Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Greedy
I'm re-reading your story so if I've already commented on this chapter here I go again. Your first attempt at lemons....very hot! I love your story!
Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 17 - The Moment
WOW that was hot!!!! ,,loved the chapter and cant wait for the next one!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 17 - The Moment
this was a great chapter - beautiful betwwen bella & jacob
the next chapter you will break my heart if the character that is lost is alice or jacob - i dont think i can hadle that
Reviewer: toooldforthis (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 - The Moment
I had a feeling that something was up with Alice. I'm so glad it turned out like I hoped it would. The lemon was truly delicious. Of course, before I could really enjoy my high, I read what you have "Coming Up," and now I'm all sad and nervous.
Anyway, I love the fanart you included. Very nice. I'm looking forward to what you have planned for us next. Oh, and congratulations about your award. :)
Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 - I Want to Try
THANK YOU!!! its about damn time!
Reviewer: bubbleskami (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 17 - The Moment
Oh. My. God. That was so hott!!!! *applause* I think I need a cigarette and a cold shower now, lol! Great job! Dude, I caught the "Acclimation Diaries" reference! While I was reading I was like, "Wait a minute...this is familiar..." LOL! Oh, and the "movie titles" mentioned. Bravo! ^_^
Author's Response: Yup! It's one of my favorite stories and I wanted to pay a homage to it as well. Boo-boo kitty is very talented, and her scenes are HOT! Good eye! Can you find any other story "references?"
Reviewer: KayKay724 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 17 - The Moment
Yeah - it was pretty good for me too. I know this 'epic' chapter 18 has been written already - but now I'm frightened on which character you're whacking off this story. 'Much-loved character' loss really really sucks! Especially Seth. I love Seth! If there was a team for Seth, I'd go to every game. Don't whack Seth. Okay - there was my weak childish plea - I've done all I can. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I won't give too many clues, but it's not Seth.
Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 17 - The Moment
That was really, really hot!!
I am so happy for them! But really nervous about the battle.
Please update soon!
Reviewer: hellenbed (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 2 - A Stolen Kiss
It's getting hotter! Bring it on!
Reviewer: hellenbed (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - I Want to Try
This is awesome! You trully have Bella down!
Reviewer: Kel-bel Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
Lol, lemons. XD
Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
Nice clue! I will be waiting with bated breath. I have to admit I giggled a little at Jasper asking about Bella's period. Love the story, love your pacing and really love your BPOV.
Reviewer: ToTheEights (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
I like you clue for chapter 17 ;)
Lol, very nice chapter, I'm a HUGE sucker for sibling stuff... 'prolly cuz I'm an only kid, and siblings would be fun :) haha
Keep up the A+ work!
Reviewer: dreaming in black and white (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
Aw, poor Bella! I liked that they could all smell how she was ill...and seeing all of the plans, I can't wait until we get there!
I'm glad Alice and Jake are making an effort to get along, too. Does Edward have to come back lol?!
Thanks again for writing - another awesome chapter! xxx :)
Reviewer: amberrlove (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
Haha. Super cute with the picture at the end. Lol.
I love this story! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one :)
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
Oh my God! I can't believe there isn't a next button on this one! I just found this fic today and couldn't stop reading it! I love it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! I'm going to have to check out your fics now!
Reviewer: mrsz (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
Yay lemons! For those who haven't checked recently, you should go to the forums and check out the 'Like Night and Day' thread. Week to week Ellen and I try to give a few 'hints' about the upcoming chapter. Stop by and let us know what you think might be coming according to the clues!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
Can't WAIT for the next chapter! Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!
Reviewer: LisiLisi1990 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
haha i love the clue..
but what is it about bella's cold?? it makes me feel uncomfortable
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
Great stuff!
Reviewer: Mkystich (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
Love the clue. That is sooo funny.
Reviewer: Azlady (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
oh lemmons love it please update soon
Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
YES!! Jake and Bella lemons, really looking forward it!, haha.
Good chapter by the way :)
Reviewer: xxDevil18xx (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
hhahahaha you rock
Reviewer: bunbun81 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Out of Commission
Huh...interesting...I guess she gets better? I can't even hug my husband when I'm all germy! Ok...I'm really hoping this is a bella/edward story. Its 16 chapters in and it doesn't look like it is...and I'm still holding out. I'm crazy I know. HOWEVER!! I'm ok with jacob/bella. You wrote it good and its a good story. And that's all that matters...
So edward comes back and they go at it right? LOL. :)
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