Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
Yay!
So, Bella and Carlisle end up together? :)
Reviewer: holly16 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
yay!!! EPOV!! this was a great chapter. It was great to see inside Edward's head and I'm quite pleased. He was so vulernable. I like that he wants to have a friendship with Bella. My heart broke for him though with Kate. And Carlisle, I feel like these two are on the raod to recovery. But I can't believe it's like 2 chapters away from being finsihed!!! This will be a story I reread over and over!
Holly
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
great chapter! Thanks for sticking with my favorite story.
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
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Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
You know Edward really wanted a better outcome with his mother. Some people just should not be parents. Great chapter - good luck with the next one. Cutting the apron strings.
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
WOW this was an AWESOME chapter, LOVED IT
Reviewer: hchambersmomx3 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
It was better than I thought I could ever be. Hard chappie, but a very good and valuable one. Kudos
Reviewer: LeeLeeLee (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
Great cant wait for the finish this is an amazing story far better than i thought. but great all the same.
I have a feeling where they are all gonna end up but ill have to wait and see b4 i no 4 sure.
Xx Leonie
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom
Well, that was an interesting chapter. Charlie knew, he actually knew and didn't shoot Carlisle?!?!?! Oh my god! I did think that maybe Carlisle talked to Charlie before he went to tell her he loved her. I never thought he actually told him before the wedding!
So Edward called Esme? That is interesting.. I wonder if he will find his mum in the school he was going to. Would she still be there? That would explain why he's been MIA.
Alice is SO falling in love with Jasper. *squeals* Right, Jasper moment over.
I love the relationship Renee and Bella have. It sounds so.. so.. Renee, I guess. I laughed when Bella was like 'he's a doctor' and Renee was like he's a doctor? Is he well known?' Lol! She is like a friend asking for gossip. But Renee is right. Bella needs to talk to Carlisle. Give it one last shot.
An Edward POV? Yep, I'd be interested in reading that :) I'd love to read something from his POV. And Carlisle's! That better be chapter 17 :P
Okay, I'm definitely stopping here. I've just read, what? 21,000 words of this story. As much as I love this story. I don't think I'll be able to sit here reading a 9000 + chapter. I'll save that for some other time I think :)
Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
Loved this chapter.
I'm glad that they talked things out.
Is Carlisle going to listen to his voicemail from Bella?
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Wow, what another amazing chapter. This was brilliant! The fight between Edward and Bella. I knew she'd tell him about his mum. I just knew it. But I wonder what Edward will do with that news. What will he say to Carlisle? And considering Edward didn't go to Carlisle straight away that tells me that Edward is in a hell of a lot of pain, emotion wise. Poor guy.
But then Carlisle came over! Oh my god! He told her he loved Bella, she told him she loved him. And then she tells him what happened. She had to tell him. There was no other way out of it. But then she said she tried to sleep with Edward.. poor Carlisle!
Carlisle's POV was interesting. I can't wait for the Carlisle centric chapter. Will Edward call him? Will Carlisle go looking for him? Whatever happens, its gonna be a big moment.. a lot of shouting, I fear.
Can't wait! I might not read more tonight. It's getting late. But I will read the rest. It is sad to hear this story is nearly over.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
Oh, God, my heart just aches for Edward in this chapter and that's saying a lot because I really didn't like him earlier... Such a fantastic chapter!! Tremendous job - really!! So sad to see this ending, but it has been such a fantastic ride!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I didn't like Edward at all in this fic - although, I will admit at times I found him very amusing - but my heart also ached for him. No one should be told things so cold
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Oh my lord. I haven't been reading this in a while. But that is a real shame. This was one rollercoaster of a chapter. I can't believe it. Carlisle started out so nice at the start. And all those comments about the future and taking their relationship further. And then he goes and tells her he can't do it. Its heartbreaking because I know he isn't doing that because he doesn't want her, but because he does want her, and he wants her to have a better life. But does he not see that her life is with him?
Jasper found out? That is interesting. I love Jasper. And Alice and Jasper getting some? I love that! Sorry, I'll get over my team Jasper moment...
The ending! Edward knows! How did he find out? Did Jasper tell him? No. He wouldn't do that. So how did Edward find out?!! I need answers! But Bella is so drunk that she won't be able to take it in properly. Oh no.
I will read more now :)
Reviewer: gloriousday (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Coming Home
And I hope there will be at least 1 more CxB lemon??
Reviewer: chukulun (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
yay, loved this chapter. I'm so glad edward and carlisle have hashed it out. i know b and c will end up with their baby room painted, all married and happy. love it!!! great work.
Reviewer: Kay Maria (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
I am so in love with this story right now it is ridiculous!
Carlisle keeps stuff from Edward to protect him, Bella keep stuff from Carlisle to protect him..... I love it!!
Keep it up!!!
Reviewer: gloriousday (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
Ahhh! I love this story. I read it all in one night. It's absolutely amaazing. I'm sad it's almost over, cause I really think it was one of the best fanfics I've ever read. And I'm so glad she didn't go for Edward. The whole older Carlisle thing makes it really hot. ;)
Author's Response: I have to agree! Older man are very hot. Mmm
Reviewer: ashleynichole10 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
NOOO! it cant be almost over?! im going to cry lol. but anyway that was an AMAZING chapter! super good. i love how edward went to him at the end and i hate kate! hahah update soon
Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bliss
Holy hell Batman...that was naughty. :)
Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
WOW...Carlisle is hott...!!
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
What a sad, wonderful chapter! You are really doing a great job of tying up things neatly! GReat story!
Reviewer: Ladyrose (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
OMG *sniffle* That was heart wrenching! You got tears! Sooo beautiful...now go send Carlisle to open his heart to Bella and screw her senesless K? Thanks lol
Wonderful chapter! I am so sad this is ending soon!
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
wow, ok so I'm setting at work crying!!! there should of been a tissue warning. LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. I I'm so sad that it is coming to an end....
Reviewer: Jenna (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
OK...so after reading this last chapter, it now makes me want to see this in a film version. I mean seriously, I can't even imagine how amazing all of the confrontations in this chapter would be on film!
This was great!
Author's Response: A film version would definitely be interesting to see! If only it were that simple to get out there lol
Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
"CLOSURE TO THEIR RELATIONSHIP?" WHAT KIND OF TALK IS THAT? THIS WAS A GREAT CHAPTER......PLEASE, DON'T SCREW UP THE NEXT ONE. AND SOON, PLEASE!
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