MORE MORE MORE!  I love this story!!!

Hang in there, Edward...

PS - Love the story.....

 

It's such a good story!

When?! When is part 2 coming? I am loving this story, and as I was reading this chapter I nearly cried... Please let it be soon. I love how you've written all the characters, it's phenomenal!!!

So sad but so beautiful at the same time. 

Oh my god, I cried my eyes out during that chapter! It was so good, but so sad. I hope edward hangs in there. Update soon!

Okay.  I am sitting at my desk at work just sobbing.  My heart hurts.  Please let them see each other properly and love each other unconditionally!

Oh my goodness!  I LOVE this story!  I was bawling my eyes out...I made the mistake of listening to the song before reading this chapter...big mistake, HUGE mistake.  And yet I wouldn't change a thing about the sadness or pain that Bella is feeling.  I know that Edward is hurt by Bella pushing him away, but he needs to stay (I know, I know and I AM keeping the faith, I just needed to say that).  I love how real your story is.  Bella's mom not responding to her was so heartbreaking, but so real.  Edwards verbal slip, which made me chuckle a bit before Bella's reaction, was so believable.  Bella can't believe that Edward REALLY feels that way and she is so hurt and so scared and pushing him away is so much easier than admiting that she needs him and giving him her heart.  Oh poor Bella and twice as much poor Edward!  I really hope he stays and I really hope he can push through her walls!  I think Esme and Alice will be HUGE in helping her!  She is hurt, scared, humiliated, in physical pain, greiving both for her dad and her mom, and in the first real relationship of her life!  Wow! 

Just so you know, I am totally pimping this story out now.  I made a comment about good, good window lovin on another thread and of course had to add this story to my comment, and people on the thread were like, maybe I should check this story out...well now I am going to be a girl on a mission!  A pimp if you will!  Love your story, can't wait for the next chapter!

-Kari :)  (sorry for the epic long review, but wow this chapter got me good!)

Author's Response:

Hi Kari!

Thank you sooooo much for your review!  You TOTALLY made my morning when I logged in! :-)  I sincerely appreciate your interest and support, so by all means: PIMP AWAY!!!  Ha ha!   Yeah, I heard the Maxwell song and just lost it.  Nothing mattered but getting my thoughts on paper and I kept going back and forth between wanting to slap Bella and then hug her real tight.  The next chapter promises to be just as emotional.  Thanks again for reading and encouraging others to give my little story a chance!

Poor Edward. Hope he stays and helps Bella through her pain. You wrote Renee's character really well. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

More drama begins.  Charlie is sick!  Poor Bella.  Hope she let's Edward go with her to see him.  Knew the Cullens would love Bella, they always do!  :)

I'm wondering how many chapters it's going to take for them to finish the box :D

I went through this whole chapter completely confused...and then I realized that for some reason when I hit next it took me straight to ch6.  No matter what I do, it won't bring up Ch5!  It's making me crazy, because obviously something important happened in Chapter 5 - they've gone from her running out on him the morning after and him thinking she hated him to meeting up at a restaurant and acting like they're together...I'm so confused!  Going to keep reading though, cause so far it's awesome - but I could use a little recap of what I missed in the middle!

And you might want to see what you can do with the Twilighted people about getting that fixed - it's REALLY annoying!