Reviewer: Merrisol (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Holy, holy, holy fucking shit!!! I happened to have a mouth full of Pepsi when I was reading this, and spit it out all over the place! This is gonna be good!!!!
I'm off to read the next chappie now ... without anything in my mouth!!!!
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction
This should be fun!
Reviewer: Joce_Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Please! Do all of the different combos! Please! Such a good story! Esme/Edward would be so amazing! Please continue! FAST! Please!
Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Jasper, part deux
Wow! Hot stuff! I just can't get enough of that dirtytalking... Would love to be there when Jasper fucks Alice while they're both thinking of Bella!
Reviewer: mrsj4y (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Jasper a.k.a Back to the Sexin'
"Dude, seriously, don't do that without a head's up. Man, I almost raped you."
I've never laughed so much, seriously!
Loving this story, especially this chapter. It made me look at Jasper in a whole new way.
Reviewer: Adrastae (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Given the synopsis I thought this would be nothing but lemon - no substance. How very wrong I was. Love it! And the E/B/J was hot. I love a good E/B/J, and I haven't found many.
As for the E/Es scene, I'd like to see EPOV.
Reviewer: justlooking (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Edward's POV... with some of Esme's thoughts mixed in. I think Rose needs to work out some of her feelings with Bella... while Em gives watches and directs!
Reviewer: justlooking (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Jasper a.k.a Back to the Sexin'
Any chance the rules are gonna change "for just one day"? PLEASEEEEEEEEE!
Reviewer: justlooking (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Interlude: a.k.a No Sexin'
Gotta love the love among the sexin'!
Reviewer: justlooking (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction
The "You Are Mine" does it to me every time. Very interesting... can't wait for all the pairings. Found the story over on the perv pack site!
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
wow is right, damn that was hot.
Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for all the reviews.
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
Emmett is pretty creative
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Jasper, part deux
oh my, jasper is a dirty, dirty man and I like it.
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Jasper a.k.a Back to the Sexin'
Mmmm, jasper
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Interlude: a.k.a No Sexin'
great chapter, thanks.
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Carlisle and Alice
oh cullemons are very good, very good indeed.
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Carlisle
wow, that was hot. Loved how edward sat there and watched
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction
ha, cant wait
Reviewer: Julbee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Oh please let me know when Esme and Edwards adventures are posted. This was just WOW....
Reviewer: cingee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Wow. I think this is the first M/F/M fanfic chap I've read (certainly not the first I've seen, this is my secret guilty porn pleasure! lol). I LOVE it. Other secret guilty porn pleasure is girl on girl...any chance of R/B/A?! Heehee...this is great smut, awesome rec from Perv Pack!
Reviewer: A_Cullen_Wannabe (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
Okay...I'm curious about something. IF Edward didn't do anything with Rose and it seemed Alice has been busy with other people most of the time, then where was Edward during the B/Emmett time? Was he just hanging out, or was his 'listening in' on others? I was curious about what happened with Edward and Esme...it would be interesting to see. and holy crap...JBE was HOT!
Author's Response: Good question. This is possible out-take fodder. There are several possibilities. He could have been with Alice (again). Or Esme. Or talking with Rose. Or playing Wii... :)
Reviewer: gg_galaxy2002 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Edward and Jasper
The slut just cheated on Edward, still I love your story!
Reviewer: gg_galaxy2002 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Emmett
I really like your story, but Bella is such a slut! She wants to break the rules and have all the guys fuck her! What about Edward does he want to fuck all the girls too? How can she love Edward if she wants to cheat on him with everyone?
Reviewer: A_Cullen_Wannabe (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Jasper, part deux
Whew...okay I bow to your obviously superior smut writing skills. Yowza. I was really looking forward to the Jasper chapter. I always thought Jazz was the second sexiest and wondered what it would be like to be intimate with him and his ability amping everything up.
Whew...now I think I need a shower! LOL
Reviewer: A_Cullen_Wannabe (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Introduction
Not surprising you started with Dr. Hot Bitch! LOL
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