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Reviewer: coolistar (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

yummy i love lemonade

Reviewer: coolistar (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 2: Oh, Dr. Cullen!

W.O.W

Reviewer: coolistar (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 1: Coming Home

Omg let there be sex. lots of sex.

Reviewer: Riliz (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

I loved this story - I don't normally do slash, but you captured me with the promise of who will she choose..... But when Edward finally was introduced I was totally on the carlisle wagon - in this story only though. Or that mean until I find something just as good.

Reviewer: christina1199 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

You should make this a series, it would be AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: camkat (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

WOw!I loved it so much! so unique for a Carlisle/Bella story while still staying pretty true to their characters!

Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Yay! I liked this story a lot :) Thanks for a fun ride!

Reviewer: Thatstheway (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever

You brought James in for words of wisdom?? Who knew he actually grew up, what a twist! Standing Ovation for Edward going to visit Bella, delivering the pics, giving James a hard time AND reporting it all back to Dad... putting a fire under his *ss.  You got to love Carlise and his compassion.  Awesome flashback thru his young life...

Are you sure this was your first fic?  Excellent.  Glad you stayed true to CxB, and ExB did not do the actual deed, that would have killed... me!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews and kind words! I've said many times when I started writing this I intended it to be an E/B pairing, but somewhere alone the way it changed and I couldn't be happier where it ended up. Guess I'm just a traitor to canon things.

I do have another fic I'm working on, which should be posted soon. Hope you look for it!

Reviewer: Thatstheway (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

Well, that visit to Kate surely explained why Edward is such a fool.  He acts just like his stupid, cold *ass mother.  Glad Bella told Eddie the truth, glad Eddie took the trip to visit the Ice Queen. That conversation between Father and Son was touching, Edward finally gave Carlise a ray of hope for their relationship.  Now I need an apology from Edward to Everyone, and I need Carlise to go get his woman back.

Reviewer: Thatstheway (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

EPOV?  Somebody needs to kick Edward's *ss for knowingly going after his Fathers girl.  I don't care how upset he was with Carlise.  That was a punk, p*ssy *ss move to do to your Father.  

Excellent writing to get me so upset over FF characters :) !!

Reviewer: Thatstheway (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Oh Shit!  So Much Drama!  How did Edward find out?  How long has he known?  I knew that damn Edward was Trouble with a capital T. Excellent writing. We all know Carlise wants to be with Bella.  Carlise and Bella need to really talk.

Reviewer: Thatstheway (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions

No B-E-L-L-A, No !!!  Oh God!

Reviewer: Thatstheway (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Wedding

There can never be enough Bell/Carlise, Carlise/Bella sex ever!  I am effing cheering for these two to make it long term, marriage, kids, HEA. 

Can the both of them please stand up to the brat that is Edward Cullen?  They need to crack his smug face once and for all. PLEASE!

Reviewer: Thatstheway (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 8: Anticipation

"Hello... I'm Edward Cullen."  *** smiling ear to ear ***  There is just something about the name even!

Carlise is the man, though.  I hope he stands his ground, even with Eddie.  Alice is priceless.  I'm thinking, Jasper will be keeping her busy starting now.

Reviewer: Thatstheway (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bliss

Thoughts?  Ha Ha Ha

Hot and bothered.  Bravo Carlise.  Bravo Veletbutterfly.  Keep it "coming"!

Reviewer: Thatstheway (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

Great so far.  Glad Bella told the good doctor what she wanted.  AND, Dr. Cullen is a gentlemen, so far :) .    I'm hooked!

Reviewer: Thatstheway (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 2: Oh, Dr. Cullen!

Hand on her bare knee!  Oh, this is delicious.

Reviewer: Thatstheway (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: Coming Home

Charlie and Esme, and Carlise is Esme's brother... I like it!

Reviewer: Itsgrowin (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

OH MY....PLEASE LET IT BE ALICE.

Reviewer: Itsgrowin (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bliss

SWEET, Dr. Carlisle and Ms Isbella are taking care of business OUTSIDE. Now that was soo soo hot! I'm glad Alice was'nt around to interfer. I'm really enjoying this story. I wanted to review the previous chpts, but forigve me, I continued to click Next in a hurry to read more.

Reviewer: brookeanneen (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

I LOVE THIS!  I wasn't sure how I would deal with Carlisle and Bella being a couple...nothing makes me happy like Edward and Bella but OMG!  This has been wonderful.  I had to be TEAM CARLISLE for this one.  Um, WOW!  Thank you for this wonderful read...for keeping them together....and a beautiful ending!  LOVE IT ALL and can't wait to read it again!!!

Reviewer: sadie_nikol (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Wow! I love this story, btw! I SOOO did NOT see this coming!

Reviewer: miliredo (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 06:51 AM · On: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Great story!  Luved everything about it!  I didn't like NOT liking Edward in the beginning.  I mean, I didn't think it was possible to hate him but I did!  But in the end it all worked out and I just love happy endings!  I mean, c'mon who doesn't like happy endings!  Thanks so much for an amazing story!

Reviewer: Relwot (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

I just sat and read this fanfic all the way through, it was amazing! I am so happy that Bella ended up with Carlisle, although normally I'm not really a Bella/Carlisle fan. Thank you for writing and posting this, and for keeping me so entertained all the way through! Relwot xx

Reviewer: VampSK (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Hello again!  I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed your story!  It had just the right about of fluff, angst/drama, and smexy times.  Your story took a different direction than I originally thought, but I loved every minute of it.  I loved your characters and I can totally see how they took on a life of there own!  It was also nice to see a "reformed" James at the end of the fic.  Nice job tying up on the "loose ends" and bringing the story full circle to a very nice HEA ending! :-)  Thanks again for writing and sharing!

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