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Reviews For Jacob's Song
Reviewer: Chapps (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Mathew Nathonson did a great version of this btw. And this was sad and true : /

Reviewer: justmallory (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

I usually can't stand fics that include complete song lyrics, but this one wasn't too bad.  Jacob's dialogue seems a little young compared to how Stephenie Meyer wrote him, but his loyal and carefree attitude is spot on.  I like the simplicity of the story, and I'd love to see what you could do with a good beta to help with punctuation and paragraph breaks.

Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great one-shot! I thought you really captured the conflict between Bella's feelings for Edward and Jacob well. It always irked me in the books when Bella was so quick to forgive... I was rooting for her to do it too and I love Edward, but he DID run out on her and Jake was there the entire time. Yet he felt like the "bad guy" at times when he had really been the steady friend who could have been more. Nice!



Author's Response:

Hey there! It's so great of you to come read my stories! Oh, and thanks for that nice rating ;) And I know what you mean, SO anticlimatic. Edward didn't even get yelled at! Jake deserves more credit then he gets.

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was beautiful. It made me cry.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Jacob is a sweetie, isn't he?

Reviewer: AngelFromMyNightmare (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is one of my favorite songs, and you've used it perfectly.

Great writing, it's such a sad, but nice moment between them.

 



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it. People are pickier when things are written about stuff they already know about and like. Yeah, it's such a Jacob song. The fic practically wrote itself.

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is really, really sweet.  I'll have to find that song and listen to it, too. 

 

Lovely moment.



Author's Response:

Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, it's a great song. The Killers' version is here if you haven't alreay found it. It's not just the lyrics either, it really sounds like a song Jacob might play.

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