Reviewer: lyns13 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 - I Want to Try
pretty good chapter!!!!
Reviewer: ChellesCherubs (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Healing
I am brand new to fanfic!! Couldn't have picked a better story for my first time!! =P
Loving it!!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Healing
Chapter was awesome and so was New Moon!
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Healing
Another great chapter...I so love alice...and NEW MOON was fanfreakintasic.
Reviewer: Azlady (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Healing
please update soon i loved this chapter it was deep yet light perfect mix
Reviewer: Mkystich (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Healing
So freakin awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Healing
I like this Bella, she is much more sure of herself and of what she wants. Hot, steamy wake up calls are nice too!!!
Reviewer: TJB (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Healing
Another great chapter. Thanks for sharing the story. The way that Bell and Jacob dealt with there loss and pain was sweet but sexy. I'm truly enjoying this story.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Healing
AWSOME - I CRIED!!!!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Healing
So sweet!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Healing
What a great chapter. You were so right to put in the love-making scene after Embry's death. It seems like we need the life affirming closeness of sex after the loss of a loved one. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Sattinson (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
Great story
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
edward is always so freakin selfish....I really hope he learns his lesson....for his own sake if not his family's
Reviewer: Azlady (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
wow edward is maturing wonderful please update soon
Reviewer: KariAnn (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
Very nicely written, Ella! My poor Edward! ;) I'm glad he's come to some realizations about himself and the way he treated Bella.
-Kari
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
Oh wow..so Edward is gonna totally fight for Bella...I hope he does a better job then he has done... He's completely got his work cut out for him.. Its good to see he recognized and accepted his error....To see him in so much pain and hurt over his reaction I was so blow away by your ability to capture that...WOW... it was riveting.....Big ups to Carlisle for being the voice of reason... Great chptr.. Update soon...
Reviewer: beaandmarco (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
oh my heart just broke...
Reviewer: zee97 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
is jacob going to imprint because that is the only way i can see bella going back to edward.
Reviewer: carrellrd (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
I enjoyed this chapter,even though it was so fluffy, just waiting for the next one.
Reviewer: Twilightinmyheart (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
Ohhhhhhhhhh my heart is breaking Ellen. You will be the death of me, you know that right?
Reviewer: Esmeatheart (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
I am so hurt right now!!! I cant take Edward in pain. He loves her so much-but Jacob....he healed her. This is so sad!! I am in tears..I am sitting at my desk at work, in TEARS!!! I cant take Edward sobbing. How do I reconcile my feelings? I dont want either of them hurt. Please let Jacob imprint on someone and put Edward and Bella together again. Everybody happy-that's how i like it...No?
I am LOVING this story by the way...i check everyday for updated chapters!!! Thank you for writing such a great story!
Reviewer: TJB (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
Thank you for sharing your story with us. Glad to read Edward getting a little sense.
Reviewer: badbella (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
Thank you for the update. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter- to see how B and E's relationship develop from this point.
Reviewer: TeamJacobYeah (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
OK, now I am getting uneasy. Definitely NOT an Edward person here. If this story does a flip and becomes a Bella/Edward story, I will be so disappointed. I am impressed that Edward could even see how badly he behaved in the past. I just hope it is too late for him and Bella. Great story, appreciate the updates.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
Your last 2 chapters were great! How you handled Bella/Jacob and Edward's conflicted emotions was perfect. True to form Edward just doesn't see Bella correctly and Jacob knows and trust her to make up her own mind. Jacob could have asked Bella to stay with him while he healed and not go to talk with Edward, but, he knew she had to and he believes her when she says she will be back. (I loved Quil looking out for Jacob and asking Bella to come back to Jake, he's a great friend)
It was fun to see Edward finally loose his cool and and drop the f bomb, maybe he can change. LOL
I still thin in this story Jacob and Bella fit and hopefully Edward can move on and treat his next love the way he should have treated Bella.
Up-date soon!, I can't wait for more J/B lemons :)
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