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Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell
I can't wait for the next chapter when Edward finally gets to talk to wifey!!!
Author's Response: thanks so much! next chapter coming soon.
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell
Emmett got at his phone, didn't he? LMAO
OMG,, poor Edward, he was trying to keep it quiet, but something told me that wouldn't happen.
Wow... Angela... LOL Well, he is mighty fine & hard to pass up.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And who could pass up Emmett!
Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell
awwww. when will they see each other again? angela the hussy...love it!
Author's Response: It'll be a minute on them seeing each other, but next chap has some interaction so it'll give you a little taste.
Thanks!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell
You couldn't have wrote that chapter better if you tried! I LMAO, I couldn't help it. There were so many things going on at once, it was awesome. Anglea of all people, molesting Edward under the table was genious! My eyes were watering by the time I was done reading this. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! This was the second version I wrote, and I'm so glad it went over well.
Thanks!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell
Man... Bella is one lucky bitch that she didn't get narked out to her friends and family like Edward did. None of her friends would of spilled the beans to Charlie like that. Not that it would of mattered... Charlie would of just blamed it all on Edward anyways lol.
I was impressed with Rose and Alice. But I was suprised that Rose got so mad when Edward said that what happened with Bella wasn't anything special... because that pretty much the exact same thing Bella has been saying too. No one yells at her when she talks about the annulment, or bitches at her about how Edward is a good person and she would be an idiot not to stick with him.
But... thats the way the cookie crumbles I guess ;)
I'm excited for this phone call. I hope Bella gets jealous when Edward tells her about Angela... maybe that will help convince her that she does have actual feelings for him.
Author's Response: Well, hello again! It's so good to hear your thoughts. Actually, it was Rose who slipped at dinner and let the cat out of the bag on the marriage, and they haven't seen Bella's family yet, so ya never know.
Rose and Alice will probably always take up for Bella. It's just who they are. Rose does quite a good job of putting Bella in her place, too though.
I can't wait to get the phone call chapter up. I'm working on it and trying to figure out how far I want to go with it. Not sure what my stopping point will be.
Thanks so much and I hope to hear from you some more!
Jen
Reviewer: emmettsbutterfly (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
PS : I love long chapters like Kirsty Allie loves root beer floats, also I am uber excited about the upcoming texts!!
Author's Response: LOL! I love a fat kid/cake reference! And adding Kirstie Allie in just makes it better!
Reviewer: emmettsbutterfly (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
This was a fabulous chapter as ALWAYS!! Jasper was spot on.I can't wait to hear more from you and thank you so much for the shout out!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I've been waiting to hear what you thought about it. The next chapter has been giving me some issues, but I promise I'm working on it and I'll get it to you guys as soon as I can. No prob on the shout out! I love giving them to those who motivate me!
Thanks so much!
Jen
Reviewer: edbellafan (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
Ahem....(clears throat...) Ummmmmm....Jen???? Say, I was wondering....well....never mind....ok...here goes.....
ireallywantchapter12andiamdyingaslowdeathuntilireaditsopleasepostitnowplease
Anyhoo....that's all. Just sayin. You know.....
Pretty please? :o)
Author's Response: LMAO! Love you! I submitted it to my beta yesterday so as soon as she gets to it, It'll be up. Can't wait to hear what you think about it. Did i mention the love i have for you? Oh and by the way- love you! Thanks so much- Jen
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
Okay Jen, here is a big nudge.
Where is my chapter 12? It's been more than a week... Heh. ;p
Author's Response: Haha! I submitted it yesterday, so it should be up soon! Thanks for the nudge!
Reviewer: avaesyn (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
i like jasper's advice.
Author's Response: Thank you! I just love Jasper.
Reviewer: Telulah (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
I LOVE LOVE long chapters! thank you! Although it would have been nice to have Bella at the party I think it's better that she's not because I think it's too soon for that. You made a good decision. I'm enjoying their texting. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you were okay with how it worked out. Thanks for trusting me on it. It'll all work out for them. I loved writing the texts. You'll be seeing more of that. Thanks again!
Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
I don't think it was right for Bella to be at the party...How would they explain her to Esme and Carlisle??? Then they would find out everything and it would be blown out of the water...Love that she is finally remembering everything even though it is coming to her in dreams...just like in the Twilight series..awesome loved the way you did that....Looking forward to the party....Can't wait to see the IMPACT that Bella makes there...hehehehe
Author's Response: Yeah, I just couldn't justify her going. She would never do that. Thank you so much for the compliment on the chapter. It went over better than I thought it would. Next chapter is going to my beta today. Shouldn't be too much of a wait!
Thanks for being a loyal reader!
Much Love,
Jen
Reviewer: blovesvampires (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
This was a really good chapter, I don't think I commented this story before.
Well, if I haven't I would just like to say that it is a really great story and I'm hoping Edward and Bella realise they are madly in love with each other soon !
Keep it up ! :) xx
Author's Response: thank you very much! i'm glad you're enjoying it. i really appreciate you taking a moment to let me know!
Reviewer: LittleMissSwan (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
Great chapter...is Bella gona go to the party.....i hope she does!!
im kinda surprised that Bella wasnt more angry with rose for letting her get married!
Cant wait for the next chapter..love this story!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think the only reason Bella wasn't mad was because they were drinking. That chapter was so long, so I decided against playing out a huge argument with them.
Thanks for loving it and next chapter shouldn't be too long!
Reviewer: Alanna (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
Awww, "He's happier after he talks to you...", how cute :)
And I guess It makes more sense for her not to be at the party, but I'm sure Rose or Alice or someone is going to bring her up at least and his parents will get what's going on.
I wonder when they actually are going to see each other again...
Author's Response: I love Jasper!
I just wasn't able to justify her going. Bella will definitly be causing a commotion at the party even though she won't physically be there.
They'll be seeing each other soon.
Thank you for always reviewing! It makes my day!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
I agree, Bella being at the party would be so un-Bella. But, dare I say that her non presence may make one fucktard unhappy and maybe stop his self denial? Cant wait for your next update!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm working on the chapter now, and Edward is having a really hard time! I'm so excited for y'all to read it! Should be finished soon and I'll post it just as soon as it's done.
So glad you're reading! Love your reviews!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 10 Communication
Oh, Im hooked! I effing howled reading this chap. So funny and clever. Four weeks! Enough time to find out if Fucktard's sperm found her fertile egg! Oh, the horrors! I like your Bella. Your Jerkward, not so much. Just yet, lol!
Author's Response: Yay! i'm so glad you're liking it! i think four weeks will be sufficient time! jerkward will be coming along a little in the next chap. He'll still be a little assy, but he's gonna make progress. thanks so much for reading! ur reviews rock! much love!
Reviewer: Druid726 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
Missed the symbolism want B-day party chapter!!!
Author's Response: You actually didn't miss the symbolism. That was my mistake. I should have used the word foreshadowing. It was actually the fifth spot. I was so excited by the time I got to the end note that I didn't really think, I guess. Birthday party chapter is in the works. Shouldn't be too long!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
***hugs***
Jen
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings
Is she gonna get pregnant? Guh, hope not. She was so drunk and may not have used a condom every single time! Glad to read that Jake was ok with what happened to her.
Author's Response: Yea, they were wasted and didn't use a condom every time, so we'll see how that works out for them. She will be pregnant. I hope you're hooked enough by now that you keep reading even though that's part of the story.
Please stick around and keep reading!
**hugs**
Jen
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 5 Best Friend Status
I just started reading your ff. Hate fucktard right now. I like your story. Hope you'll write longer chaps.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're reading! Don't worry the chapters will be getting longer. And yeah, fuckward is exactly what he is at this point. Things are gonna change though. I hope you'll continue to let me know what you think!
Jen
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
Great chapter, loved the dreams/flashbacks :)
Aw, I loved the way Jasper said that Edward was happier after he communicated with Bella. That was sweet. I knew there was no way she could go to his party though, that would've been awkward for everyone. But I'm sure they will see each other soon :)
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have a whole lot of love for Jasper right now. He's always my go to guy for something sensitive. It shouldn't be too much longer before E/B see one another. I'm so ready to get them on the same coast!
Reviewer: niniehtwilight08 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
Absolutly loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
Loved it!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 10 Communication
I'm loving this story so far - I can't wait to read about the dinner party. Emmett cracks me up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I love Emmett, too. He's easy to write as funny.
Thanks for reviewing!
Jen
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
Ok so when are they going to see each other again or even talk officially? I'm ready for some drama or action here.
Author's Response: It's coming soon. I'm ready for it too!
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