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Reviewer: scdeloney (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
i am enjoying it so far
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Keep reading and reviewing! I love getting review alerts! Selfish like that, I guess! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Sheaden (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
Well I could understand why you want to stay away from reading but the vegas story was about Edward and Bella and how she met him in vegas and got drunk and they eloped. Just like yours. I just thought I'd mention it so you don't make anyone mad.
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me. I've heard that its a popular premise. I definitly wouldn't want to make anyone mad, and I've got a few surprises in store that I hope make it different and enjoyable. I hope you'll keep reading.
Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
i like the story a lot!!! i know what you mean. i don't really like the two chapters that are the same scene but i am glad that you did it in this case. hearing both of their perspectives was definetly needed. can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes it is needed. Especially in character development, but once you get to know and understand the characters I think its pretty easy to figure out through the conversations what they're thinking without having to rehash the whole scene. I like to see the story move forward. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
So far it is really good...looking forward to the next chappie...
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying it! Next chapter shouldn't be much longer!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Lasha (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
Please more... Is this goin 2 be something like the movie What happens in Vegas????
Author's Response: More is coming soon! There's a glitch in the site so I'm gonna wait until that's fixed before I submit the next chapter! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: JacJac (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
just wanted to let you know that you can't read part two. Its all messed up!
Author's Response: I was told there was a glitch in the site. It should be repaired within 24 hours. I'll send you an IM when its fixed. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Scully (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
The text is just white squares
Author's Response: Yes, I know. There was apparently a glitch with the site. I was told it should be fixed within 24 hours. I'm keeping an eye on it and I'll send you a pm when I see that it's fixed. Thanks for reading! Or trying to at least!
Reviewer: scdeloney (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
you may want to repost this chapter it is messed up
Author's Response: Yes, there seems to be a problem with the site. Its being worked on though! Thanks for letting me know!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
Love the update, although I had to highlight everything to read it, I think the formatting may be off, because the backgroud to all the typing is white too....
:-)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, through the white bars at that, and reviewing! The white bar problem is in the works to be fixed. It is apparently a site problem.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
well now that we know whats going on in edwards head.. i can't wait to see what happens next and what they decide to do.
Author's Response: I love writing Edward's head!!! He's messed up and I dig it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: SecretlySeverus (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
wow, love the twist! But wait.. pregnancy?! Whose?! Can't wait to find out!!
Author's Response: I know, right!!!??? I can't wait to reveal it all! The reviews get me so excited! Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
Reviewer: canarydude (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
Edward's kinda harsh but I guess that can be expected, I hope that he doesn't offend, or is too cruel to Bella when he's going for the annulment/ divorce. I loved how he was aware of the connection that they had and I kinda want them to have some sexy times together sober so they can realise how perfect they would be for each other! Thank you.
Author's Response: Yep, Edward is a little assy! I have to say though, I have a little bit of a crush of Jerkward. Thanks for reading and reviewing and for the Thank You. You're VERY welcome! I love sharing my story!
Reviewer: 8th-cullen-is-here (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
ummm chapter 2 didnt work its like white lines all over the page
Author's Response: I know. My heart broke a little this morning when I saw the email from my beta telling me there was a glitch on the site and my chapter was one of its victims! She said it should be fixed within the next 24 hours, so hopefully sometime today it will be. If not, we're gonna get it fixed! I promise! I'll shoot you an email when its been resolved. Thanks for reviewing and reading (or at least trying to!)
Reviewer: Roosickle (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
Hey can you please check the page format. All I get are white lines instead of text which does show up if I highlight all the lines. This is the same on my hubby's computer and my sons as well. Thanks!
Author's Response: There was a glitch in the site. They are working to get it resolved. I'll send you an email when its resolved. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Can't wait to give you more!
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
man Im hooked from ch.1 but this chapter has no words :( sad!!!!!
Author's Response: Me too! White lines suck! It's a glitch in the site. If its not automatically resolved within the next 24 hours my beta and I are gonna see what we can do about it. Sorry!
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
Ahhhh so we're finally able to see a bit of Edward's character... Hmn... there's a dvd of their wedding, will you describe what was in there? And I wonder what their reactions will be when they see it? I can't wait for the next chapter, I 'm excited for it!
Author's Response: The DVD will make a future appearance. I'm excited too! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: jonjessie (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
There is like no text showing up. I liked the first chapter a lot. I am disappointed that chapter 2 isn't showing up!
Author's Response: Its a glitch with the site. I'll shoot you a pm when its all fixed. Should be soon! Someone said if you highlight the white bars, the text shows up. I haven't tried it so I'm not sure.
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
I have never been more jealous of a ficational character in my life.
PLEASE sign me up for that crooked smile and chiseled body in a towel. He could be a complete asshole for all I care. Yummy.
Author's Response: Great review! I love it! You so win the "review of the day award"! I laughed out loud! And while I'm signing you up, I'm going on that list too! Agreed on the asshole comment! Assward is sexy!
Reviewer: scdeloney (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
Good!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Keep reading! It's gonna get better! drama drama drama.... coming soon!
Reviewer: canarydude (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
I love Vegas! I've not actually been there but I love Vegas stories- getting married to strangers and all that, it's exciting times! I can't wait to see everyones reactions to the marriage. Thank you- I loved it!
Author's Response: LOL! I've never been there either, but I love the story line. I'm excited to post chapter 2 and hear the reaction! Its Edward's POV. I love writing his POV! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Love it!
Reviewer: Clairski (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
I like it! Can't wait to read more....
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Reviews make me so so happy! Chapter two should be up soon!
Reviewer: Lasha (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
I would love to read more... It is good so far.... Keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Next chapter will be up soon!!
Reviewer: 2SHOTS2BEERS82 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
its good.. it already has my full attention... i cant wait for more..im not a writer by any means. so dont take my word to seriously...but i like it alot :) good luck. is this edward going to be a jerk? he sounds a little cocky, at least from bella's point of view. but then again she did just wake up and doesnt really remember what happened/ . sorry. i am rambling :(
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