I'd say that means some damn good sex, if they broke the bed.

i loved this story it was really good and cute i loved how bella grew to trust ppl and trust in herself more more ppl need to learn that
u r a brilliant author very detailed and creative i love that about u to me i liked this better than DP bc it was a happier ending and didn't leave u hanging but i still loved DP
again i loved this story and u as an author
well until next time
mbellaandedwardm

funny story.....loved it

omg...the lemon was cool but if any guy talked to me like he did to bella..i dont care how hot he was...that is a turn off...it sounded so clinical the way he talked....i hwould hope for her sake that he would loosen up by the end of the story

thanks for the story. I enjoyed reading it.

Wawa, amaizingness!  One everywhere you look!  I story is amazing so far!

"He was perfect, not in the no-fault kind of perfect way, but perfect because he didn't do everything right." -- I was just thinking this chapter (or maybe the last one) about how I really liked that your Edward was so ... normal ;-)  I think you did a great job with him!  And this Bella too!

And the meeting with Charlie was great.  Yay, excellent story!  And I'm looking forward to Devil's Pitchfork :-)

Two words I love....peen and fuckhot. LOL. This chapter was funny.  You write good sex but interestingly enough its never the sex part of the sex that I remember..its more like the emotional undercurrent that makes your lemons so cool

im having a hard time with this story..Let me start by saying I FREAKIN LOVE your other story. OOHH rocked my sox in a big way. But this story is weird..the characters are hard to relate to or feel sympathetic for. Edward is creepy, Bella is a loser/slut, Emmett's just gross...and its taking so long for anything to play out and the whole standoff thing is becoming a little unbelievable even for fiction. I'm gonna hang in till the end to see if I can fall in love with them but I'm not feelin it so far. However I still very much love OOHH. Its definately one of my all time favs so don't take my criticism to heart!

Unencumbered is such a marvelous word!

And I love that they're playing hide and seek. Seriously. This story is making my weekend, I'm laughing and smiling so hard :)

hahaha I don't know why but I am really enjoying the detail that Rosalie hates the mailman :D

Wow, I just read your story from start to finish.  It's  a truly amazing story.  I loved Emmett from the begining.  I do have to say I was a little sad when Bella thought Jasper was gay.  He's just way TOO hot to be gay. (sorry I had to throw that out there, I have a soft spot for Jasper.)  I'm glad everything worked out for Bella.  The plot was very interesting.  I love how all of your chapters were long and well written.  I hate when you read a story and the chapters are so short, I start to lose intrest.  I will be looking forward to your next story.  Keep up the great work.