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Reviews For Vegas, Baby!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

ok well this is probably going to be the only time i'm going to say this.. but i'm glad that jake and bella are going to be friends again... i have a feeling that if something happened to him that bella would be a mess and bad things would have happened... anyway... i really hope tha edward and bella figure things out. also in the summary in the begininning there was a pregnancy mentioned.. is it going to be bella and edward's baby? keep writing =]



Author's Response:

I'm so glad I got that one time statement out of you.  LOL!  I think friends as opposed to lovers is a good thing when it comes to Jake.  Pregnancy.  Yes, I do believe we're gonna see some drama in the form of a Vegas Baby!  heehee!

Thanks so much for letting me know what you thought about this chapter!  I Love Reading Them!

Reviewer: rugger (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

oh mannnnnnnn. 

update sooon I hope! I can't wait for them to see each other again, and SOBER!



Author's Response:

I know!  I'm dying to smuuuussshhhh them all together!

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

Really happy that Jake is going to be o.k.  I don't think Bella would have been able to handle her feelings of guilt if he wasn't.

Still wondering where the "guys" are...Are they going to show up @ Bella's?

Some questions answered (Rebecca) but more questions still exist.

Ready for more when you have it!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad your pleased with the Jake situation.

The guys are gonna fill you in on what's going on with them in the next chapter.

I'm thrilled that you still have questions.  That means I still have story!

MUAAAHHH!!!!  Thanks a bunch!

Reviewer: lolipoper (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

I'm glad everything happened the way it did.  It wasn't really what I was expecting, it was better :)



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks so so so much!  I'm really glad you liked it!

Reviewer: hmccrary (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

Loved the new chapter....can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Shouldn't be too long of a wait!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

Thanks for updating- and thanks for squishing the Jake drama. :-)



Author's Response:

Your welcome!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

I was not expecting Rebecca and I got nervous when Jacob started talking...but that turned out good.  I hope Rose can tell her some things to make her stop and think....I guess we'll get some Bella and Edward time soon???



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'm glad you liked how Jacob reacted.  Rose will offer some insight in Chapter 11.  Up next is BxE time!!  I can't wait!  It'll be EPOV so that's always fun.  I really think you all are gonna love it though.  We'll also have some Carlisle and Esme joining in on the fun!

Stay tuned and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MeMyselfandI67 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

I really like this story and can't wait to see what happens.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm thrilled that you're reading and taking the time to review!

***hugs***

Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

Glad Jake just wanted to be friends and this didnt become a screwed up love triangle. Good wrap.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I felt like I owed you all a chapter without a cliffy! 

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

I am so glad that Jake is not still hung up on Bella...YAY!!!  I have a feeling that Emmett was not the only sober one at the wedding....Really loved the new chappie and I am glad that Bella stuck up for herself and put Rebecca in her place...Yeah she probably thinks she is protecting her brother but still that was totally uncalled for...She doesn't know Bella, what makes her think that Rose and Alice doesn't know her...Her giving them advice on Bella...UGH!!!  Looking forward to the next one!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm so happy that you're pleased with this chapter.  I was worried how you all would take the Jake thing.  So far I seem to be getting happy reviews!  Thrilled about that!

I'll try to have 10 up soon. 

Reviewer: Louise-Francoise (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

This was such a great chapter....and no cliffhangers!!happy days...



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Yes, no cliffy!  It is a happy day!

***hugs***

Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

I am totally happy with how the 'talk' between Jacob and Bella went!  I loved that he laughed until he cried when she told him about Veags! :)  I am also happy that she told off his sister and that he is backing Bella in her reaction to his sister!  What a snot!  I mean, Bella isn't supposed to fell bad, he was her best friend for crying out loud!  Oh and way to go Bella in telling Rebecca off!  She let her say her peace and then was very adult about her retort!  Hopefully things with Edward soften up, because Bella doesn't need anymore heartache! :(



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that chapter made you happy!  I debated on where to take it, and in all honesty, I have a little love for Jacob.  I didn't want to write him as that guy that you see so often in fanfics.  The guy who pawns over Bella and tries to come between her and Edward.  The Jake chapter was over for Bella from the beginning of my story.  Friends, yes.  Getting back together, no. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Masen (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

Great chapter.  I like seeing B stand up for herself.  Things with Jacob turned out far better than I expected they would.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I really debated causing some drama with Jake, but Bella already has so much drama coming her way.  Didn't want to push her over the ledge!

You totally own me, by the way!

MUAAAHHH!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

Well, I'm sad she is pushing through with the annullment so quick..I'm wondering what information Rose has......



Author's Response:

Don't be sad.  There will be a few "bumps" in the road on that.  Chapter 10 will reveal the first of them. 

Thanks for reviewing!  I love seeing the same readers always reviewing!  I heart you all!

Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

I liked it. Im ready to move past jake and on to the laughs of this impromptu marriage though :) Vegas is one crazy place and this story is sooo not that off from what people come back saying LOL



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  I'm ready to get back to ExB too!  No worries on that.  Ch 10 has some interaction with them and it's good I think!

Thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

I'm happy with the way things turned out. I'm proud of Bella for standing up to Becca and telling jake the truth and accepting responsibility for her own actions. I'm glad that Jake was so mature and basically freed Bella from her guilt. Jake's a good guy here.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I didn't want to write Jake as a bad guy.  I know it seemed that way in the beginning but he had some life altering things happen with the wreck.  They'll be friends, he'll be around some, but not to interfere with what's going on with BxE.  I was getting some flack for Bella being that weak girl.  I gave her a backbone.  I'm really happy with the reaction to that.

So glad to see you're still reading and reviewing!  Much love to you!

Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

Okay, first of all, I'm happy that you updated a few days after the last chapter. That means you won't let us wait too long, am I right?

Aaaand here's what I thought: I'm surprised with Jacob's reaction. :)) I told you I really dislike him for some inexplicable reason, I have been ready to read some Jacob freaking out and going apeshit because of what Bella's done... but then he just laughed!! Oh well. At least he isn't asking her to get together again. But I totally get the 'going back to being friends' thing he's offering; they're better off as just friends, and they both know it. 

Now I can't wait for an Edward & Bella chapter, even if they're gonna be talking about legal stuff and whatnot... at least they'll be interacting! Hehe. I just want them in the same place soon! :)



Author's Response:

You can thank my beta for the quick update.  She rocked this one out!  I never have any intention of making you guys wait!  I'm as excited to read the reactions as you are to get it!  No worries there!

I hope that you weren't disappointed that Jake didn't lose it.  I debated doing that, but I'm just so anxious to get back to the ExB stuff.  Plus, there is probably more drama planned than I'm gonna know what to do with.  I felt it would help me get where I'm going a little quicker if I just let him be ok.

Chapter 10 should put a smile on your face if you're looking for ExB interaction.  I love the next chapter and I hope you do too.  I'll get it up as soon as I can.  Just a little tweaking left to do!

I so feel you on getting them in the same place soon!  At least on the same damn coast!  I don't know what I was thinking when I sent him off to NY.  The time differences are posing issues for me!

Thanks so much for letting me know what you think.  Reviews make me SUPA HAPPY!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia

Thanks for updating! :-)



Author's Response: thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia

So I just found this story and spent all day reading it :D hehe. Addicted? Yes. Definitely. LOVES IT!!



Author's Response: i'm so glad you found my story. thanks so much for reading and taking the time to say hi. i love reviews and always reply. i try to put a chap up weekly, so i hope You'll keep reading and letting me know what you think. thanks again. jen

Reviewer: 2SHOTS2BEERS82 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia

Great chapter!!! i can't wait for him to stop being suck a fucken cocky prick and realize that he likes/loves/has feelings for Bella..i guess i'm just impatient... but i loooooove the story...i really do :) cant wait for the next chapter!!!



Author's Response: your not the only impatient one! i have a hard time writing because i'm ready to get to the good stuff. unfortunately It'll be a minute. thank you so much for being loyal to this story. i always look forward to your review.

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia

Sexy chapter, very nice!  I guess we should assume that Edward decides to visit Bella.  Wonder how he'll react to the idea that she's supposedly married to Jake?  I bet he gets jealous and then annoyed at himself for feeling jealous.  Can we have an update soon please, cos I'm really enjoying this fic.



Author's Response: oh thank you so much! i'm so glad you enjoyed it. i've got a few things up my sleeve that might surprise you. please keep letting me know what you think. i love reading your thoughts. i'll update as soon as i can.

Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia

OMG no condom?????  Can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response: oh i can't wait to give you more. thanks so much for reading and reviewing! ****hugs**** jen

Reviewer: atmachine (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia

i'm going to assume that edwardd does decide to return the bracelet himself or thats just my wanting them to get together. oh well i guess i'll see. i love this story and can't wait to read your next chapter! :)



Author's Response: i have a plan for the bracelet. i hope you love it! thanks for reading and always reviewing! seriously- it makes my day to hear your thoughts!

Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia

i think edward is being an ass. he just is. at least emmett and jasper have their heads in the right place.



Author's Response: yeah i know. but at least he's not such an ass internally. It'll all come together. promise. i love em and Jasper too.

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia

As usual, I adore: (a) Edward's POV, (b) your writing :D, and  (c) no cliffies, so this chapter was a real treat!

Please update soon!



Author's Response: and as usual i adore a) the fact that your reading b) your review and the nice things you say c) just you in general:) thanks so much! reviewers completely own me!

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