Wow - Bella took Jake by surprise.  Like your bold Bella.

Loved Bella trying to "touch as much sun as possible" and having a "million adjectives" on the tip of her tongue when asked how Jake looked in a suit.  Loved Jake's ears "if they could move, they'd be twitching to hear any sound."  You have terrific descriptive phrases.  Glad Bella was more worried about what might happen to Jake than to herself.  Enjoyed Embry's "lecture" to Bella - can't imagine how annoying the pack mind would be in reality, someone always knowing what you are thinking or dreaming about.

Discovered your story a few months ago and started reading it, but being new to the whole fan fiction environ, I must have lost track of it.  Hate alerts because I have too much to deal with in my email now.  Have the process of keeping track of favorites under control now, so am starting over again.  I am a lousy reviewer - love to read, but hate to stop and comment even though I know how hard you writers all work to provide us with these outstanding stories.

Love the moving pix in your story - kind of got caught up in the loop of Jacob about to kiss Bella in this one.  Almost makes me want to go back and be a teenager again - naah!

Liked the Edward voice telling her to be happy instead of warning her - don't remember that in the SM stories.  Loved that it was not the longing in Jacob's eyes (which I am certain Bella would have been aware of), but the pain and tears that caused her to cross her self-imposed boundaries.  Enjoyed your hot and cold dream - quite appropriate.

How absolutely lovely! Perfect closure for all the troubles/doubts/pain; it was a very nice touch that Edward brought her to the place where all this could take place.(Sorry to be so long on the r&r, sweetie - RL is kicking my but these days)

I have to admit tho' that I was just a trifle distracted *blush* at the thought of being surrounded by all those naked, hunky wolves! I'll be smiling today... ;D

THIS STORY WAS FREAKIN' AWESOME!!!

Wow, well done!

This whole time I was sure that Jake would imprint on someone else and Bella would end up with Edward.

Despite my B/E preferece, I really loved the ending. I hope Edward does find someone. I hope you write a sequal!

I really enjoyed reading thia story. I loved the thought and care you put in. Looking forward to the epilogue!

oh..YESSSSSSSSS..OH YESSSSSSSSS..I WAS WEEPING WITH JOY, WITH SADNESS..WITH..COMPLETE EUPHORIC COMPLETENESS!!  lordy woman..this is fantastic..why couldn't SM have thought of this? why?!!!  you captured the emotion, the fear, the apprehension of the moment so perfectly.  Edward..i hurt for him to.  this was sheer genius. thank you so much.  god. is it really over? really?  sigh..what shall i do now?

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Excellent!!!  I have looked forward to each and every chapter and I anxiously await the Epilogue.  I will be sad to see it over.

it was perfect.  i was teary eyed thinking of how this very well could've been, adn should've been in the real story.  you made more sense in this, you put the pieces together, and made them fit seamlessly.  gawd..if only. 

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I really appreciate your version of the story, having Bella go to the funeral. I always thought it was *odd* that Harry's death barely seemed to bother her in canon. Great story!

oh..oh..oh..i need a cold shower..something stiff..something..there.  it was so good.  this was sooo..intense.  not sure why..maybe because i know its getting near to the end?  or, maybe because ive fallen for Jacob in this story to?  with each chapter read, the more i adore him.  i love him with your Bella, i love her with him..i keep picturing Taylor in diferent moments in the movie..and your bits of referance with the gifs and such..help to.  god..will you mary me.  sigh.  and the embry deal. i cried.  i felt badly for poor abbey to.  was relieved you had the pack not angry with her for the slip.

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I love this story, and i cried!!!!

I have to say this is my favorite story

I always hate to see loved characters hurt or killed in ff, but at the same time it makes it, I don't know...more interesting somehow. You just don't see it coming. And since they are loved, you find yourself more emotionally involved as a result.