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Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
i want him to live right next door or upstairs, LOL! Very interesting. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
The morning after might be kind of tricky...
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
Niiice ;)
"Fuck".........."yes please"..."whatever the lady wants" and then he threw her over his shoulder cave man style! LMAO!!
And Yeh You gotta Love a man with a plan esp Edward with a plan!.....We've got all night! *groan*......that Lemon was outrageously HOTT!!
Keep it coming!! lol ;)
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
multi-orgasms are great .
and so is your story .
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
Wow did they work fast. I'm sure Bella will regret it afterwards. But they have been wrapped up in sexual tension for months. Time for a little release. =)
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
so good.
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
is she going to run? oh no ... cant wait for more please !
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
Holy crap! Wow!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
really, really juicy hot lemon. I just love the way you build the tension between Edward and Bella. The passion and lust, not to mention the attraction that you describe, it's just so hot.
I can't wait to find out more about Edwards grand multi orgasm plan for Bella. And just what Bella has planed for him. I hope that the morning after isn't to painful for them, and that they are able to move on from this one night, and form a meaningful emotional and physical relationship. I think they have more going for them then Lust and alcohol, and I can't wait to see what they go throught before they get to the emotional stage of the relationship.
Please don't keep s waiting to long before you update again
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
oh I like it, talk about sexual tension, I can't wait to see how long it takes these two to resolve it. I also liked the banter, between Mike and Bella, not to mention the blantant flirting banter Edward and Bella took part in, very amusing and highly entertaining. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
Yikes, the ending made it sound as though she would regret it... that would leave Edward in quite the state, lol. Great chapter once again.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
Oh...getting "cross-examined" by Edward....
That's going to be one long-ass walk of shame for Bella in the morning...
Good thing she doesn't have to think about it right now....
Story is fun and interesting...Ready to post more?
Reviewer: um_oops (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
i hope you enjoy writing this just as much as i enjoyed reading it...i hope this inspires you to write more cheers
umoops
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
very nice job! please update soon, can't wait to see the best part
Reviewer: hoobastank22 (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
I hope this is one of those fic's where E and B spend the night together but then reality sets in later and they fight and bicker LOL..because I love witty banter between the two of them. And it should be especially good in this because they're both lawyers LOL..update soon!
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
Very hot!
Reviewer: TwilIghtee (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
OHhhhh i liked it! post chapter 3 soon pleaseee!!!
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
When there is so much tension in the air the only release is well release. I liked it.
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
I DO!! I DO!! I wanna know how Far Edward Lives from Olive's!!!! *jumps up and down*
And boy was he bold! To touch her face like that! and I guess Bella is in need ;)
MORE PLZ! as if you didn't figure that out from me saying I wanna know how far he lives from O's LOL. :D
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
ummmm, i do!
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
Holy Cow... that was HOT! I have to read more!
Reviewer: Autumnltd (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
Gotta have more - Keep it coming...
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
Yes,, yes yes! Please continue this. I loved it.
Reviewer: hoobastank22 (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
Ohh I really like this! Laweyerward is hot LOL..Update soon!
Reviewer: orpheus_chick (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
Ooh! Me please! I definitely want to know! This is looking good already, and I love the idea of Mike as a Ken-like gay man - absolutely brilliant. I also love that your Edward is confident enough to be so direct, and that Bella isn't running away from that. Looking forward to the next update immensely, K
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