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Reviewer: Scorp112 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Well hell. That was a roller coaster of a chapter. Hell of a great one though. I'm glad she told him and not someone else...and now that things are worse they can get better!!! YAY for turning a corner!! They expressed their love, they talked and okay, so he left, but they'll find their way back. I know it! :)
Awesome chapter and thanks for the super fast update!!!! Hope the next one is just as quick!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do believe it had to be Bella that told Edward if Carlisle wasn't going to. She needed to have a purpose in this fic other than to screw Carlisle all over Forks and fall in love with him lol.
The next chapter will be up as soon as I can get it to you!
Reviewer: Kristenbella123 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
yay an update thank god. i love this story soo much. i hope everything works out for carlisle and bella, as well as edward and carlisle
Reviewer: Moonliteclipse (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Oh Snap!
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
That was emotional. I officially hate Edward. What a smarmy little prick to set her up like that. Almost no one can make me hate any kind of Edward, even Darkward can usually find a way into my heart. But yours is absulutely vile!! Well done, you. =]
Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaase update soon!!!!!!!!!! Too good not to have answers soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really do take that as a compliment that I can make someone feel that kind of emotion towards a character that is usually loved.
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
OMG! What a whirwind of a chapter! Action packed! I hope that you are wrong with your estimate and this is a much longer story!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
“Go Carlisle!” Jasper exclaimed. Alice and Bella glared at him. “You gotta see this from a guy’s perspective,” he told them. “The hot teacher and the willing student.” Jasper wiggled his eyebrows. When neither of them looked amused he nodded. “Okay, guy moment over. That’s horrible.”
I LOVED THAT LINE. ^^^^^
Okay. So. It was wrong of Bella to betray a confidence to Edward BUT I am glad she did. I am NOT glad she said anything to Alice and Jasper. It's not their concern, not their parent.
I was so pleased Carlisle came back and I kept waiting for Bella to bawl and tell him and beg for his forgiveness....
And then they're having sex and I'm wincing and hoping she'll STOP and ....
She doesn't....
And then she tells him and he does what ANY man with ANY self-respect would do, I think.
I cannot blame him for that. Not one iota. I blame him for never telling his son the truth and functioning with a damaging LIE for so long, but not with what he did when Bella told him everything.
I have to give her MAJOR points for telling him EVERYTHING. Edward may or may not be in a frame of mind to say something to him. He might not. But it is in Bella's best interest in this case to have come so clean. Even if it broke his heart.
Rollercoaster chapter!!!!!!
Author's Response: I kept going back and forth on whether or not they should have sex. I had to really put myself in that position - and it's Carlisle so let's face it it wasn't hard to do ;) - and think of what I would do. If someone had just declared their love for me I don't think the thing on my mind right then would be "okay, let's tell him about almost screwing his son now". Maybe that's just me.
To me, it had to be Bella that told Edward. It just seemed right that she be the one to spill the beans and hopefully make father and son come together again. She has to have more of a purpose than just screwing Carlisle, after all.
IMO, it wasn't a choice about Carlisle finding out everything. How many times could he break away from her to go back to break away to go back and then find out there's ANOTHER thing that would break them apart. Hopefully a clean slate makes it easier to move on from....eventually.
Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
I LOVE CARLISLE, AND I LOVE THIS STORY. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. LIKE WEEKLY INSTEAD OF MONTHLY (OR SO). CHOP-CHOP!
Author's Response: LOL I'll do my best! Can't promise weekly, but they won't be as long of waits as before
Reviewer: twilightluvr (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
do an epilogue please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can you also do a EPOV havent gotten one in a while
Author's Response: I'm flirting with an EPOV, but I'm not sure how that would go over since it's been Bella with Carlisle thrown in once. I do have an idea that I think would be great (if I do say so myself lol) for an EPOV, but we'll have to see.
Reviewer: MustangMel1968 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Oh my Carlisle! Those two are loving hard and fighting just as hard! Will they be able to resolve their issues and get back together? Please update soon as I love this story. Carlisle is uber hot and doesn't get enough love in the FF world.
Reviewer: rainsoundslikeheaven (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Why! Why must you leave off on some of the best (worst at times) cliffhangers!!?? I can hardly take it! You must update soon! You must...I can't take it if i have to wait!!
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
awwww bella... :[
uh oh here comes the talk....
Reviewer: Casper NZ (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I've just spent the whole day reading this :O I'm loving the B/C pairing, and was highly shocked with the last line this chapter, so wasn't expecting that. Can't wait to see how it all comes together :)
Author's Response: Oh, wow! I can't believe you read the entire thing in one shot! I never expected the last line to shock as many readers as it has, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't thrilled with the buzz its created. The update should be up shortly. Just waiting for validation :)
Reviewer: ntuell (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Oh, My gosh! I'm hooked on this story. Please add more! It makes you route for both father and son! Crazy.
Reviewer: peacelovedomo (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
holy cliff hanger! ahhhh! i cant wait to know what happens next :)
this has been the first fanfic to make me cry haha
i absolutley lovvee your story
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I really dont like the way Bella treats Alice through all this. Bella comes across has a really bad friend. She is very selfish, its so unlike the Bella we all love. I really would have liked to see Carisle play her out actually. I would have liked to see both edward and him play her out cause honestly, she deserves it completely.
Author's Response: I completly agree that Bella and Alice certainly have their moments that make you stop and wonder why they're friends in the first place. Especially in this chapter. Yes, Bella can be selfish and has a ton of attitude. But so does Alice. And none of the characters here are anything like they are in Twilight, simply because this isn't Twilight :) Can you really picture Twilight Carlisle messing around with Bella? Or Edward having as much hate towards Carlilse as he does? I love that Bella is sassy and bitchy at times and doesn't always play nice.
Honestly, I wasn't a fan of Bella in the books which is why I've made her totally different than the original character.
Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
HOLY SHIT! I just needed to pry my mouth off the floor. Ok so maybe a little exaggerating but really my mouth stayed open for a good five seconds after reading the last line. I wonder how long Edward has known and if his reason for trying to seduce Bella have been for that reason.
It makes sense for them to have not actually had sex. Its way too hard to fix shit after something like that. But I do suggest you do an outtake where they do! :) Maybe one where she's a more willing participant. Just a thought :)
Carlisle's phone call made me want to cry. I knew why he was doing it but Bella is right. She should make that decision for herself. Carlisle tries to make the better decision for someone else's interest and hurts himself and then that person! Maybe this will help open his eyes about Edward.
Author's Response: Carlilse really does have a need to try to protect those he loves. And you're right, it only ends up hurting himself and those he thinks he's protecting. But the reasons why he feels that way run even deeper than just Edward. They haven't been brought to the surface yet, but I think it will all come out.
Reviewer: Mia210 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
The worst combination ... drunk and hurt... I can count the times that I shouldnt have done because of that.... but Thank God he could say stop, not all the guys can do that. He must really care about her to stop her ...
Awww but I really hope that Bella and Carlisle get back together. They are so good together
Author's Response: So can I! Most of those times I wish I had an Edward to stop things, because the next mornings are very good. I have a feeling things between Bella and Carlisle may get worse before they get better, but I do believe in the end they will find each other again. At least I hope so!
Reviewer: LeNell (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
this story is ahmazing...bravo
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I have no idea how often you post updates, given that I just found this story... But, holy hell, please, please, please post soon. I mean, oh-so-soon, like yesterday, or even last week. Just hurry. That's just evil to leave it hanging like that. I find it odd that I was enjoying the whole C&B pairing... nice. And hot! Looking forward to whichever direction you take this. more, please.
Author's Response: First, thank you for reading! I'm so glad you're enjoying the C/B pairing. I know at first a lot of readers aren't sure about the couple. I'm ashamed to say I'm usually pretty slow on the updates, like every 3-4 weeks. But I'm trying to get ahead now so hopefully the waiting won't be that long anymore.
Reviewer: Mkystich (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! I hate you so much right now. You and your perfect smut, and your lack of tissue warnings, and your KISS MY ASS here is a cliffy bitches...HA HA get over it story. *Takes a deep breath* Ok so only half of that was true. I love you and your story and I'm so excited to she what happens with that sobering convo.
Lot's of love, Kris aka mkystich
Author's Response: LOL I love that! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. You won't have to wait much longer, I promise!
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: March 07, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
OH NO!
update soon
thats a major cliffy,
and Carlisle should grovel, literally on his knees!
Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I am so freaking glad he finally said something! I would have been pissed at Edward if he had no clue.
Can't wait to read Bella's stammering after this one!
Reviewer: LaughingWithEmmett (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I'm wondering if Carlisle thinks Bella's not interested in him and that provoked the break-up. Also wondering how long Edward knew about them. And the plot thickens!!!
Reviewer: Llewlynne_Rose (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
HOLY CROW !!! ;-) LOL now the party is starting! :-)
Reviewer: Juvarni (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Oh. My. God. I did not see that coming! How did Edward find out!??! What's going to happen next!? I'm so hooked! I absolutely love this story and I can't wait to see what happens!!!!
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