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Reviewer: twibi (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
hey, a very nice, simple and cute start!
Reviewer: twibi (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
hey, a very nice, simple and cute start!
Reviewer: Pikapuff (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 27 Busted
OMG - I have tears from the 'clusterfuck'! I was laughing so loudly! Great scene!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 27 Busted
Oh man! I was crying with laughter! And it just kept getting worse and worse! I so didn't expect that scene with the shower/chocolate cake/Alice & co. Brilliant! - oh and enjoyed the earlier sweet protective Daddyward stuff too!
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 17 I Want This
Love the cupcakes and everything else.
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
Hurray he did it at last! And I absolutely see them work through this to their HEA!
I love the way Bella handled Esme (her and Alice's reaction was overwhelming at best), gentle but at the same time firm, bravo!
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
"It's Bella's current pregnancy craving. Don't touch it or she'll snap your head off. Plus, she's filled it with pregnant germs." - heeheehee
It was so sweet when they went together to the doctor and heard the heartbeat.
“You make this sound as if it’s a Marine combat mission,” she said as she pressed the buttons and sent the message.
“It’s worse,” I joked. - Oh God, on to the talk with Esme! That should be good!
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
Oh God Esme is priceless!!!
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 13 Mirror, Mirror
Heehee well hello Vegas baby! I think Edward won't be surprise after his mirror dreams, he knew (or rather felt) that there was no condom involved and during this conversation with Bella maybe he wanted to ask (but didn't know how) if she's on the pill? Oh it will be fun!
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell
What an eventful dinner, few!
"Good lick" - that was good ;-D
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
Holy shitttttt!!!!!!!!!!!! What a dream-memory! The hottest window sex ever, that's for sure!
I won't hunt you because she wasn't at the party, I think it would be to soon for them! And btw - where is the bracelet? Shouldn't Emmett or Jasper gave it to her during their stay in Seattle?
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 27 Busted
ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!! Update please please update soon!!!
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 10 Communication
Love their texts and his lists, especially 'what to do to prevent the birthday party'.
Judge on vacation, Newton in car accident - looks like it would be one big problematic annulment hehehe.
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings
Now I'm very happy, Jake is ok, knows about Vegas and doesn't care, Becca is put in her place, Bella and Jake will try to be friends, thanks to Rose Bella found her back bone and lastly politely answered Edward, yay what's not to like?!!!!!!
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia
Oh sweet sweet memories mhmmm...
And so now we know why Bella is pregnant. I was thinking what they were drinking that made them do it all night long, well it has to be that $2000 Scotch, not for everybody, damn it's too expensive for me, so no sexmarathon for me I guess!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 7 Visiting the Past
"She better not start any shit or she'll need a bed back there, too," Rose threatened. - I love your Rose.
I think it's Becca or Charlie...
Reviewer: Aldi74 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 6 Birthday Beer and Burgers
Poor Edward, he still doesn't know what hit him! I love reading his memories form that night, soooo hot!
I'm from Warsaw, Poland.
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 27 Busted
I laughed so hard that my cheeks hurt! I love it!!!!
Dirty little Alice!
Reviewer: khills (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 27 Busted
LMAO OMG this was fucking hilarious! Sorry my late review, but here i am, faithful to your ffic! :D
Author's Response: I heart you!
Reviewer: lorenita88 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 27 Busted
OMG!!! what an awesome chapter. i actually had to stop reading because i was laughing so damn much!!!!.
excellent work!!!
Author's Response: I love knowing I made you laugh!
Thanks,
Jen
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 27 Busted
hahahahaha
Reviewer: mrebeccan (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 27 Busted
Not much to say but, FUNNY SHIT! Loved it.
Author's Response: Teehee! So glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: jordanmac (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 27 Busted
I have just finished reading all the posted installments. I can not wait to read the next one. I hope that you post the next one soon. Thank you for this story...
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 27 Busted
Oh, what I wouldn't give to have seen Edward's junk! Those lucky bitches!
Reviewer: vampfan173 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
I just wanna know who is the unknown number and why is it important?
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