I'm glad you did that. Frankly, I'm glad you brought Edward back, because I think without that sort of closure, Bella would always have wondered if Edward were coming back.

This was a beautifully written scene. Gut wrenching. Heart breaking. Perfect.

I love this chapter.  I think that now that she has let Edward gp then she will definately imprint with Jacob.  This chapter was sweet and sad at the same time.  I truly loved it.

oh, poor edward!  but so well written!  and i see where this is going, which is truly ingenious on your part!  love it!

Edward in pain=RoseArcadia wanna slap EllaB!  LOL, J/K, loved it, perfect!  All makes sense now!

:(  poor eddie.... Jake better imprint on her now! lol. I'm sad.. one more chapter??

write more

i'm loving your story but i'm team edward all the way so be nice to him please! *

I am not going to lie, after watching New Moon I felt pissed. I read all of the books quite some time ago and was just unhappy with the way the last two went. I felt that Bella was spineless and selfish. I really liked the chemistry that I felt between Jacob and Bella and I felt like his imprint in the last book was strange, creepy and was Meyers' way of throwing Jacob a bone. No pun intended. So, my sister talked me into watching New Moon and I did, and while I enjoyed every second of Jacob (they made an amazing casting choice with him!) it made me remember how unhappy I was with the way things turn out in the stories. After my incessant complaining about how things shoulda, woulda, coulda gone, my sister sent me here. For the sake of my sister's sanity and my own, I say THANK YOU to EllaB!! This story has been amazing! Regardless of how it ends at this point (which I am excited to find out) I fill like the story of Jacob and Bella has finally been given justice! Where do I even begin?!? First, I love how you have given Bella her spine back. I love that she is making choices for herself and isn't throwing off all of those who love and care for her in reaction to what seems like a chemically induced obsession with Edward. I also think you have given depth to some of the characters that just wasn't there previously. I love your Alice. She is sweet, charming and caring while a little sassy at the same time! What girl in this world doesn't wish for a best friend like Alice?! I love the support that Billy and Charlie give the kids, I love the closeness you represent on the Res and the wolf pack, especially the "wolf girls". I don't even know where to begin with your Jacob! You have managed to intertwine a man and a boy in a very realistic and very appealing manner. I could go on and on, but I will hold myself back! :) Finally, I think the true success of your story is that I think about it all the time. Whenever I get my hands on a really good book, I am turning the story around and around in the back of my mind constantly, even while doing other things. It is always there calling to me, giving me something to look forward to during my next free moment. Your story has done just that! Shamefully, I must admit that I even took my laptop to work so that I could steal a few seconds to read here and there. You should write books! You have talent, and I would be one of the first to snatch your stories off the shelf. Thank you for sharing this and putting my twilight angst to rest! 

Wow, I wish my prom had been...half that, um, momentous! <><3

AHHHH! Im dying here waiting for you to finish the story! I just have to say that I really like your writing, its very grabbing and it makes me feel in the moment unlike alot of fanfiction and that your a very professional writer. I really hope you decide to write more Jacob and Bella fanfiction (iv had a hard time finding decent stuff!) Anyways thanks for the intertesting ideas that Ill be thinking of instead of working :)

 

Ahhhhh.

 

I want more. NOW!

This isn't so much a review as an OMG I LOVE THIS STORY =)

YOu do an AMAZING job with the writing, and I hope, hope, hope I don't have long to wait for the final chapters!

GREAT story! You are really talented - I cried a few times! And then I was all Jacob Jacob but I couldn't help but feel bad for Edward - I think my mind was trained to root for him! hehe.

But NOW (and for the last few chapter) I've definitely been all Jacob again, and he had BETTER imprint on her.

Though I'm sure that's coming ;D

LOVE IT!