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Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
I'm crying. I've shed many tears reading amazing fics but this is the first story that's made me cry happy tears!!! Your story has deeply touched me and Carlisle and Bella finally getting together moved me beyond words!
I've got to admit that I was not happy when James showed up! I thought that he would end up causing Bella even more pain. You surprised me though by making him into a pretty decent guy who's grown and learned from his mistakes.
Thank god that there's an epilogue coming otherwise my happy tears would turn into sad ones thinking this was it. I need more Carlisle and Isabella!
Reviewer: Briseis (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
OH. MY. GOD! That was a fantastic chapter! great work!!!!!
I love your story sooo much and I can't wait for the epi! *sigh* can't believe that it's almost over! will there be any outtakes? or even a sequel???
Love your writing! keep it up!
Reviewer: TheFutureMrsPattinson (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
Awwwm cutest ending ever!
Love the chapter!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
It took me 45 minutes to read that, and everyone of them was worth it :)
This story is amazing, so please write another soon. This is the first Bella/Carlisle story I've ever read, and doubt anything can beat it. I love it, and I'm sad it's over. Until your (possible?) next story, goodbye!
Rating: 10/10 FOREVER! :D
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
That was awesome. Simply wonderful ending. I can't wait for the epilogue. This story was just wonderful.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
Awwww....
Okay. I liked the introduction of James, here. I figured he would be a catalyst and I'm glad it proved to be the case. He seems like he grew up a bit and was a good friend to Bella. Not HER fault if he didn't tell her about the gf. Though he SHOULD HAVE. But that might have messed up your story. lol
Glad Edward showed up. :) I figure he'll be a good guy too, someday, when he gets his head on straight. I don't suppose we could look him up in a few years? "What Happened at Jasper's Wedding" lol?
The reconciliation was not everything I'd hoped for, no, but it worked. :) It was like they slid together like two halves of an apple and that was very sweet.
I look forward to seeing your epilogue!
Reviewer: ebonyjorgieriggs (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
I loved it! Perfect last chapter....all my questions were answered!
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
I kind of like the fact that James wasn't the bad guy in this chapter. That he could be a friend to Bella. Of course like the fact Carlisle came to his senses even if it was spurred on by jealousy. Thanks for this story. It has been an enjoyable journey.
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
I liked it. Though, for a second I thought you were going to put Edward and Bella together! LOL
Everyone aired their dirty laundry, and dealt with demons. =] very nice.
Reviewer: Ladyrose (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
*sniffle* It's about bloody time! I do love a HEA! I owe you so much with this fic. You opened the world of sexy, hawt, experienced Daddy C! Not sure if I should be thanking you or kicking your ass for that obsession...I'll get back to you on that one. I loved this and I am so sad it has come to an end! Amazing work!
Reviewer: aswinfor (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
AMAZING. Which is why I will be sitting this weekend and re-reading it from the beginning. Reading it chapter by chapter was wonderful, so reading it in all at once should be even better. Thank you for writing a truly wonderful story.
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
great chapter, had me on edge, thinking it wasn't going to happen. good reunion, can't wait for the epi
Reviewer: hotNcold (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
I always thought that Edward and Bella would end up together and I guess I'm wrong about that :)) I love your story and I can't believe that it's about to end. I will miss this :(
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
Wow. I can't believe this story is over! I'm excited for the epilogue. I was kind of put off by the fact that he only showed up because he heard about James, but I guess I kind of see why. I was wary about James at first but quickly warmed up to him. I liked him in this chapter. It was just what she needed. Great job hon! This story was amazing!
Reviewer: kiwi vampire (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bliss
holy moly! great storyline.... phew just need to have a cold shower before continuing on. doing my happy dance, can't wait for Edward to show up and then this Fic will be perfect :0) mmmm Carlisle and Edward (slaps herself back to reality) hehehhe
Reviewer: hijaydee909 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
Love it!
Think I'll stop reading right here.
This is a perfect ending for me. Carlisle and Bella are together...
I dont have to read about Edward going to Tanya (which keeps
me from throwing up in my mouth). This is a great ending. Lol
I'm going to pretend this is it and avoid previously mentioned
Epi.
Great story! Thanks so much for sharing! I've been reading and
waiting since the begging and updates have always been exciting.
Hope to read more from you if you have any intentions of taking
on another story!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
FINALLY! Yay they are together!
Reviewer: Casper NZ (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
What a beautiful way to finish this fic! I like the way you brought James back to heal old wounds and get past the issues. Looking forward to the Epilogue.
Reviewer: buggybell13 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Jasperslover (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
awesome chapter, i loved it. I will follow you on the other site.
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
Finally, now I think they need at least one baby to go along with Edward. Carlisle is an excellent father.
Reviewer: vannaaaaheartsjacob (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
OHMYGOD!!!!!
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!
and I'm so glad that there's going to be an epi :)
I love the fact that you brought James in.
I just over all loved this whole damn thing!! :)
This has got to be one of my most favorite stories I've ever read!
I can't wait to read anything else you've written, this was great!
Oh and I like Love in the Mirror Room too :)
I kinda cheated while I was reading that though, lol.
I checked to see if maybe forbidden kisses had more chapters on ff.net and she did. Just a tip incase you're too impatient to wait on the updates here on Twilighted like I was haha!
Author's Response: I know! I'm temtped every day to sneak over there and read it, but I'm a sucker for delicious torture and have restrained myself.
I'm so glad you loved the chapter!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
I have to agree w/ the James thing. I forgave an ex, although he didn't cheat on me, he did break my heart 20 years ago. Now he's a very integral part of my life again & I'm glad he was mature enough to reach out to me. I'm glad Bella & Edward made up too.
Author's Response: Ah, ex's..can't live with 'em and can't shoot 'em...although sometimes you'd like to lol An ex recently reached out to me as well, and even though I had fantasies of dragging him over fire hot coals, I did give him that chance and now we're on pretty good speaking terms.
Reviewer: thisisme19 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bliss
Oh.My.God
thats all im gonna say. so hot! Love it!!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 18: Forever
I screamed when I got the email that this chapter was up. Literally.
Every time the intercom buzzed, every time she got a text, every time someone unexpected approached her, I was right there with Bella - hoping like hell it was Carlisle - and utterly disappointed when it wasn't. I cried so much during this chapter, and then my tears turned to happy ones when Carlisle came to her. Their reunion was so well done. It was perfect for them.
I'm so sad it's over , but looking forward to the epilogue! Amazing chapter - honestly!
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't think my heart could have taken it if Carlisle had waited much longer to contact her. Well, played Edwared ;)
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