasons behind will be revealed next chapter!

Reviewer: missy77 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Awesome way to end the chapter.  Hopefully an update won't be too far away.

 

Reviewer: Blair_89910 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

wow things just got REALLY intersting ... I mean how did Edward know?

Great story, still I wish they'd go trough it hahaha Edward is hot! so is Carlisle hahaha I mean she could have both I say do it :)

Reviewer: camille3456 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

love it! cant wait wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: pepper_cucumber (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

OUCH! kinda horrible to hear that bella is fucking his father and then coming on to him! I thought there would be an Edward-Bella action here from the synopsis but I guess this is only a Bella-Carlisle story afterall. Disappointed very much...



Author's Response:

Like I said in my A/N I really thought Bella and Edward would get it on. I'm sorry you're disappointed, but I think it really tells about his character. Starting this fic I wrote the synposis like I did because it was supposed to be a B/E fic. I can see where you got the idea from, but reading it over now it asks the question what will happen when she meets the best man's son. Does it imply sex? Yes, it could. But it can also imply a whole lot of drama that is about to unfold.

I hope you continue to read!

Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

loved it i am glad he stoped as well

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

One thing I love about your story, is that even if you go a while between updates, you always make it up by having nice, long chapters!  This was a hard chapter with Carlisle dec and all, but I love/hate the way you ended it!  Talk about a cliffie!     I love that Jasper figured it out and that Edward had and just waited until the end to throw it at her!  Poor Bella!  

Looking forward to the next update and thanks for sharing your talent!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I know I got awhile between updates which is why I try to give longer chapters to make up for the wait. I'm glad they go over well! This one was over 30 pages!

Jasper may look like a hunk of man meat only out to have fun with Alice, but the dude's got a brain! LOL

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