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Reviewer: g-riley (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Apocalypse Please

I loved New Moon, it is my favorite of all the Twilight Saga. I also love your story, it has the same angst that had me balling like a baby. Please update soon.

Reviewer: etoesha (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Apocalypse Please

Very very good I love it. Small critique though, I think Alice would have smelled Jacob before she entered the room. He wouldn't have been able to surprise her like that in the books. i really love this story and the songs your posting with them.

Author's Response:
You are absolutely. I had thought about that, but I think Alice was simply overwhelmed and not in a mode where she was expecting to "watch her back". In true grief, our senses are sometimes oblivious to anything beyond the pain. Alice loved Bella very much.

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Apocalypse Please

well done:) Keep going!

Reviewer: Twilight_x (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Almost Lover

You write so beautifully and still in character. I almost cried in the last chapter with how torn up Jake was =( i love how well you can write the pain, the desperation to get out, not many can manage it. Its beautiful. Most heartwrenching fanfic i've read but i love it, i relate to it. i hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Apocalypse Please

This is great, very well written. Obviously it's a blub fest but who doesn't like one of those occasionally!? Update again sooooon! x

Reviewer: Quivering Quill (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Apocalypse Please

please update soon! i love it

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Apocalypse Please

Oh, I'm liking this. Alice's mind is an interesting place to hang out during times of crisis, eh? :)

Reviewer: Missypooh (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Apocalypse Please

This story is very interesting so far...keep the updates coming

Reviewer: Kaitlin17 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Apocalypse Please

This story is Amazing! Keep up the great work = ]

Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Apocalypse Please

So well done. I am seriously enjoying every single second of it. Nothing is off the wall, nothing is out-of-character (I actually find the suicide to be completely in-character), nothing has left me shaking my head saying "why did you have to write THAT?". It's all perfect. Like you picked my brain and found everything I love in fiction and are writing it just for me.

Please continue soon. I can't wait to see how the Cullens react.

Author's Response:
Wow. No pressure, right? :-) Thank you, this was a wonderful review. I hope I don't let you down. I am trying to write this in a way I feel is more true to what was going on. a) Bella was having some serious mental health issues, issues that can't magically resolve themselves by love (even Edward's) b) the path things would have gone down maybe if the Volturri were not involved.

Reviewer: BrownEyedGrl978 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Apocalypse Please

I like how you go into detail around the period surrounding Edward's absence. Love the chapter. :)

Reviewer: 30somethingmom (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Apocalypse Please

Wonderful story! I love it!!!!!

Reviewer: Frzr71186 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Apocalypse Please

Poor, poor Bella. And Jake, strong as always. But Edwards needs to come back NOW. She needs him. I'm loving this, keep it coming, please!

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Apocalypse Please

Oh, SCREW "poor little Edward" and his instability. Boo-frickin-hoo. He needs to be bitch-slapped and given a few home truths. THEN he can grovel.

Is this a Bella/Edward or Bella/Jacob?

Author's Response:
This is definitely Edward/Bella but..... it doesn't start of that way. Things aren't that easy for Edward. He left a mess behind.

Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Apocalypse Please

This is interesting. I wonder what Edward will do. I hope Bella can hear him when he visits her.....will he visit her?????????

Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Comfortably Numb

Aww it's so sad, you write it so well! *Cries!*

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Comfortably Numb

Oh wow. Now This is how it should have been in the book. this is pain & emptiness; dessertion & despare. Broken.

You're doing an awesome job. Update soon!!

Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Comfortably Numb

SO well done. I'm just speechless.

Reviewer: evrythingmusic1 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Comfortably Numb

Oooh I love it!! But Edward and Bella better have a happy ending!!! lol Great job keep writing!! :)

Reviewer: sareisle (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Almost Lover

Wow, keep writing! Love the story.

Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Black

Aww need more! Update soon!!

Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Almost Lover

Brilliant first chapter, will keep reading!

Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Black

Please keep going!

Reviewer: samantha-cullen0302 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Black

girl this is great write more!!!

Reviewer: samantha-cullen0302 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Black

girl this is great write more!!!

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