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Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

Not surprised Bella caused a fall, but I'm hoping it will conceal their activities. Clumsy Bella. :)

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bliss

Oh my freaking god

Can I have him?

Reviewer: Mellz (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

OMG!!!!  LMAO!  I cant wait to find out who it is!! LMAO! Great Chapter!

Reviewer: Mellz (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bliss

Holly Crist!   What a great Lemon!    Hello Carlisle!  

Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

Haha funny! More hot Bella and Carlisle soon please :) I actually don't want her to get with Edward now!! Edie x

Reviewer: SyrenPrincess (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 4: Bliss

hot hot hot!!!

Reviewer: Mellz (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 2: Oh, Dr. Cullen!

Ohhhh This story is awesome!   I love how the connection is their between Carlisle and Bella!    And Alice in this is freaken awesome! LOL!     Great Job!  Cant wait to read more!  

Reviewer: addictedtotwilight (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

Ooohh! Update really soon!!! I really like this story! I want to know who caught them!!

Reviewer: Colum (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

Interesting chapter..wonder what Carlisle is hinting about in the car, does he want to keep it a secret or is he looking for a relationship, I guess we may never know now that they are busted!

Reviewer: holly16 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

Oh the suspense!!!! I can't wait to read what happens next!!!! Your doing a great job!!

Holly

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

Oh-oh...busted! Hope you update soon, you can't leave us with that cliffie for too long!! :D So, was that Esme?

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

oh oh, not a good time being caught, I really hope it's not Charlie lol

Reviewer: lattegirl (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

OMG epic busting moment right there. and i love the awkwardness between carlisle and bella, it is so much more real life than how those situations are usually written. fabulous work :]

Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

AAAHHHH!!!!  What a place to stop!

 

Awesome story.  Love the Carlisle/Bella hook up!!!

 

I am so glad Bella got over her cluelessness!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

OH SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

I pray that it's Esme and not Charlie!! talk about a cockblock!!!

Ugh. this is gonna be terrible when Edward turns up :( :/ :P

Why hasn't Carlisle had a long-term relationship???

Will Bella confess to each of them that she's done the other?

Will they have a threesome?

Stay tuned for the next episode of "As the Cullens Strip" 

>:>

 

Thanks for the update!!!

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

Funny! :-) I like the cliffhanger. :-)

Reviewer: Ironic Twist (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

Ah! No!  Who?  Who found them?  Alice couldn't have beat them home.

Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

omg. esme i guess?

Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 4: Bliss

oh man, now i don't know how that will compare to "the son" lol

Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

yep that was sexy. but now i wonder how edward thing will play out...

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

Oh my god. I hope it was Charlie and they had to come up with some crazy excuse. Please update soon. You're on a roll and I love it. ;)

Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 2: Oh, Dr. Cullen!

oh man. still warming up... but good!

Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 1: Coming Home

pretty good start but i think i still have to warm up to the idea of carlisle and bella =S

Reviewer: mika429 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

Uh Oh....I think Charlie is about to catch them.  I wonder how they will get out of this.  I can't wait for the next update....

Reviewer: MonCherie (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 5: Busted

Uh OHHHHHHHH lol someone or some people are in trouble!

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