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Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

This story is really sexy, and I love the last paragraph because it shows that Bella and Edward switch off the roles. It is nice to know they both play the dominant role at times.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Nice one shot.  The tension between Edward and Bella was wonderfully intense until the final moments of your story.  Great job.

Reviewer: cherforty (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Not the first time I read this and probably not the last. So good.

Reviewer: tamalady (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Whoa, I just went from the innocent 'The Perfect Day' to this one, wasn't quite ready for the difference.  Both are excellent!  Keep writing please.

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Accepting The Consequences

hey lol cool 1 shot i liked and the ending was cool =]

Reviewer: morgan_taggart (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Woot Woot!

Dom Edward, a little light for my taste but quite excellent. :D

Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

I like it. I like the domineering side too on men, if only my boyfriend was like Edward in your story! Good job x

Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Very hot...great one-shot. Yeah, I'd take orders from dominant Edward anytime!

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Wow!

Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2008 02:22 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Sublimely hot.  I could definitely get into more of these one shots. :D  As far as I'm concerned, keep cranking them out!

Reviewer: happymoon35 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 01:56 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Woohoo!  Sexy, agressive Edward!  Write more, please, and don't worry about the young'uns...

Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 02:41 AM · On: Accepting The Consequences

um... that was hot.  I definitely could have used more.  I'd like the leather and handcuffs next please. lol

Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2008 08:12 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Holy love! That was dang hot!!

Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 04:41 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

CDun, how freaking hot is this! If there is one thing I have no willpower against, it is dominant Edward. I would love to see you do a piece featuring even-more dom Edward.

Author's Response: Your wish, my command...

Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2008 03:18 AM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Egads.  So... you toned it down?  You post something less tame somewhere?  ff.net? 

 

RAWR!  I love dominant Edward. 



Author's Response: No, it's the same on ff.net. But it was different in my head.

Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 11:05 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

“I was born to tell you I love you"

 ... well isnt that a song already, I get an A in originality!! 

 

you get extra points for using my fav. song :P !! 

 

that was hot. 

Reviewer: limona (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 06:25 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Very hot. No need to hold back, you're among friends. :)

Author's Response: Thanks limona. I'll definitely keep that in mind the next time the mood strikes me to write a one-shot.

Reviewer: sacrificebehindthepromise (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 06:09 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

niiiiiice = )

 By the way, I love Secondhand Serenade. I'm listening to him right now.

  

Reviewer: mrscullen17 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 03:40 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

THat last comment better be your idea for the next story!  It was great and soooo hot!

Author's Response: Maybe... I haven't decided yet. I have way too many fantasies going on in my head right now to commit to one.

Reviewer: Beatless-Heart (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 02:34 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

WOW. I'm speachless! that was... wow. I would LOVE to see what your stories are like when you aren't holding back if this is what they're like when you are!

Author's Response: Well... I did leave out the spanking...

Reviewer: jules cullen (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 02:25 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

ohhh snap this was good. damnnn good.

Reviewer: Mystic_Ice24 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 02:17 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Ahh...right up my alley...and I love the Bella love....it's such a sweet endearment.

:Sigh in bliss:

Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2008 01:24 PM · On: Accepting The Consequences

Pretty hot stuff!

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