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Reviewer: vwbuggin1 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
I am still rooting for Edward:)
Reviewer: nemesisstar (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
Oh wow...this chapter was just... Gah! I really can't explain how I feel about it. I'm hopeful for Jake and Bella but I'm also really scared for them. They have such a beautiful connection in this story and I really don't want to see anything happen to change that. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: vwbuggin1 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 20 - A Fractured Granite Heart
Edward's reaction was very realistic of us "humans" when it comes to dealing with intense emotions dealing with relationships. You' must've been through some of this to describe it so correctly. Edward was a dick, but what else could be expected? I have hope for them now! Some stories I want her to pick Edward, others I want her to pick Jacob. Jacob is so great, but I still want her to choose Edward in this story. Since it's part of the Bella/Jake Chronicles, I assume she is going to pick Jake:)
Reviewer: vwbuggin1 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Mirage
Now I am worrying she isn't going to want Edward back when he shows up..Darn.
Reviewer: Azlady (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
please update soon
Reviewer: vwbuggin1 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Overcompensating
“It should have been you,” I whispered to the empty rocking chair, my eyes welling up again. “Why wasn’t it you? Why did you leave me?
Ugh, that part about made me cry. This story is reminding me of something I went through in my life.
Very powerful writing:) I am currently reading so many Jacob/Bella stories right now, but this is the most realistic I have seen so far with Bella's feelings. Of course I'd prefer her to pick Edward, but that doesn't always happen in a similiar real-life situation. The situation your writing parallels in my life, I stayed with the "Jacob" guy, when the one who left me did come back.
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
omg.i love this story. I have thought about reading it for some time but never made time to do it.so tonight i decided to finally read it. its awesome and i love all the pics you've included in it.
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
This was a very beautiful chapter... so there is still a chance that Jake can imprint on Bella... I totally think it will happen but she's more then likely gonna have to fully let the Cullens go..or it will happen when Jake embraces being the alpha.. either way I can't wait to see when and if it does.. Update soon :)
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
God I was so worried, I couldn't figure out why Jacob was so distant, Damn that Sam! Thank god for Emily!!!!!!!
With other stories that I've read, on this fam-site, I like the idea that Jake doesn't imprint on Bella because his love for her has always been there and that it's been the deepest kind of love there is...but for this story.... I hope Jacob imprints on Bella, I think it would be magical!
As for other characters, Billly, Charlie and Emily!
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
Oh there is still hope for them. I just love Bella and Jacob.
Reviewer: toothpick (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
Awww I'm glad the elders are pulling for Bella and Jake I hope they do imprint on each other!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
Damn, I want him to imprint on Bella...I think...I'm so confused!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
Great chapter! I'm so glad that Jacob talked to Bella in this chapter; I thought I was going to have wait until next chapter! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Much2shy142 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
Emily is pretty cool. Im curious about the tribal elders, though. It would be sweet if you introduced one of them.
Reviewer: twilightluvr (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 25 - A Twist of Fate
that so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he better imprint on bella. also edward is so sad he doesnt deserve this maybe tanya could come and help.
Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Baby Steps
aww maan i feel so sorry for edward that im starting to not like jake wow i really want bella to end up with edward! poor edward!,,,, loved the chapter and cant wait for the next one!
Reviewer: tmc1979 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Baby Steps
Love this chapter! Keep em coming! You do a great job!
Reviewer: princess_lesa (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Baby Steps
I'm glad they are trying to be friends. That cannot be easy. I look forward to the next update (and more Jacob) soon.
Reviewer: Slim504 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Greedy
You can squeeze the lemon a little harder next time! ;)
Reviewer: hellenbed (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Baby Steps
More please!
Reviewer: badbella (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Baby Steps
Very good chapter. I really like the idea of a Bella/Edward friendship. That is what was sadly missing in the books(NM-BD).
Reviewer: cryztal (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Baby Steps
I really like LN&D. It's a great story and even though I've only just begun reading it, I'm looking forward to more chapters. Congratulations, and I'll be watching for updates! Thanks for sharing your work with us!
Reviewer: dreaming in black and white (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Baby Steps
I absolutely adored this, and the last chapter! They were brilliant - I really like the juxtaposition of Bella hanging out with eacah of her 'families', and it made me grin like an idiot! Collin and Charity are adorable...I'm a little sad about the lack of Paul/Rachel...unless he's her secret boyfriend? That would be funny...
The food looks amazing. I'm really hungry now.
Edward nearly kissing Bella was brilliant! I'm starting to feel a little more sorry for him, but still a die-hard Bella/Jake shipper in this story. I love how you write them together XD
THanks for another awesome chapter! xxx :)
Reviewer: JustSarah (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Baby Steps
I completely and utterly in love with this story. I always wondered what it would be like if Bella and Jacob were to get together, and Im just stoked that you actually did it! I'm a little worried that you're going to have Bella pick Edward over Jacob in the end and Im not sure that I would like that.....but thus far this is my absolute favorite fan fiction that I've ever read.
Reviewer: kchan (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Date
i'm a huge bella/jacob fan but i think that was a smart, appropriate way to end the chapter. It makes total sense that Bella would be this conflicted; that she would think of Edward when exploring a physical intimacy that she was never able to reach with him. Just because you're healing doesn't mean you won't scar.
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