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Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 2: Oh, Dr. Cullen!

Oooh my goodness.  Naughty Carlisle!  I love it.

Reviewer: Crayford (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

I do like what your doing with Carlisle and Bella but I'm excited at the prospect of Edward coming and shaking things up. I imagine it will cause Heartache.

Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Holly Crap! This story is frickin great! I have always been a reader of the Bella and Edward stories...but I REALLY like this one with Carlisle...its almost a shame to think Edward will be in the mix soon. Either way I'll take it! This is amazing!

Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

I want the two of them to workout :o)  such a different plot for bella but am so glad someone had the BALLS to get to it :o)   thank-you thank-you thank-you  big grins     UPDATE AGAIN SOON  Please

Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Holy shmexing! That was freaking hot on so many levels! I foresee some serious issues when Edward shows up if they are already developing feelings for each other, though. Should be interesting!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Mmmm, super hot - two lemons for the price of one. I love it!

Yeah, Carlisle broods a lot. I see a family connection there. I really like B/Carlisle here... Just putting in my two cents. :)

Thanks for the update - you rock!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Intersting!  I am still liking the Carlisle/Bella pairing.  Glad that we got more about his past and Edward.  I am very curious what will happen when Edward arrives.  I wonder how Bella will react?

Reviewer: holly16 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Omg! So good!! Carlisle totally lived up! I love how both are thinking the same things about one another yet they don't know it! Please update soon!! You rock!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

great chapter! udpate soon!!

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

so hot oh so hot

 

I'm very excited to see what happens once edward shows up and whats gonna happen then

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

When is Edward coming into the story?? please update soon

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

well...in some way, I guess because Edward hasn't shown up yet, and I don't know how is character is going to play out.......that I'm thinking I would like for Bella and Carlisle to work.

 

He deserves someone to be happy with. 

Having said that, I can totally say that I LOVE me some EDWARD!!!!!  But I don't know who she should end up with.  I know someone is bound to get hurt but I seriously don't want it to be the three of them!!!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

lol yes an oops would complicate the story. I love this, I was so excited tosee an update!

Reviewer: evieeden (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

God that Kate was a bitch. On a happier note though I'm so glad you wrote Carlisle's POV to show how conflicted he is over the relationship. I can't work out how Edward is going to fit into this scenario though cos I'm actually kinda loving Carlisle and Bella together in this. Oh well, happy writing :) 

Reviewer: if only (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Excellent story.  Completely yummy.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: jessnab (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Another good one. Carlisle is a hot bitch!

Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Ok I love Edward but I really don't know how Edward is going to fit into this story, because Bella and Carlisle are HOTT!! togheter.

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Take your time with Edward.  I'm fine with Carlisle/Bella especially since Carlisle and Esme are siblings. :-)

Reviewer: Ironic Twist (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Great chapter!  I'm surprisingly into this fic, considering I usually see Carlisle as too much a father figure for Bella.  But this fic really works.  I hope you're not too worried about E's voice.  I'm on pins and needles waiting for him to show up.  I want to see how this all resolves.

Reviewer: fabandfriendly (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

oooo i am actually liking the whole carlisle and bella situation. i didnt think i would yey cant wait for edward to arrive

 

LET THE CULLEN GAMES BEGIN

Reviewer: LittleMissSwan (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Great chapter...cant wait for Edward to make an apperance...he will be at the wedding right?

Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

As hot as Carlisle and Bella are, when does Bella meet Edward....... :D  

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

HOT! Carlisle's POV certainly lived up to my expectations.

Reviewer: Ucjackle (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

I'm hoping no for canon pairings, since Carlisle and Esme would be somewhat strange in the situation presented in this story lol. And as partial as I am to Bella and Edward coupling, I am really wanting Bella and Carlisle to work out. Which is saying quite a bit, I usually HATE non-canon pairings lol. I really can't see how Edward would work around the whole Bella thing anyway, her being his step-cousin-that-slept-with-his-dad-who's-trying-to-reclaim-the-youth-he-lost-when-he-was-born. Anyway, all this stupid rambling aside, I really like the story, and it's non-canon pairings- I feel like I'm branching out. WOO!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revelations

Mmm, Carlisle in the shower. Yeah, I'll take one of those please. Great chapter! Now feelings are starting to come to the surface for the both of them. I wonder how that is gonna play out. Not to mention when Edward comes into the picture...

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