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Reviewer: treeclimber (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 6- Legal Eagles
Can't get the chapter "Interrogation and Interface" to open, I guess that's chapter 5? I went straight to this chapter and somehow missed their getting back together! I think both chapters are titled ch 6 and that might be the problem???
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
What is the matter with Bella? I have to cancel,something to do w family,can't discuss, there easy,rt? argh, n he's got trust issues! Hmph,lawyers=liars. Convince me that Bella deserves Edward, otherwise I will take him away frm her !
Reviewer: treeclimber (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 4- The Morning After pt. 2
LOL... love your chapter end notes. You're becoming a sex fiend. Woo-hoo! Enjoy wriiting and I can't wait to read more! And I'm so excited, I have a few more chapters to finish here! Woo-hoo!
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
oh no
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
I really thought it would be Edward who would screw up. You caught me off guard!! : )
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
great chapter! i cant wait to see what edward says to bella!! update soon!
Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
Oooh..what is this drama with Bella's family?
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
well i knew that was going to happen....i hope he understands why she lied but i think it is going to take time....please tell us u believe in happy endings.
update soon
Reviewer: cgeor (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
i just had to say, this is by far my FAVORITE story so far. i love how you write, and i love that you write bella as strong and independent. hopefully it won't turn *too* angsty with the bella/jacob/edward thing (same for the bella/edward/tanya senario). PLEASE POST AGAIN!!
Reviewer: shellmarie (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
To be honest I saw it coming because it is really traditional. I am assuming that it will not be worked out for a while. I just think more of Bella and Edward. They seem to be very intelligent people. If so intelligent than why would Bella not tell Edward that something has come up with a family friend. I don't think that is any big deal. She would not have to explain the past just yet. Also, there is already conflict with the trial so why not leave it at that. I guess I just don't like it when people mess with the storyline when "cheating" is constrived. I like love stories that are pure. Adding this part makes it not pure to me. To me, it is just a turn off.
I will continue reading. I really do like your writing style. Sorry for all the comments, I just have to be honest.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
Actually more upset with Bella. Yeah you are the writer of her words. But not telling Edward an old friend came to town unexpectedly and needed to discuss her father with her rather than say she had work to do. Not too smart on her part. Not only will the battle in the courtroom begin, but with the jealousy from Edward will turn into the personal legal attacks on each attorney. One up ing the other to win a no win battle. Very good the way you handled the vague details of the case from each attorney's view point. We already know Edward doesn't like Victoria and her credibility in his mind isn't that great. So we'll see who will win in the end for both the courtroom and their personal lives. Update soon, can't wait to find out what happens next.
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
aaahhh mean cliff hanger. love the story though
Reviewer: darcy (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
I have always thought "Bells" was a ridiculous nickname also, no matter who calls her that.
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 10- Famous Last Words
Oooooh Loved it! ALLLLL the flashbacks were greatttt! LOL @ Bella walking into her apt to see a naked Edward in her living room :D I MORE than loved that and he could SO wait for breakfast!! No Need to rush :D
ok i can see this case is gonna cause alot of problems betwen these 2 :S
But i do love how they both can't stop thinking about each other :) and LOL @ Alice chanting Bella has a boyfriend! That was completely funny!!!!
So are they a couple now then??
Reviewer: tattoochic911 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
Oh my GOD! No you Didn't! You better update soon! Awesome story, by the way.
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
This is just wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: nessap (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
YES I WANTED TO WHIP YOU. WTF! UGH....
Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
This is a typical Bella and Edward moment!! (sigh) I just hope you see fit for them to work it out!! I cant wait until the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
Man, I guess they should have stayed in bed, but every good story needs a little drama! I hope it doesn't last too long, though....
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 11 Never Saw it Coming
Bad, bad Bella. I don't know how she is going to dig her way out of this one. She wasn't cheating or anything... but she lied and there was no excuse for that. Would it have been so hard for her to say "I need to meet with a family friend about my father"? Its not like Edward would have pressed her about it.
First, she flips out on him after an amazing night of sex. Then, she doubts whether or not she should stay with im just because of the case. And now she lies to him. Bella doesn't deserve him... she has been messing this up left and right. Send him my way, please? :)
Reviewer: tattoochic911 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 10- Famous Last Words
Great story! I just read the whole thing! Can't wait to see how they manage balancing work and play. Keep it up and update soon!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 8- Date Night
Ahh, Edward is a romantic afterall! Bella seems so singularly focused, she should try a little subterfuge to make things a bit more interesting!
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 10- Famous Last Words
well i think that Tanya is going to be at the office when Bella gets there... but who knows. And yes I like the idea of an encounter with Emmett and Tanya.
Love the story so update soon
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 6- Legal Eagles
when did they start talking again? last i read she ran out of his apartment calling him an asshole.. the rest of the story is awesome so far. just missing that part i guess.
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 10- Famous Last Words
great chapter!!! looking forward to the next!
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