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Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

I am a very very very big Carlisle and Bella lover.

can't wait for the update.

 



Author's Response:

Yay!  The next two chapters feature Carlisle (and some other stuff...)

Reviewer: happychocaholic (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

I love this, it's hilarious, something we've all thought of but no ones written about it. Keep writing, I can't wait to find out whats going to happen with Carisile.



Author's Response:

:)  Stay tuned.  It will be lemony, THAT I can promise you!

Reviewer: Alogisch (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Love it so far, can't wait to read the next chapters...!

The Alice part interfering the discussion is genious...

Hope you will soon write another chapter.

Keep up the good work :D



Author's Response:

I have the next chapter in the queue.  Hope you like it! :)

Reviewer: twilightlover051096 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

truly hilarious! keep going! i cant wait to see how it goes with um.... haha 'Dr. Cullen' haha! 



Author's Response:

:)  Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: twilightlover051096 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

truly hilarious! keep going! i cant wait to see how it goes with um.... haha 'Dr. Cullen' haha! 



Author's Response:

:) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

I like this i cant wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

Oh, believe me, it's a smut-fest.  Hope you're ready...

Reviewer: Evi_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

That was awesome! write more about her "appointment" with dr. Cullen. meow!



Author's Response:

Dr. Cullen will be getting a patient (or two) very soon.  Chapter two is in the queue.  Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

This is very interesting! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I have chapter two in the queue.  Hopefully it will come through soon.  I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

I am completely intreaged by this!! I can't wait to see where you take it :)



Author's Response:

Yay!  I can't wait for chapter 2 to make it out of beta! :)

Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

At least I know I'm not the only one who thinks that way about the Cullen men. Two in particular... Charlisle...cough.. Jasper... cough.. Sue me XD. Fine start, Draven

Author's Response:

LOL.  Cough.  Cough.  Those would be my two picks.  ;)  Ahem, I think you'll like what's coming up if that's the case...

Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

oh my god! a chance to see how carlisle is in the bedroom! Yummy!



Author's Response:

Hmmm... I hope he can live up to expectations?  I'm new to this, so...hopefully Carlisle makes it happen! :)

Reviewer: bubbleskami (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Oh seriously?! That's awesome! I'm liking where this is going! ^_^ Great job!



Author's Response:

Seriously.  I'm in a lemony mood.  It's going to be a very tart story.  No pun intended.  lol

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

This looks to be a very promising lemontastic story.  Ready for chapter two when you are....



Author's Response:

:)  Thanks!  Chapter two is in the queue.  Hopefully it will make it through soon.

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

This looks to be a very promising lemontastic story.  Ready for chapter two when you are....



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Chapter two will be up as soon as it gets through beta.  I have 6.5 chapters of this written already. :)

Reviewer: twilight_pasychoe (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Hmmm....three cats, eh? Well, well, well....i suppose i've got a lot to live up to.  Oh well, here goes:

 

this is an AWESOME idea (though i will admit that it does remind me of a story called A Family Secret, but their first chapter and yours are totally different.) well, i obviously LOVE this or i wouldn't be reviewing. just make sure you get the next chapter up FAST, 'cuz i AM DYING HERE!!! I NEED SOME SMUT TO GO WITH THIS SIDE ORDER OF PLOT, PLEASE!! THANK YOU!!! Keep on keepin' on. Peace.



Author's Response:

LOL!  Nice to know.  OK, well the next chapter will be up as soon as it makes it through beta.  I promise you, it's very, very smutty. :)  Tee hee!

Reviewer: BellbirdC (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

I like how you actually GET the characters. Theres too much fanfic where impossible stuff happens that is not true to the character. PLEASE post part 2 [onwards] SSSOOOOONNN! Good job - interesting plot - very interesting. x



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I know a lot of it is OOC, but I'm trying to at least make it a teeny tiny bit plausible.  You know, in the same way pr0n storylines are plausible...sort of...  ;) 

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Love how Bella is so much more... open-minded that Edward expected her to be! Terrific premise to mix it up a bit w/o any sneaking around or furtiveness. And of course, we've all wondered about those yummy Cullen men.... <><3



Author's Response:

LOL.  Thanks!  I'm feeling like I need a prescription myself.  From Dr. Edward, or Dr. Carlisle -- I don't mind.  Or better yet, an appointment with one, and then he needs a consult... ;)

Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

Oooh, Dr. Cullen, I'm feeling a little under the weather...I was wondering if maybe you could examine me and tell me what's wrong...

I love the premise of this, please update soon!  And maybe fast forward another decade when that's done so there can be more switching!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I have several chapters waiting (they're up on another site already), and put chapter 2 in for approval already.  Hopefully they'll get up quickly.

Reviewer: Roosickle (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

ahhhh no, not the three cats!!!!! seriously though no critisism here, sounds like a great start, can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  But don't worry -- the cats are rarely that co-operative. Tee hee.

Reviewer: ASimpleTwist (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

That was, surprisingly, a little funny. I like how you balanced it out, using Alice to make it less... uncomfortable? Very good start, all in all.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I'm hoping it'll work out, and no be too much for this crowd.  lol.  It's gonna be really, really lemony.

Reviewer: Ash Night (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

it is good so far

i think that in honor of bella's first year the cullens should lift the rules

and then edward flips out

p.s. i would like to see bella and jasper



Author's Response:

Hmm... interesting thought.  And I think you may just see some Bella/Jasper lovin'. ;)

Reviewer: xxaechicaxx6 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction

its a little weird but i think it may work



Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks.  It is a little weird.  And it may work -- or it may not.  We'll see. :)

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