Reviewer: jaypat (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2012 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 20- Goodbye, Pt. 2
When I started reading this, I thought was was funny and brilliant. But now, I have no words. Still brilliant, but did not expect this.
I haven't stopped crying for two chapters. I understand Bella so much right now.
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 6- Legal Eagles
Whoa did I miss something in the story---she stormed out and they had an argument then the next thing she's waiting for him to call her and they're going on a date? When was the makeup session? I'm confused
Reviewer: carolinagirl2011 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 23 Epilogue plus a Teaser
I really liked the story but on of the chapters didn't pull up. So, I just read the next chapter that was presented to me. After trying unsuccessfully to the pull the one that I missed up. Great story loved it.
Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 23 Epilogue plus a Teaser
this is the secound time i read this story,it began without me realising it,i enjoyed it again,thankyou.abk
Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 23 Epilogue plus a Teaser
that was a lovely story thankyou.abk
Reviewer: Shee_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 4- The Morning After pt. 2
I absolutely love it so far!!
Reviewer: rencamwom (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 22- Blissful Horizons (vjgm)
FANTASATIC...I LOVED IT! I would love to read a sequel.
Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 23 Epilogue plus a Teaser
Loved, loved this story. I cried at the Charlie situation. I was so sad but over all I loved how it was told. Thanks much for sharing your talent with us.
Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 23 Epilogue plus a Teaser
loved this story
Reviewer: sully53 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 6- Legal Eagles
For some reason, Chapter 6 Alices's point of view won't load. When I click on it I am brought to Legal Eagles....therefore I don't know what happened after Bella slammed out of Edwards apartment!
Reviewer: Maur88n (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 6- Legal Eagles
Hi! I really like your story so far but I seem to be unable to read the chapter 5: Intervention and Interference; I thought it was a mistake at first, and that there was just a useless chapter but by reading the chapter 6 I feel like I'm missing a lot; I mean, it's going from Bella running away to them daydreaming about each other and almost dating...:p so I was wondering if maybe you could send me this mysterious missing chapter?! 'cause like I said, I really like this story so far and I want to know everything that is going on ^^ thanks already
Reviewer: Boxer R65 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 20- Goodbye, Pt. 2
"These last two chapters have been really hard emotionally and ......" okay. Thanks for the warning. Your story and characters are strong - but, just so you know, I'm not going to be able to read these last two chapters not after what you said.
Reviewer: Boxer R65 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 13- Courtroom Cockblock (vjgm)
That's cute - your comments that your characters completely own you. I'm still reading although it hurts how Bella expresses her hurt and then slides in an uppercut insult punch to the side of Edward's face. Hopefully, he'll understand, learn how to duck and do the manly thing - end it in an entirely masculine and loving way.
Reviewer: ilovetwi (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
hell yeah!!!
Reviewer: ilovetwi (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
hopefully he doesnt live far :o)
Reviewer: Pwright1959 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 9- Head, Shoulders, Knees and Toes
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 23 Epilogue plus a Teaser
Great story! Thank you for sharing!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 23 Epilogue plus a Teaser
Great story! Thank you for sharing!
Reviewer: concievably eternity (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 6- Legal Eagles
Emmm, look I think something is screwing with Twilighted, cause the last bit I read was when Edward said he thought she hated him.
So jumping from that to them having a date seems wierd. I looked on the bar and it seems there should be a chapter interventions and something but you can't access it.
Just thought I would let you know it is rather confusing. And there seems to be a bit missing.
Reviewer: concievably eternity (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 2- Come. . .on over
Emmm, is there meant to be a lemon after this cause if so then there isn't, it just comes up a blank page!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 20- Goodbye, Pt. 2
These chapters were very sad. I had to choke back the tears as this brought back memories of the loss of my mom 17 years ago. She was just 39 when she died. I am just so happy that Bella finally allowed Edward and his family to be there and support her - that is really hard to do. I know it was for me. I can't wait for their future together! Let get this going! (YAY!!)
Thank you for such a well rounded and dynamic story! (I love the lemonade, but also I love all the conflict and character developement too) You've really done a wonderful job!
Chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 1- Shaken not Stirred
Great Start! Love the way E+B seemed to be evenly matched here as well. Can't wait to read more!
Chyla
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 23 Epilogue plus a Teaser
I really liked your story. Great Job!
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 15- Clueless
Oh no. It's about to hit the fan! I figured Laurent would be on Victoria's side since that's the way it went down in the books.
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 13- Courtroom Cockblock (vjgm)
Holy crap! Freakin Tanya.. She couldn't have picked a worse time to show up! I knew shw was going to end up in the mix. I can't wait to see how this plays out.
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