Wow, what an interesting story and concept. Destiny indeed.

very beautifully written!

I am confused...are they really meeting each night or not??

I really like the internal conflict these characters are experiencing...

A very different and unique story.  I really enjoyed it. Thank you for telling it.  I liked how Edward and Bella were the central characters and the others were just mentioned occasionally.  Sometimes too many characters can detract from the telling of the story and I really liked the flow of this story.

Wow that was really neat. You have a great story telling ability. Your story leaves me thinking;)

Amazing story with an amazing play list. I love that you wrote very little of the Cullen family. It was great that Alice and the rest of the family was made to stay out of Edward's and Bell's relationship. I'm so tried of Alice snatching Bella away whenever she and Edward got too close. Edward had been alone for a long time. Interfering in his love life is totally inappropriate. Most importantly, it became a true mature love story between two people. Thanks for the ride.

Wow, I really enjoyed reading this story. I started reading it this morning and hate to even stop to cook lunch for my kids, but I did (I am not a bad mom).

It was very different then other stories I have read.

Thanks for sharing it with us.

I just found this story and really loved it. It was a really different take on the original story and it was just beautiful.

Oh my - well I think I need Edward to come and hold me like that because I feel like my hearts just been torn into little pieces.  That was amazing.  You are very talented writers.  I can feel the anguish and pain of the two of them.

I'm going to down my glass of Sauvignon Blanc and go on to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, so much.

And, one of the authors is drooling, beause Sauvignon Blanc is her favorite...

I'm really enjoying this story and am intrigued by it.  I can't wait to see how this all develops.  It's a really interesting idea.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I we hope you enjoy the rest!!  Thanks for reviewing :-)

Great story! Loved it:) I loved Edward examining Bella in her sleep...made me laugh. I was so surprised that she did end up having a seizure. You guys wrote that part of the story well. Really creative. Really well-written. Thank you for sharing!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, from both of us!

And the secret (this is FantasyMother.)  Lilliput wrote the examining her in the sleep scene, and I still laugh about it.

i have to admit that I usually just barely read, if not skip, dream sequences in the many fanfics that contain dreams. I find it funny that you have been able to create a story where I actually look forward to the dream sequences:)

Author's Response:

Thanks!  And, this would not be a good story to skip dream sequences in, since so much of the story is contained in them.  Thank you again, and we hope you continue to enjoy it!