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Reviewer: breakingdawn_addict (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Another 62 Minutes in Heaven

that is so good!!!!

great job... too bad you skimmed the details of the dates and the marriage and everything!

but still... great story!!!

Reviewer: SuperS (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Sun Chip Gaydar

Love this story, the great dialogue between Edward and Bella and the craziness of the family gathering are very well written.

My only dislike (if you can call it that....) is the way the ending summarises the rest of their live/story - now don't get me wrong, I love reading the happy ending and thought it was also well written, but I also feel the story might have been more powerful without it. (or perhaps end chap 2 then tag on an short epilogue?) But it's a completely catch-22 situation cause if you had ended it simply saying Edward and Bella get together, I'd probably be reviewing and moaning that I wanted to find out what happened next!

So it really isn't that much of a criticism, sorry for writing a whole paragraph about it! Back to the good comments - the sun chip gaydar is one of the funniest things I've read, and I really liked the portrayal of Edward overall. As I live in the UK, some of the places and references might not have made as much sense to me, but I didn't once feel like I didn't understand, so well done!

Also, congrats on writing for such a worthwhile cause. I'm checking out your other stories now :-)

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Another 62 Minutes in Heaven

LOVED IT!!!!! SO FUNNY AND SWEET!!!!!

Reviewer: anabella (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Another 62 Minutes in Heaven

that was a acute story.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Another 62 Minutes in Heaven

I did enjoy it. Very much. Loved Charlie's description of the side show!

Reviewer: brain candy (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Another 62 Minutes in Heaven

Funny!

Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 07:14 AM · On: Sun Chip Gaydar

I really like your writing in this story - especially the dialogue. I am guessing that Bella's "new friend" is Edward's sister Alice and that they will end up at the same Easter dinner, but I obviously could be way off :) I hope you will update soon!

Author's Response:
The other half of the story is now up. You must have read & commented before the second chapter was validated. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Sun Chip Gaydar

Loved it

Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Sun Chip Gaydar

hello...I read this story about a month ago and am still waiting for an updat!!!! lol I don't mean to sound rude so...please update? lol thankyou for reading this!!!! I'll be waiting!!!

Reviewer: Tweemad (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Sun Chip Gaydar

Totally adorable! I love their banter. I SO cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Sun Chip Gaydar

i really like this story!

Reviewer: Delicate Grace (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Sun Chip Gaydar

Very sweet meeting between Edward and Bella. You're an excellent author, Autumn Dreamer. I look forward to reading more of this story.

Reviewer: twilight_dk (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Sun Chip Gaydar

I really like this story, it's soooo cute! And the way you write is... wow! Keep it up!

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Sun Chip Gaydar

Very Good! Can't wait for more. :D

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Sun Chip Gaydar

Oooh, this sooo has the potential to be amazing. So much chemistry and fire in such a short time! I loved it! I truly cannot wait to read more.

Reviewer: purely_blissful (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Sun Chip Gaydar

That was a very sweet and creative way that Bella and Edward met. This Edward is quite the charmer.

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