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Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
That is just so wrong on so many levels. I'm sorry, up until this chapter was good. That was just too much. Though I could definitely picture Rob Pattinson sucking so guys dick. Even still that is just wrong. ;P
Author's Response: LOL. You can't say I didn't warn you. It was all over the chapter notes -- in bold, no less.
Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
That is just so wrong on so many levels. I'm sorry, up until this chapter was good. That was just too much. Though I could definitely picture Rob Pattinson sucking so guys dick. Even still that is just wrong. ;P
Author's Response: LOL. You can't say I didn't warn you. It was all over the chapter notes -- in bold, no less.
Reviewer: Ejenine (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Jasper, part deux
This was the best chapter by far...I love the Jasper and Bella pairing!!! I love that they admit that they want to break the rules and Bella almost fucks up (pun intended); I don't think I would be able to have that type of restraint. The "I love you" exchange at the end was sweet and ridiculously HOT...my fiance is about to get very lucky! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I love hearing the feedback (especially the good feedback! lol)
Reviewer: votesaxon (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction
OMG OMG OMG
"Dr. Cullen"
All my fantasies have just sprung forth...and i thank you for it ;)
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks!
Did you make it further into the story? Curious what your feedback was.
Reviewer: smudger1 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
WOW! That was just awesome! No further words necessary......
Author's Response: Thanks!! I really do appreciate you taking the time to review!
Reviewer: smudger1 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Edward
Another great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Appreciate the R&R!
Reviewer: cuteepie2 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Wow. That's all I can say after I read every chapter. Except for this one...I think my mouth just hung open and I was speechless. You have a phenomenal filthy mind, and this is an awesome story!!! Keep up the great work! I think Esme's POV would be good, she comes off so quiet and shy! =)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm not sure if that means the last chapter was good, or just shocking :) And yes, I can have a phenomenally filthy mind -- however, I've learned from my fanfic reading lately that there are LOTS of us that do -- some far, far worse than mine! Tee hee...
Reviewer: Miss Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
i selfishly want both POVs... but i think it would be much more interesting from Esme's, if i'm being forced to choose =)
love you and this story! haha thanks very much for sharinng it with everyone.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I really do appreciate you taking the time to give feedback.
Outtake will be from both POV. :)
Reviewer: Rosalie_Hale (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
i would love to see it from edward's pov that way we could really get inside both of their heads.
I would also love to see a rosalie and jasper pairing....or rosalie and carlisle
this is a truely wonderfully wicked story Bravo to you!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm not sure how much Rosalie I can write, but I'll think about it. I have trouble relating to her in some ways.
Truly appreciate the feedback!
Reviewer: VivianDelongpaw (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Edward
Loved it. OK why could the Cullen's possibly be baking. I can't for the life of me figure that out. Is is a metaphor? For all the unbelieveably hot sex? Explain when you have a second. All day today, I had a vision of Edward growling MINE........very powerful and compelling writer you are. Thank you for taking this whole saga to another level.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!
I'll try to answer the baking question in an outtake. It's funny, I'm new to writing, so I sometimes forget what I answered in my head but didn't actually put in the story. I had a reason for them baking but decided it was better left a mystery. Tee hee.
Glad you like the story -- Keep up R&Ring!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
I think Esme's would be more in line with the "helping Edward's sex life/teacher" sort of mind set. Edward's would be more of the shocked inexperienced, pupil...at least I would think so.
Maybe you could do both?!?!?!?!!?
God luck!
Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R! Based on the feedback I've gotten, it will be both POV. Yay! But now I gotta write it -- I'm scared!
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
woah that was SOME chapter. i thought i'd be weirded out but no! it was hot az. bellas gotto be the luckiest fictional character EVER in the history of characters. thanks for the chapter <3
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for the review. I wasn't sure if I could write it either -- thought it might weird me out. But it didn't ;)
Reviewer: gloriousday (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
WOW!! I thought that the Jasper chapter was the best, but this just WOW!! This beats it by far...
Author's Response: Wow! That's quite a review! Thanks!!!
Reviewer: ATrueWannabeRosalie (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction
OMFG!!!! This story is such a turn on!! You must have a lot of experience to write this, if you know what I mean!! I'm not calling you a slut, I'm just saying, PLEASE DON'T KILL ME!!! Anyway, this one chap was AWEFUHCKINGSOME!!! LOVED the ExJ part, you should do one where it's just them, no Bella ruining everything by making me jealous. Gosh, I'm so jealous...
Mmm, no Rosalie POV? Or Jazz? Or a R/J POV chapter? That's be hot, I mean, they're supposed to be twins, aren't they?
You should definitely split the EsmexEdward scene, it's always fun to see both sides.
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review. And no, I'm not giong to kill you. LOL. But no, most of this stuff came from my dirty little mind -- not first-hand. *sigh* I WISH I had first-hand Edward/Jasper experience!!
There was Jasper POV, and I'm writing an Emmett/Rosalie out-take that will be at least partly Rose POV. There won't be a Rose/Jasper chapter. Probably just chapter 10 of JOD and then the two out-takes. But not sure exactly at the moment. I'm sort of writing 5 concurrent things, and don't want to get myself confused.
Again, thanks for reviewing -- I do appreciate it!
Oh, and the Esme/Edward scene will be split POV for sure.
Reviewer: livedieyoung (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
First of all, that was the HOTTEST chapter I have ever read in my life. Totally amazing, and I love the way your characters find loopholes to the set rules. It makes for a much more interesting storyline. I can`t wait to read more!! :)
Secondly, Edward POV. I think it would be much funner to do, and I can only imagine how Edward would react in that situation.
Author's Response: Thanks!! So glad you liked the chapter. :)
After getting so many request all over the place, I've decided it'll be mixed POV. That way we get to see what each of them are thinking.
*sigh* I can't wait to hear what Esme has to say for herself!
Reviewer: wantsmoretwilight (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
OMG!! I am so jealous of Bella!!! Two gorgeous men doing that to her! ughh You made my night!!
Author's Response: :) I'm jealous too! Thanks for the R&R!
Reviewer: wantsmoretwilight (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Edward
Love it! Love it! Such a special moment for Edward and Bella!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R!!
Reviewer: wantsmoretwilight (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Great story! I love how each of the ahem extra curricular activities represents each of the families personality. A+
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: frostbitten (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Okay, I waited until I finished reading the last chapter to comment. WOW!!!! I was up until 4 am reading this because I couldn't stop!!!! I hope once we're done with this "day" that you can jump ahead to the next decade!!! I'm glad that you kept Nessie and Jake away. Is there anything saying that they can't go back to someone after their turn is "up"?? I would love to hear more Bella and Emmett, and Bella and Jasper, and Bella and Edward, and Edward and me...you get the idea =) Keep keepin' me up at night please!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you finally did :) And I'm SO HAPPY to finally be the one keeping someone ELSE up till 4 a.m. LOL. I'm usually the one obsessively reading fanfic till the wee hours.
And yes, as open-minded as I am, Nessie and Jake need to stay faaaaar away.
Reviewer: susyq (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Me next please. Can I have jasper next? I loved the entire day. When this started I thought it was 1 choice all day, I didnt' realize it was everybody all day long. Now, I know that Jacob isnt' related to any of them and Nessie is only related to Bella & Edward, but please don't add them to the mix. I don't want to image Nessie with any of them (even though I did read one where she did Jazz). Esme/Edward? Hmmmm? And who was using the whip and who got whipped? More chapters please
Author's Response: Yes, absolutely you can have Jasper. Come get 'im. I promise to wash him off before you get here. :)
Reviewer: LadyKnightAmy (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Jasper, part deux
I can't form words. That was too hot. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks!! And thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: LadyKnightAmy (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction
I nearly fell over with glee. They way Alice just popped in made my day. Well done.
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
please pov from Esme and Edward!
Author's Response: You got it! Thanks for the R&R!
Reviewer: wantsmoretwilight (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Carlisle and Alice
Hot damn!! I have read my share of lemon stories in the last few months! All I can say is WOW!!
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks!!
Reviewer: wantsmoretwilight (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Carlisle
That was hot!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!
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