Reviewer: sleepthroughthestatic (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Just completely fuckhot. Seriously.
Reviewer: shygirrl (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
love this story. this chapter made me uber hot--- doesn't help that I'm also reading the trip home...
Reviewer: noxetdies (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
I think, "wow," is a perfect response to that. Whew!
Reviewer: RegisteredTrademark (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction
cant wait to read how everyone else gets down and dirty! update soon! with more than one chapter preferably.
Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
um wow. i have no words, just a silver toy i need to go use now.. jesus!
Reviewer: MoonstruckManda (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Wow...
So, I love this story xD I always thought about something like this happening between all the Cullens, but I never thought it would really work.
But you made it work :D
Reviewer: MoonstruckManda (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Wow...
So, I love this story xD I always thought about something like this happening between all the Cullens, but I never thought it would really work.
But you made it work :D
Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
oh the things dreams are made of...;)... Please, please, PLEASE keep the chapters-a-cummin'!! ;)
Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
oh the things dreams are made of...;)... Please, please, PLEASE keep the chapters-a-cummin'!! ;)
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
OMG this is......... WOW........ More please PLEASE Up date soon
Reviewer: babe-a-lish (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
please please please update!! i'd love to read about edward and esme (from edwards POV) because really we'd get to see Esme's thoughts as well. please please please post another chapter!
Reviewer: frostbitten (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS EDWARD...UPDATE PLEASE!! I'M ON MY KNEES BEGGING HERE!!!!
Author's Response: SORRY! RL is interfering big-time. That and my other fic. I'll try to finish the chapter I have almost done, very very soon, I promise.
Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Damn, that was hot. But where's the girl-lovin? There's been a surprising lack of femmeslash in this fickie..which is a shame, really, because I can't think of a better way for Bella and Rose to finally bury the hatchet. ;-)
Reviewer: Lilpxidst (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
oh, I was so overtaken by the last chapter that I forget to vote in my review...I think I want EPOV of that encounter...he reads her thoughts, so we'll know what she's thinking.
Reviewer: Lilpxidst (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
I want to write something ellequent, but all that comes to mind is Fuck that was hot!!!! I am wrecked! Loved it!!!
Reviewer: Lilpxidst (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Jasper, part deux
That was...delisciously dirty!!!! Mmmmmm!!!! I love Jasper!!!!!
Reviewer: Lilpxidst (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Jasper a.k.a Back to the Sexin'
Ooooo!!! I needed some Japser, thank you!!!! I can't tell you what he does to me or better yet, what I wish he'd do to me!!!! LOL!
You are brilliant! Bring on the LEMONS!!!! Would it be too much if I gave a little cheer?!?!?! Probably, but I love this story, it's just too much fun!
Smoooches, LILI
Reviewer: Blissfulstarlet (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
i think chapter 9 is my favorite so far! that was super hot!
Reviewer: Blissfulstarlet (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Edward
although I love all the smutty goodness in this story, I love B&E together the best! :-)
Reviewer: Blissfulstarlet (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Great chapter. I love Emmett, and I feel like is is forgotten a lot of the time! :-) Thank you!
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Interesting update. It was surprising to see Edward so comfortable with Jasper and Bella making love and even moreso, making love with Jasper. You can do a spilt chaper where we get both POVs.
Wouldn't mine having a bit more of Jasper and Edward.
Update soon.
Reviewer: Blissfulstarlet (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Carlisle and Alice
i really want to review...but i'm kinda speachless...that was awesome! :-)
Reviewer: farfallfromthecherrytree (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
OMG That was so fun to read :-) You are a dirty little smut Goddess!
Reviewer: blondie9779 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
ummm... wow. super super hot. I didn't know if I was going to like the m/f/m but ya... more please!
Reviewer: AthenianPostbox (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
I love the way you write Jasper. His drawl is super sexy. And of course I love the way you write all the other characters too. This was a fun story.
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