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Reviewer: Brina328 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:59 PM · On: I Wrote a Song About Beans
oomg.. i love this one. soooooooo funny and cute!!
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Together
squeeee
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Together
Amazinggg
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 06:57 PM · On: I Wrote a Song About Beans
This chapter was awesome as ****! I cant wait to read the next one.
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Together
Oh, there will be blood alright...
Reviewer: derks_mamamodel85 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Together
Hey I love this story!!! I just want to know when you will have the next chapter up? This is a fun story and you have done a wonderful job with making this your own and I am so glad that it is not like the original story! Everybody makes their stories to close to the original. So, good job and keep going.
Reviewer: Winterstale (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 01:31 PM · On: I Wrote a Song About Beans
This was absolutely freaking hillarious! Poor Jasper....I hope Alice doesn't give him too much hell when he gets home. *applauds*
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Together
good chapter
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Together
And enjoy I did!!! I love our potty mouthed Sweetward! And I didn't review last chapter but I almost peed myself with the Cullen boys' shenanigans!! War Paint?? Lawn chairs to stalk Tanya? wasted Jasper? Horned up and buzzed up Edward drunk texting at 3 in the afternoon?? All hilarious and fucking priceless. And I like seeing where Edward is coming from in all these scenes...especially the pissed off factor going into the next chapter, which I am eagerly awaiting.
I fucking adore you and your story!!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Together
Whew, that was smoking hot! I love how much he wants Bella, and even more so that he was willing to wait for her so everything would be perfect. Of course, then there's Tanya, but we'll hear more about her later, I'd bet.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Together
Intense and throbbing chapter. WOW I totally agree with Isabel "The Big Bang" describes this whole chapter. Everyone needs an Edward like this. The whole world would be a must more heavenly place. No time for war, everyone would be just too occupied to give a damn about the outside world. Very compelling from his POV. Sweet tension to extreme sexual tension and desire just waiting for the events of the evening round down. Masen couldn't get to sleep fast enough for Uncle E. What a magical experience between them. Then the NIGHTMARE WITCH has to come over and cause havoc and destruction. Still don't like Tanya don't care she is mentally challenged, no excuse for her behavior. She knew it was coming she just didn't want to acknowledge it. Now one more EPOV for the rest of us to find out if Edward survives Tanya's knife plunges. Excellent storyteller. Never a dull moment in any of your chapters.
Reviewer: camri (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Together
OK, my husband is SOOOOOOOO getting lucky tonight. HOT!!!
Reviewer: shopgirl7000 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Together
AWESOME!!! Holy shit, so detailed, so amazing. Dear Jesus indeed. Great chapter!!
Reviewer: shopgirl7000 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Together
AWESOME!!! Holy shit, so detailed, so amazing. Dear Jesus indeed. Great chapter!!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Together
damn he makes me sssssoooooooo hot!!!! Great chapter!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Together
Love your Edward and his dirty fucking mind!!! He was cracking me up with the dear Jesus business. I think this may have been so much more hot in his pov.
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Together
WOW!! That totally rocked! Thank you!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Together
Loved it, HOT! Next chapter oughtta be a doozy too!
Reviewer: stupid_lamb (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Together
wow...his pov was hot lol
Reviewer: katt flynn (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Together
possibly one of the hottest cenes i've read.
Reviewer: Kisster (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Together
I LOVED the Dear Jesus lines. Freaking hilarious! I'm so glad that you are writing this from E's POV as well. I totally love his passion.
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Together
HOT HOT HOT SO FUCKING HOT!!! THE BEST LEMMON EVER!
Reviewer: bellanmontay (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 06:10 AM · On: I Wrote a Song About Beans
Brilliant! like usual X this is my fav story on here, in tie with bellas pov of this story.
I dont know why but i couldnt stop laughing at this
"I was going to answer, but was distracted by some sort of choking bird noise coming from behind us. We turned around, and there was Jasper. My tie was tied around his head, his eyes were just slits, and he was laughing like some kind of fucked up pigeon. Maybe he was worse off than I was"
It was bloody hilarious :D Drunk Jasper is a awesome, you should so right some more of that, it fucking rocks. Like ALL the stuff you write.
Love ya and keep up the slightly fucked up and bloody hilarious story and characters XXX
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 10:33 PM · On: I Wrote a Song About Beans
I love drunk people. They make me giggle. You write them so well. I'm impressed. Thanks for making my night.
Can't wait to get through all the mess with the main story (hint, hint). Dying to see what happens with Edward, well all 3 of them actually. Hoping it's going to have a happy ending. I don't think I could handle another sad story. One of my favorite stories updated right after this one and made me bawl. I'm glad I read this update last b/c it made me laugh. Thank you.
Hope it's not too much longer (for the main story to update again).
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 09:01 PM · On: I Wrote a Song About Beans
Wow. Tanya is way more of a bitch face than he realizes now!
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