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Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 24
what is this reappearing voice? are we in the matrix?
Author's Response: LOL, that's a great idea! Twilight in the matrix? Would the matrix be all human and real life have vampires?
The voice will, if not before, be explained by the end of the story. The trick is to try to figure it out earlier.
And thank you so much for reviewing, and we hope you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 24
I just picked up the story - I absolutely love it! It is very unique.
Author's Response: Thank you, and we hope you continue to enjoy it!
Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 24
Aww!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! *Cries*
Author's Response: Thank you! Another chapter should be going up tonight.
Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 24
ok this omnipotent voice...is it like an angel or spirit of some kind? OK that was earth shattering!! I loved it and keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much and...well, we can't answer you yet, but you'll have a better idea by the end of the story.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 24
You ladies sure know how to brighten up a Monday morning! :-)
I love how you update so frequently!
Awesome as always!
Author's Response: Thank you! Another chapter should be making it up tonight.
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 24
Awesome!! What is it????
Author's Response: Hmm...really can't answer that. Yet ;-)
Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 24
More Please!!???
Author's Response: Thanks, and another chapter should post tonight.
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 24
Very cool chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 24
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! love it
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Delphius2004 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 24
Wow that was intense. Your story just keeps intriguing me more and more. As always looking forward to the next update. Thanks! Your doing a wonderful job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much...from both of us.
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 24
Good one, hurt to read.
So this 'pulsating thing'... An angel? Something sent by God? An alien LOL?
Just know, ladies, you made this girl happy with an update :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The pulsating thing...you'll get more hints as it goes on, and at the end...a bigger hint. LOL Thank you again!
Reviewer: Abco2008 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 24
Oh Edward, have you left it too late? Is she too distraught to trust herself to you again? Trying to do what he thinks is the right thing is only causing hurt to all parties, might be time to talk to Bella about what she might like in the relationship - I think it's pretty obvious that she isn't happy!
Great story. Again thanks for the fast updates, loving it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Part of this chapter is a lesson in how much it can hurt someone even if you remain with them physically.
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 24
Okay, I am SO spoiled. Three chapters to read in one night!
This has to be the saddest chapter ever! Poor Bella! Edward's withdrawl, for lack of a better word, was the cruelest kind of torture. Sort of like Tantalus from mythology.
And Edward truly missed the boat and needs to learn some lessons about being a couple - he doesn't get to make all the decisions in their relationship. They should make them together, right?
All I can say is thank goodness for their supernatural guardian - whatever it is. It managed the impossible: getting Edward's head out of his ass. Sorry - I know that's harsh, but he really put Bella in a lot of pain needlessly. Very interesting the last two words of this chapter - sounds like we haven't seen the last of their guardian.
Author's Response: No, not the last. Nor will Edward's behavior go...unnoticed.
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 23
Holy crow - I get another chapter! Going to bed early last night may have had some advantages after all! Thank goodness I didn't have to wait - it was killing me!
Okay, now that I've read the chapter, Edward's guilt is killing me. Yes, it's understandable - but wow, he doesn't give himself any breaks at all. No room for error is his motto. I suppose that I can understand him overreacting since this error nearly cost him Bella.
I also suppose that I should be grateful that he's not going to leave Bella. Although, I'm not sure that he's come up with a good solution. He's closing the barn door after the horse, if you know what I mean?
Author's Response: It can be harder to stay, right? Sometimes that's not the only solution.
And thank you!
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 22
Well, hell! You sure know how to ruin the mood! There I was, all proud of Edward and Bella because they seemed to have graduated to Fun Games for Lovers, and whammo! Bella's clumsiness and general bad luck kick in and Edward's bad luck via a loss of control isn't far behind.
I'm telling you: those kids are perfect for each other. They mirror each other in so many ways.
And now I'm predicting Edward's going to go all noble on Bella's ass. Maybe even run away, which would totally suck because I'm not sure that Bella can survive without him. I suppose he might be okay in the dreams, but his guilt complex may even deny him that outlet. And then Bella really will be alone, which will feel horrible after finally living. She'll know what she's missing.
Ugh! What a mess!
Maybe Esme or Carlisle will talk some sense into Edward!
Author's Response: Keep....reading...
LOL. And thank you!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 24
Wow, you've got the tears flowing again. Loved this chapter just like all 23 others!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I think we should have provided tissues with this chapter.
Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 24
Phenomenal chapter! The emotion just grabs you and wrings you out. I love the magic in your story, magic that even Edward doesn't understand. What is this void? I can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Thank so so much! And way or another, the "void" will be explained as we move towards the end...sorta.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 24
Wow! Very intense chapter. Made me cry. Hope things start to get better for them now.
Author's Response: Thank you...and it was a very emotional chapter to write as well.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 24
Okay, just again - BEAUTIFUL! You write so well. I really feel the pain. I hope he changes her!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, from both of us. Keep reading ;-)
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 23
A very good sample of eddie's logic...!!!! Good job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 23
oh.....you're doing this, huh? I hate seeing sweet Bella sad.
Author's Response: Aww, hope you'll hang in there with us. Edward's not booking any flights just yet . . . Think of this this way: sometimes challenges can make our favorite couple stronger. That's the way we see it, anyhow. ;-)
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 23
Ah, emo-ward, how I love thee...
Thanks for updating! :-)
Author's Response: Yeah, he's pretty distraught. And he's still got some things to learn. Thanks for reading and leaving feedback!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 23
So he's leaving, isn't he? :(
I've been wondering what that mysterious light thing was. Are you planning to explain it later?
Again, amazing story! Love every single chapter and don't mind all the angst at all. LOL
Author's Response: Yay, thanks so much for loving the story! As for Edward, he's not booking any flights to Italy just yet . . . We did not like it in New Moon when Edward left Bella, so we're taking that canon concept and exploring different ways of dealing with it. Hope you'll like where it goes. And yes, more answers are coming (in time) about the mysterious light thing. :-)
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 23
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Awesome! Thanks!
Reviewer: EAC (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
Slightly confused now, haha.
I will definately keep reading, this is a really great AU, I wasn't expecting such a large time gap though.
Author's Response: Love your initials! As for the time gaps, they might make more sense as you go along. By Chapter 10-11 or so, you might see the reason there are some fast-forwards in the earlier chapters. Thanks so much for reviewing, and we hope you'll keep reading and enjoying! :-)
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