Reviewer: Elizabeth Masen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
Great chapter -- sweet and romantic. Congratulations on completing your first fic. You should be proud. I look forward to your next one.
--Rondell
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
That was a great final chapter! I like proposals that aren't all over the top.
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
I loved this beautiful story so very much, this chapter was so lovely, I'm glad they are so happy now.
thanks for sharing your talent with us
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
awe - how sweet! Alice is going to be soooo jealous of her proposal! However they gotta get married at the courthouse - they're lawyers afterall! hehe
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
I love this story !
Reviewer: landslide (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
WOW, so sweet- loved it.....
Can't wait for you next story.
Amazing!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
okay, so i spent my entire day sitting here reading this story. By the time I reached the final chapter posted, I got an email that there was a new chapter. I was greatful because I didn't know how long i could wait for an update. LOL. Loved it!
Reviewer: Lilith19 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
Perfect sugary ending.Just the way I like them. :comes briefly out of lurkdom:
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
That was unexpected but i'm glad it ended that way. Good job!
Reviewer: nessap (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
THATS IT? WTH? NOOOOO!!!!! THERES NO CLOSER.
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
AWSOME!!! ;D
Reviewer: jazzy-cullen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
sweet! just waiting for the epilouge.
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
I loved the proposal. So personal and low key. Wonderful chapter. :)
Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 21 Moving On
I loved this - Bella dealing with her sh** and Edward confessing his sh** - TIS ALL GOOD AND LEMON MADE IT SOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!
Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 20- Goodbye, Pt. 2
Losing a parent is a lot like losing a part of yourself but also like claiming it forever.
Strange but true. This brought back a lot of memories for me too. You did a great job with this. Mental illness is like a death too - that loss has to be grieved as well. I believe Bella has some work to do on both fronts so it will be good to see if your story allows that aspect to weave itself into this new life with Edward. They both have a lot of the past they need to grieve and put to rest.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 21 Moving On
Nice XD.
Reviewer: DanySpike (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 21 Moving On
Thanks for the chapter!
Reviewer: illtakeemmett (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 21 Moving On
I am certain I need a smoke after that......whew and I dont even smoke :)
Reviewer: nslachey (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 21 Moving On
Well I'm turned on now!! Thanks for that. :)
Loved the update. Glad that Bella is getting so close to Esme.
God I love a good sex update! lol
Reviewer: jazzy-cullen (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 6- Legal Eagles
ok, i think something is missing here. you have a chapter skip or posted the same chapter under a different title. i'm confused and i feel like i missed something kind of important. like why bella doesn't seem to be kinda bitchy towards edward anymore. help.
Author's Response: Hello!
Thanks so much for taking the time to review! There was a problem with getting chapter 5 loaded and it never got fixed. Here is a link over a ff.net for the missing chapter.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5198460/5/Continuance
Thanks again and I hope you continue to enjoy the story! :-)
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 21 Moving On
love it
Reviewer: jazzy-cullen (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 4- The Morning After pt. 2
hahah! i'm glad you like writing lemons....cuz i enjoy reading them. i'm liking where this story is going....and sorry but i'm a lurker. i'm working on it.
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 9- Head, Shoulders, Knees and Toes
Okay, the story is pretty good but it's not really holding my attentions. I feel like I know exactly what's going to happen. Keep on writing anyways, I'm just one person!
Author's Response: Hello!
Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review! I sincerely appreciate your honest feedback. I also hope that since you've made it this far, you continue reading. I think you will be pleasantly surprised. I tried not to apply any particular formula to the story and unless I'm deluded, I think I've done a decent job.
Again, thanks for the review and I'm hoping you are able to follow it through to the end!
Reviewer: Myffieberry (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 21 Moving On
Will bhere be a sequel? I'm all for you wrapping this story up if there's going to be a sequel!!! Otherwise I'm happy for you to drag it out!
Reviewer: Myffieberry (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 21 Moving On
Will bhere be a sequel? I'm all for you wrapping this story up if there's going to be a sequel!!! Otherwise I'm happy for you to drag it out!
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