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Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Mmm, Carlisle in the shower. Yeah, I'll take one of those please. Great chapter! Now feelings are starting to come to the surface for the both of them. I wonder how that is gonna play out. Not to mention when Edward comes into the picture...
Reviewer: twimom35 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
WOW!!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Awesome!
Can't wait for the chapter that Edward makes his introduction! As much as I love Carlisle, I'm impatient when it's already chapter 7, and Bella just found out his name!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
That was really hot, I loved it!
Reviewer: esmie3 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Hot damn! Thanks for the update! I can't wait to see what happens when Eddiekins makes his appearance :) Oh, and great job on the lemons!
Reviewer: TriTwiFan (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Hooooo-leeeeeee shit. That was some seriously hot stuff. You have no idea how much I love it! Carlisle. mmm. thats one sexy peice of man meat.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Pulse racing, holding my breath, adrenaline rush....
Amazingly hot. And Carlisle...Yeah, he can be my daddy any day.
(God, I just feel like such a perv)
The bit at the end was exceptional...Carlisle marking Bella...he's in deep now...
Reviewer: dg1234 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
great story line!!! i love the B/C pairing - I'm anxious to see what happens when Edward enters the story!!! Keep up the awesome writing!
Reviewer: sg360girl (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
How in the world is Edward going to live up to this? This seems more and more like a CarlislexBella story when I was actually assuming that it'd end up ExB.
But yeah, it's gonna be AWKWARD! lol. If this IS an EdwardxBella story, then it must be weird knowing you've done a father and son... ehhh. lol.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Ohhhh... a perfectly yummy Carlisle POV.
I wanted to tell you that this story is, um, inspirational to me in terms of your creativity and character management. *smile* I like the tight focus and explorations.
And the sex is great.
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Wowsa! Great chapter. I'm wondering if they will end up together?
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
My, my, my! There was some mighty hot stuff going on in this chapter. Smokin Hot! Great chapter.
Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
ahhh i want more and more! This story is soo goood!!
Reviewer: lizandzackfan (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Love it hurry back with more!!
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
I just love Carlisle. I liked him better than Edward in the books and the movie. OMG. They couldn't have picked a better Carlisle. I can't wait till you introduce Edward.
Reviewer: hijaydee909 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Thanks so much for updating! this story is my absolute favorite and I've been waiting for its next chapter. Very creative, love the plot! keep it coming, thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: hayleyjane (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Ahhh finally! I love this fic, it's really hard to find good CarlislexBella stories. Personally, he is my favorite Cullen :) Amazing job!
Reviewer: sochain is solas (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
holy-shagging-shit that was hottttttt. change of knickers is in order. hell, change of pants too. f u c k.
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Oh my lemonny goodness - your lemon (both of them!!) were exceptionally hot!! You get the dialogue thing perfect. I'm so a melted puddle on the ground. And yes - your Carlisle POV was awesome! Bring him back again soon...
PS - it was hot!! And awesome!! And freakin' spectacular.
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Yup, the cpov was definitely a good idea, especially at this point in the story. The shower thing was unexpected but awesome, can't wait for your next update!
Reviewer: brit77 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
I really like Bella and Carlisle together in this story and I really am apprehensive about reading Edward into the story which is rare. I can also see Bella forgoing kids if that is what Carlisle wants cause I really do not think that her character would want them after having taken care of Renee all of her life. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: strokesfan84 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
Heh. Carlisle is the hotness!
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
wow carlisle jealous already...wonder wht happens when edward comes along DUN DUN DUN :O
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations
OH man he is in deep - this is not good - what is going to happen with Edward and Bella - this is going to be messy....
Reviewer: KellansBBR (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
I like Bella's POV best but others are good to have. The story is good and I hope you continue. The sexy chapter was HOT! Keep up the good work.
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