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Reviewer: kikirocks (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Risky Business
that was incredibly great i think you should continue with that
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Risky Business
Bella put cocky Edward back in his place after he was teasing her about dancing nude in their apartment. She doesn't do it all of the time. But by Edward coming home early it was great between them. Worked Edward into action. Great for Bella also 3x's. Wish I had a sexy resident doctor Edward too.
Reviewer: hillcrestella (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Risky Business
Miss Cullen - Love the one shots of human Dr. Cullen and his blushing Bella bride. I LOVE His.. At Long Last, but come clean. Are you going to give us the full story of these two human lovers? You have some good material - I know you do. Don't hold back on us!!! This was HOT and you have created some truly awesome chemistry. In my humble opinion, it would be a terrible thing to waste!
XOXOXO
Reviewer: WickedMind1901 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Risky Business
Oh Yes, The sexing was, no, is Very Good...
Hot and spicy!
Muy Caliente!!!
Much Love! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Risky Business
That was pretty hot.... and I loved Bella's comeback about how she had the radio on :)
Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Risky Business
HOTNESS!!! lol Very awesome...one of the best one shots I've read. Way to go!
Reviewer: stuckinreverse (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Risky Business
Haha that last line was epic. Loved it! Lemony goodness is always welcome. Good lord I need time to recover after that haha. *fans self*
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Risky Business
Very good indeed. Boyfriends/husbands should thank you.....dang though 3 times I'm jealous!
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Risky Business
this is good, i need this edward to talk to my husband
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Risky Business
HOT DAMN WOMAN! You are the QUEEN, the MASTER, the GURU of the most intense love scenes of all time! You never freakin' disappoint, Love!
I thought it was hilarious and naughty all at the same time! Good Lord. Edward in scrubs... God help us poor helpless females! (SHIVER!)
Reviewer: colourguardqueen (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Risky Business
lmao. hahahaha she outsmarted him. Great job!! lol
Reviewer: colourguardqueen (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Risky Business
lmao. hahahaha she outsmarted him. Great job!! lol
Reviewer: jaguarsolaris (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Risky Business
so hot and very funny at the end.
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Risky Business
Excellent one-shot. And such great news for His...at long last -- I've been hoping for an update :)
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Risky Business
Tasty lemony lemon...
Reviewer: amybo15 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Risky Business
Nice :) Can't wait for my husband to get home lol
Reviewer: justfornow (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Risky Business
That was awesome! :D
Could you point me in the direction of the contests that you mentioned :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Of course I'll help you out! If you head over to the forums (if you're not registered, do. It's free and awesomely fun lol.) There's a bunch of different categories, but if you go down to "The Craft" the very last hyperlink there is "Writing Challenges." Mine's up there, I think 4th or fifth in the lineup, titled Alyssa Cullen's Oh So Lemony Life Contest. The other is Neverland's Quote Challenge. The Age of Edward Contest if HOT TOO. If you loved this, you'll DIE for those entires (which I plan on submitting myself lol =] )
Hope that helped! If anything, PM me and I'll help you out!
Reviewer: hoobastank22 (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Risky Business
Wow I gotta tell you..that's one of the best lemon's I've read in a while!
Please tell me you'll write more?
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Risky Business
Mmmm. Yum. MAKE MORE PLEASE!!!!
Reviewer: Spoiledash3139 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Risky Business
O please write more! This was great!
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Risky Business
yayyy you're back in action and "his at long last" is going to return -dances around the room but with more clothes on than Bella in this story- that's awesome. i can't wait. This was a rather wicked sexward story tee hee it was great. yes the sexing was good. thanks alyssa.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Risky Business
AWESOME!!!
Reviewer: coondoggiedog (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Risky Business
The song is NOT by the Pussy Cat Dolls. It is by DANITY KANE. You need to fact check better.
Author's Response: OH SHIT! And I was jamming to it on my iPod....holy crap thanks! I'm fixing it now!
Reviewer: IntoTheNight (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Risky Business
the sexing was amazing. phenomenal. outstanding. gut wrenching, heart stopping, pussy pounding fun. :D
that is all.
Reviewer: cvap100 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Risky Business
I loved it. It was actally different in a good way. : )
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