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Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Well, I am glad I haven't said that the chapters make me want to barf....because in essence they really don't! And if you have been keeping up with my reviews at all...you will know that I am an insanely jealous bitch over Edward...not Bella and her little fun, but EDWARD.....so what I am about to say is totally freaking me out...but I am interested.
SO....I was wondering if you were going to do chapters based on everyone's escapades. For example...a chapter about Carlisle and Rose, Edward and Esme, Emmett and Alice, and Jasper, Rose, and Alice??????????????
I would like to read about what goes on with these situations, and I think if you did do these, please do them in multiple POV's. I believe it would show more character depth. Plus...what can I say??? I am a horny almost 9 months pregnant woman that can't get any cause Dr. says no!
So please help me out! *ducks head and says...at least I can read about others good fortunes* wink wink ;) ;)
That was a nice time for Emmett...I just love his character and I was a little down because he was! I am glad that you gave him a pick me up...but still find it hilarious that Bella beat him again!
***Now for the reaction that Rose had...since I don't have all the facts, I can't say much...but go Emmett for just walking away...that made ALL the difference! That will get miss tart ass really good!
I think that is all I have wanted or thought to say. Let me know about the chapters please! I would really like to read about the others experiences.....for some sick, masochistic reason! LOL!
Take care!
Teacher
Author's Response: LOL. Wow! Thanks for the review!!
I am planning more POVs, particularly because they seem so popular (and it gets repetitive always writing Bella).
Can't say much about Rose, but I will 'fess up that I don't like her much in the SM books, so it's a struggle to do her justice.
Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Okay... This one kind of threw me. I normally see Emmett as my older brother. But this made me see him as something else entirely. The predator in them is a turn-on for me. Weird, probably... Don't care. Wouldn't mind seeing Charlisle or Jasper similarly. And "a whip" I definitely want to know if my suspicions are right. And Edward and Esme have me curious too. *Yet another skit I'll have to send* That is, if you want them...? Fine work, Draven
Author's Response: :) Send away!
Thanks for the R&R!
Reviewer: smudger1 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
That was so HOT! I liked it as soon as you started to quote Blackadder! Can't wait for the next instalment.....
Author's Response: *Grin* thanks!! I love me some Slackbladder.
Can't wait to WRITE the next installment! tee hee
Reviewer: duckling (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Wow! Does that mean the day is going to end early?! I certainly hope not.
Author's Response: Noooooo!!!
Don't want to give anything away, but I can say that. :)
Reviewer: livedieyoung (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Wow, I'm pretty sure I've fallen head over heels in love with Emmett. <3 Hehe, I reallly love this story, and I know you said you can't update as often, but I can't wait to read more. I totally wanna know what Rosalie's problem is. What a bitch! Although, you could always make her punish Bella ;) That would be wonderful! Hehe, I know, dirty, one track mind. I'm anticipating your next chapter, and good job!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Emmett's sweet, no? But Jasper...ah Jasper.
I think I need to write some E/B now... so I remember why they're together! LOL.
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
So Rosalie is going to be mad that Emmett and Bella were together but she can be with other men?? Emmett walks away and Rose is going to lay into Bella? I doubt that Edward will put up with that!
This chapter was excellent! It was perfect for Emmett!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm on pins and needles about what's going to happen now too... can't wait for the next chapter!! Tee hee.
Reviewer: smileyirish14 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
SWEET!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Oh my God update this soon PLEASE I've seen the preview and I wanna see more...
Why would anyone put "This makes me wanna barf."? It says what it is in the summary, why would they click on it if they don't like that kinda stuff?
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for your review.
I have no idea why they would do that. Maybe just to get a rise? If only they knew how much that made my (and my husband) laugh. Tee hee.
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
oh my god! loved this chapter! Emmet domineering is just yummy! I wonder why rosalie reacted like that in the preview. I'm glad emmet grew some balls and didn't beg for forgiveness though! Update soon pretty please?!
Author's Response: :) thanks for reviewing! I'll update asap. I have to *write* the next chapter though! lol
Reviewer: elizabeth2323 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Carlisle and Alice
really liked this chappy--very hot but one thought was that I thought one of the rules was that it was not a group type activity--don't mean to be rule patrol here because the outcome was fantastic but didn't know if the 4some would get into trouble with the others plot-wise
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!! And no problem with the rule patrol. J The only rules, per se, are:
1. It's the women's choice. They are the only ones allowed to ask. 2. No vaginal intercourse. 3. Only lasts 24 hours once a decade. 4. No discussion of details after the fact.
The rest of it was Edward's interpretation of what goes on, not necessarily rules. Remember he's never done it before, and is trying to explain it to Bella as best as he knows how.
Reviewer: DreaC (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Emmett's chapter was very true to his character! It definitely met and surpassed my expectations! I love this, it's so Emmett: "It's hard to explain Bells. It's just...she's into it. And so am I, I mean, sort of. I mean, hell yeah, I'm a guy, right? This is the sort of thing guys like me live for. Maybe not angsty emo boy over here," he nodded his head in Edward's direction, giving him a quick grin. "But for the rest of us..." And the chapter preview has me patiently impatiently waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I love that you point out the things you liked (though things you didn't like would be good too!). It helps me get a feel for what works.
Keep up the reviewing and I'll keep up the writing!
Reviewer: jcb (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
I love your wonderfully hot story. I am dying to know what went on between Edward and Esme.
Author's Response: :) Thanks for the review.
You and countless other people want that. I'm smelling out-take here...
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
awwww poor Em. out of all of them his personallity is easiest to understand. biiiiiiiig teddy bear. you are a chapter submitting BEAST! it's awesome how often you've been able to put up new chapters for us. so.......thanks <3
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter.
But, don't get too complimentary with the "chapter posting beast" comments. I had a backlog because it took so long for the first one to post. But now they're all dried up, and I'm having to write them real-time. I'll probably be a week between chapters now. :(
As always, thanks for the R&R!!
Reviewer: SNWILES (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Aww poor Emm not wanting to sare his Rosie glad Bella could help him out with that. Im so looking forward to Rose reaction in the next chapter. Great work!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm looking forward to seeing what Rose does too... :)
Reviewer: shelly8721 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
OMFG this is by far the hottest story I have read yet! You are VERY talented with your lemons. I need to go change panties now. What a tease for the next chapter. Is Rose really mad or will she be whipping Bella next? Can't wait.
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for reviewing!!
Can't tell you about the next chapter (since I haven't written it yet), except to say I think she's really mad. But I'm not 100% sure... :)
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
OH SHIZNITS!!!
Author's Response: LOL. I'm guessing that's a good thing? ;) Thanks for the R&R!!
Reviewer: elizabeth2323 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Very fun--and glad not a permanent switch of pairings--Also I just love you handle--SassenachWench--I just adore the Outlander Series!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
And yes, Outlander rocks. Diana Gabaldon is my hero. :)
Reviewer: EllaB (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Jasper, part deux
God, I love Jasper...and now I love him even more thanks to your talented writing! I know what I'm going to be thinking about tonight!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for the review. I love me some Jasper too. *sigh*
Have you read When Darkness Turns to Light? Great J/B AU fic.
Reviewer: twinklyspecialkag (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Another great chapter!! Quick i want to read the next one like NOW!! Thanks
Author's Response: LOL. I'll need to write it first. But your enthusiasm is awesome, and will most likely make me go home and write!!
Reviewer: DancerGirl (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
I have to say that I'm very impressed with how you weave a very good plot into the smut. Not easy to do, and still keep all your readers into the story. I'm DYING to know what Rosalie is going to do next. Ball's in her court!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Awwww...poor Emmy Bear. Why is Rose mad at him? Let me guess, she's gonna go to Edward next as punishment?
Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Awww... I love Emmett. You portrayed Emmett's character dead on. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
loved sensitive Emmett but how about some Bella,Edward and maybe Jasper
action?
Author's Response: *deep breath*
You've touched on something here. I had initially said this might eventually include some M/M slash, and to be honest I had a J/E/B pairing in mind for that. BUT...having said that...I'm not sure I can do it justice. I mean, I've read some awesome J/E slash, but the good stuff took buildup, you know?
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lovepink (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
i think emmett was so cute in this one. good job!
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Jasper, part deux
hoorah love me some Jasper and BELLA ACTION !
but can we see a little more of what Edward been up to hmmm
Author's Response: :) we'll get there, I promise...
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