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Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Loved it! :D Can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Oh bad-ass Bella with the last comment there! Nice
I'm not usually a big fan of non-canon parring, and usually what creeps me out the most is Bella/Carlisle but this works for some reason. Maybe it's because they're humans here, but anyway this didn't creep me out at all, more like the opposite. It was very hot!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
I was a little nervous reading this but im glad i did its a great story i cant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: mcarmen (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
WOW
SPEECHLESS
*GRINNING*
Anything I say really will come short to how incredible this story is. First the sibling bit between Carlisle and Esme... Charlie marring Esme.... Bella and Carlisle ..... Alice - enough said :)- .... Carlisle's son???
Can't wait for the next update please make it soon.... btw this sory is on my faves now there's no way I'm missing an update!!!!
Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Whoa! What a low blow from Bella! Damn!
Things are gettin' hot and all kinds of interesting.
I can't wait for the morning after akwardness:)
Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 2: Oh, Dr. Cullen!
And Carlisle makes the first move! Eeeek!
How is one supposed to react to a situation like that? I think I would have just melted into a muddle :)
Reviewer: PerfectlyPersuasive (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Ummmm....*snaps jaw shut*...that was hot! And, you are going to bring Edward into the equation?!? Father and son rivalry - I don't think my heart could take it. ;)
Reviewer: rt04 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Let the games begin
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Oh my God! I love this! The whole chapter was hot, then Bella's last line at the end was brilliant! I can't wait to see how Carlisle acts after that!
Reviewer: MeghanT91 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
ggggeoood i havent been so damn worked up in a while! you write some mean smut!! keep it coming!;)
Reviewer: CourtneyRose (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
ooooh, that last comment will get on Carlisle's nerves, no doubt
can't wait to see what he does about it ;)
keep writing!
x
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
WOW oh WOW, I am SO looking forward to more of this story, It's great! :)
Reviewer: vannaaaaheartsjacob (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Damn!
I hope you update this soon!
Lol.
Reviewer: jessnab (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
I have read this since you first posted, ridiculously hot. I don't even care if Edward comes into the picture . Dr Cullen is totally fuckable. looking forward to the next post and some penetration
Reviewer: forbidden_fruit (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Didn't think I'd like Bella and Carlisle together. But it's growing on me. And just a word of grammar advice - be careful with the comma splices. There are several and it really affects the flow of certain sentences. Makes you stop mid-sentence where you shouldn't be stopping. So just be careful there. Otherwise, keep it up!
Reviewer: Colum (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Ohh good tension...I love it
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Wow, performance anxiety huh? That was hot! Great chapter.
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
That was SOOO HOT!
Reviewer: mikrro (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
words can't describe how how this story is. why can't we have more carlisle stories here? the man is the epitome of sex and besides.... older men are sexy.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
hahaha that last line was hilarious! Great chapter! I think I would have done the exact same thing Bella would have! Cause DANG!!!! Carlisle is hot!
My my my I really do have to say...you are turning and burning with these updates!!!! I absolutely love it!!!! Awesome job! You are soooooo going to spoil us! Keep them coming!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Woo hoo! Go Bella.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Hot! So hot! I am liking this hot, sexy Carlisle. I am intersted where this will go. Especially if his son shows up. OR if Charlie finds out!
Reviewer: MonCherie (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
that last line was the icing on the cake!!!!! freaking hilarious :) lol Cant wait for more.
Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
I enjoyed very much!
Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 2: Oh, Dr. Cullen!
whew! I love this story! I have to admit that the idea of Bella/Carlisle kinda whigs me out a little but the way you write has me so intrigued! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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