I have been gone from this story for far too long now, and I am sorry, studies and AP courses and graduation and all that shit took too fucking much from me, mainly YOU!

God I missed this, but at least I got to read like 5 or 6 chapters in a row haha...

You never cease to amaze me, and I will never stop reviewing, even if it might take me some time... Loves this story and can't wait for yet another amazing update...

Your's truly.

He's in jail! What the hell? Did he beat up Newton, break in to his office, what? Hopefully I'll find out next chapter.

I'm glad you didn't make Carlisle the bad guy.  I thought Carlisle was using Aro so that made both of them the bad guys....

Wow! With a beginning like that I am definitely hooked.

Oh crap, what did she tell Newton, I'm sure thats what happened,did he pay her...CRAP!!!

Well duh, how about the wedding bands! That would be a nice gift, considering the Charlie issue. But I guess since the chapteris out already I'll just see what you came up with.

Shouldn't the name be Aro Sheen? Since you use the first name from the book and the last name of the actor it would make sense.

After how this chapter went, the next week is going to be torture for them isn't it. Very delicious lemon btw.

Fluffy is good, lemons are better but its a start. Wonder how things will work out long distance wise.

 

lovin' your story! can't wait to read more and see where you go with it. keep up the great work. Hope to hear from you soon.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm working on the next chapter now!

So I must say that i love this story.  I very recently found this site and have only read a few stories from it.  I am very picky at what i read as i hate stories where the characters don't seem at all like the ones SMs wrote and normally I only stick to canon.  I have never found an all human story that i like, that is until now.  when i started this story i never really expected to like it as its not really something i would choose to read but once i started i just couldn't stop reading.  I read the whole thing in like two days and now i'm feeling really lost.  i can't wait for the next chapter to be posted.  Keep up the great work and post soon before i go crazy.... Thanks!!

Author's Response:

Wow- your review just made me super happy!

First of all, thank you for choosing to give mine a chance even though it is out of the realm of what you usually prefer.  I feel completely honored.  Can I ask what made you choose it?  Just curious.

In addition to that, thank you for taking the time to tell me.  Knowing that it isn't necessarily your thing, but you liked it anyway is just a huge compliment.  I'm so glad you're enjoying my little story.

Like you, I started out reading only canon.  I loved the series so much, and couldn't imagine why anyone would make them HUMAN!?  Plus, HELLO- SM skipped over the good stuff!  I quickly found that I actually prefer the all human stories.  There are so many insanely talented author's in the fandom, and I quickly found myself sucked into the stories that weren't necessarily like the series.  I enjoy reading them with more relatable problems.  Okay, so maybe I can't personally relate to Bella as a sub, Bella as homeless, Bella as the rich kid, but I can relate to B as the girl in love with the unreachable guy, B in love with her best friend who is in a relationship with another girl, B who is a single mother trying to make ends meet.  Those things aren't canon, but they are ideal situations for the general reader.  The plot will draw you in, and the writing just flows so nicely that you just can't stop.  Anyway- wow, I sure do ramble on....  So, welcome to the fandom; I hope that you'll continue to let me know how I'm doing.

xoxo,

Jen

AHHH!! i'm finally caught up with this story, but now i have to WAIT for updates. i hope you update soon. i loooove this story!!!! and i hate angela, i actually thought it was carlisle. lol

sorry i didn't review every chapter, i was way into the story to stop and review :) but i will say i love them cupcakes ;)

Author's Response:

Everybody thought it was Carlisle.  I just couldn't do it!

No prob on the reviews.  I'm glad you poked your head out and let me know what you thought!

Thanks,

Jen

Your story is fantastic! It's a really nice read. You drew me in from chapter one. I'm not too crazy about sweet Angela Weber being the villan, lol, but you've gotta do what you've gotta do. Lauren or Jessica just seemed more appropriate to me. Its odd to me that Carlisle is anything but friendly toward Bella. I get what your showing, his protecting his family and all, but he's a little harsh! :-D I guess that's why they call it AU! Anyway, my OCD criticism asside, this is a really amazing story. Great job! You know when you read stories and they're okay, but it feels forced? Or when they don't flow right, and you can tell the writer is a few english classes away from being competent? Well, yours isn't like that. Particularly in later chapters. You really let us feel the emotion of the character.

P.S.- I'm a list freak, too!

Author's Response:

OCD criticisms are always welcome!  Love them!

Yeah, so a little different work on the characters here.  I think it offers an element of surprise, and I usually enjoy reading that.  As an author, I love reading the reactions. 

Your comments about my writing just completely humble me.  I get what you're saying about the forced writing.  Flow is important and I'm glad I am accomplishing that.  My beta's are completely responsible for the change in my writing.  They are amazing, and help me so very much.  They should really be listed as co authors.

Haha on the list freak comment!  E would love you!

Thanks so very much,

Jen