Reviewer: Scorp112 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom
Great chapter. Good to see the fallout from what has happened. And Renee has placed some very important questions in Bella's lap. I'm eager to see what her answers will be.
An EPOV would be great. Dying to read what's going on in that head of his the smug jerk! :)
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom
Mom and Pops speak the truth...
CALL HIM...
I think the EPOV that I'd like to read is when he meets his bio mom...and he sees the great escape that he had...
I wonder if she'll hit on him before she knows who he is?
Happy Easter to you, too!
Kathie
Reviewer: jabare (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom
I would love an EPOV, and I REALLY love when Edward whispers in my ear.....
Reviewer: gracedout (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
more more more!
Reviewer: Briseis (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
"there were a few readers who grew tired of the "old man sex"???"
WTF???
- Philistines!!!
well, me, I can't get enough of your lemons! :) Keep it up!
Carlisle is hot! Because of your story McNaughty turned out to be my favourite Cullen *g*
I really can't wait for your next chapter! I love your story so much!
xo
Reviewer: i heart pairee (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Poor Bella and Carlisle, but I hope its all for the best.
Reviewer: i heart pairee (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
OMG HE KNOWS!!!!
Reviewer: i heart pairee (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Great chapter!! I wouldnt be opposed to any E/B sexin either! But I do like her with Carlisle very much.
Reviewer: i heart pairee (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Love this story! Carlisle is so hot!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Now you're breaking my heart. And the worst part is that I'm all caught up with the story now and have to wait for an update before I'll know what will happen!
I would love an entire CPOV chapter!!!
I'm definitely going to add you to my favorites. If you post anything at all I want to read it! You're an amazingly talanted writer and I don't want to miss anything you might concoct!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment! The next chapter should be up soon so you may not have to wait too long. I'm also flirting the the idea of doing an Edward POV. I haven't done one ever before, but I have this nagging voice that keeps telling me he should have a say in everything that's happened. We'll see!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Ouch, Edward knows!
Have to keep reading now to find out what happened to make Carlisle break things off with Bella...
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Oh sweet Jesus!!!
*gone to jump husband*
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
Noooo! Please don't tell me she had sex with Edward (wow, I never thought I'd ever say that!)! I want this Bella to be with Carlisle! What kind of warped world have you drawn me into?
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Did you seriously think that anyone was tired of Bella/Carlisle sex???!!!! The way you write it they can keep having sex until the cows come home and go away again...
Author's Response: LOL my thoughts exactly, but there were a few readers who grew tired of the "old man sex". Thank you for your reviews; I love that you're loving this!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Thing's are getting complicated...
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
This story is so amazing! It's sexy and hot. It's funny. It's sad. It's written in a way that makes it utterly enjoyable to read. It has a flow and a rythm to it that just feels nice. You are an extremely talented writer!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 8: Anticipation
This is getting exciting! Edward's here!
By the way - a commanding Carlisle!!!!! **pant**
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Haha, he marked her! He might not be a vampire, but some of the instincts are there...
"Carlisle actually liked having both his balls. The image of them being shot off was not all that appealing to him." - The earnest and "matter of fact" way you phrased this is simply hysterical!
This story is the absolutely funniest fic I've ever read! I have not laughed this much for quite some time. Thank you!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
Oh, yes please - CPOV!!!
Of course Carlisle is walking away with a piece of Bella's heart! The man has a piece of mmmaaaaannnyyyyy hearts! Okay, taken literally that just produced a rather disturbingly weird mental picture =) I'm simply saying there's a lot of us who adore him!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Busted
Uh, oh.....
I love Bella's internal dialogue! Simply hysterical!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bliss
Paging Dr. Cullen... Please, I need a housecall!!!
Not only do you write steamy lemons but you're also hilarious! Two passages that made me lol;
"Bella was positive the Gods must have put her on this earth for their own amusement. Why else did things like this keep happening to her?"
"Aaaaand swoon."
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Holy shit! Talk about anticlimactic - to get me so hot and bothered and then just stop!
Love this story!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 2: Oh, Dr. Cullen!
This is hilarious! In the best way! Your writing is excellent and I'm thoroughly enjoying every second of it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you found it and are enjoying!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: Coming Home
Wow, this is completely different than all other fics I've read! It made me giggle and I absolutely have to keep reading!
Reviewer: Brandinm05 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Another fantastic chapter. Filled with angst, love, betrayal.... Absolutely amazing.
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