Reviewer: gg1982 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 23 - One Giant Leap
perfect as usual..luved it. i luv me some jake 2..plz let her stay wit him!!!
Reviewer: Shawnie (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 23 - One Giant Leap
Thanks for another great chapter :) Now, if only Edward could move to another town and not come back...EVER!
By the way, I love your tweets: you are hilarious! Has your husband been chopping wood lately? ;)
Here's a prom dress suggestion. I figure Bella is young, so a black dress is out of the question. She's discovered her sexuality, but doesn't flaunt it - so "hooker" style dressed are out! So here's the perfect dress, I think: http://www.edressme.com/880171.html#
Keep it up and good luck with your 3 year old: she's a cutie ;)
Sh.
Author's Response: Rawr...no wood chopping lately, but he's constantly making every-day tasks sexy as hell! :)
Thanks!
Reviewer: InvincibleImagination (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 - I Want to Try
Just started reading your story and im really starting to get into it
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Hope you like the rest of the chapters too... :)
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 23 - One Giant Leap
Loved it, and I have no idea what the kids wear to Prom now days!
Author's Response: LOL...me either. I think lime green is "cool" right now. Ugh.
Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 23 - One Giant Leap
You are not alone feeling like a dirty old lady. My girlfriends and I are considering having an 18th bday party for him in Feb! He is SO HOT!!!
Author's Response: That's one of the best ideas I've heard all day! Hmmm....
Reviewer: precioustandi (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 23 - One Giant Leap
Well this dress, I think Bella would look perfect in for prom with Jacob. It is really beautiful, yet understated. I like the earthiness to it. It reminds me when Bella says that "Brown is warm". I think this dress brings that out. Though it is kinda longish, I think Bella can pull it off. Oh by the way LOVE the CHAPTER!! Keep on writing!
Say Yes to the Dress
Here is the link for:
http://www.promgirl.com/_img/PRODUCTS/320/PromGirl-406960309.jpg
Author's Response: Pretty dress!
Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 23 - One Giant Leap
I loved their date, it was so sweet and romantic.
I also enjoyed Jacob's understanding of Bella's need to have Edward in her life.
Here is a dress that I think Bella would wear.
www(dot)bestpromdresses(dot)com/shop/Jovani_1551096(dot)htm
Author's Response: Yeah, isn't Jacob sweet? Pretty dress...thanks!
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Moving Forward
How am I supposed to tamely go to work after that?!? I'll be smirking all day...<><3
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Talking it Out
Isn't Angela a darling! (y'know, I always had the feeling that she and Ben probably could make the sheets smolder!) <><3
Author's Response: I've considered writing an Angela/Ben outtake for this story. They're two wild hornballs! Hope you like the rest of the story!
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Overcompensating
Glad she's getting angry! Anger tends to make things happen...<><3
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Date
Naughty Bella! She should feel guilty and/or have her head examined! <><3
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Greedy
YUM YUM! That gave me an appetite, but not for breakfast!
Writing that first lemon is quite a transformative experience, no? <><3
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Everything is different
Hard to leave a review when I'm dying to jump ahead to check out the teaser...*grin* but, MMMMMMmmm!<><3
Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 4 - The Funeral
I loved how you wrote the funeral. I really liked that it had both a modern and traditional part. Its very important that we keep traditions alive for future generations. I also love how Bella is falling in love with Jacob. I cannot wait to find out where you take us next.
Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 3 - My Only Chance?
Victoria is proving to be one very slippery bloodsucker! I love how someone has opened Bella's eyes as to what everyone else sees. I think she needed that. I also hope that Bella is able to slowly get some clarity as to her feelings for Jake/Edward. I cannot wait to read further....
Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 2 - A Stolen Kiss
I like the stolen kiss and how Bella cuddled with Jake while he slept. I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: KimmieB (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 1 - I Want to Try
Great start. I cannot wait to see where this story takes us!
Reviewer: lovergirl19 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Reconnecting
I so need another add!
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The Funeral
Great job on the funeral - very touching...<><3
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 3 - My Only Chance?
Gotta love that Embry! The dreams are a nice touch. <><3
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 2 - A Stolen Kiss
MMMmmmmmm, how could she resist? <><3
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 1 - I Want to Try
Great start! <><3
Reviewer: Toula (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Reconnecting
Jake should dump Bella because he feels that she loves Edward. HE's ok with that. BElla wanted to dump him but sh never had the guts. Jake falls in love with Embry- silence of respect....- and Edward and Bella are togtehr. Everyone's happy. Including me.
Good, good job. <3 it
Author's Response: Wow...interesting idea. Just...interesting!
Reviewer: monkeymary89 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 2 - A Stolen Kiss
I heart your story! Hahhaa. I'm a new reader and want to devour the twenty something chapters you have up. I'm so excited about this story!
Thank you for sharing your writing!
More reviews to come-
Mary
Reviewer: Azlady (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Reconnecting
update soon please wonderfyl chapter as always
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